This isn’t my story it’s my sisters, but I’ve got free lessons at 6th form so I’ve got more time then my sister (cullen171717) I’ve helped to improve some of it, but the ideas are my sisters. Let me know what you think. It’s set about 40-50 years after breaking dawn ends.
Part 1.
I’m bored. I told myself for the thousandth time. There isn’t anything on TV, Edwards gone hunting with Emmett and Jasper, and I can’t find any of the others anywhere. Renesmee has gone off with Jacob on a second honeymoon to the Amazon to visit Zafrina and Senna.
Alice appeared out of thin air, holding a hairbrush and grinned as she looked at my face. If Alice thinks she can do my hair then she’s got another thing coming. It was times like these when I wished Renesmee was here to preoccupy Alice’s longing for long hair...
“What’s this about?” I groaned.
“Bella I’m doing your hair. Now come on straighten up your back” Alice demanded “and park your bum on that chair” she pointed to a stool on the other side of the room. If Emmett was here he would do his impression of parking a car. I sighed, my head back and looked up at the ceiling. I started to make my way towards the stool, but my phone buzzed saving me from the dreaded brush and Alice’s never ending excitement. I flipped it open it informed me that it was Renesmee or Jacob calling.
“Hello” I answered nervously. Normally Nessie called in the evening.
“Mom” Renesmee was crying... what for? Charlie?
She said the one thing I didn’t want to hear. I sank to my knees.
“His been taken to hospital this morning, Jacobs just been on the phone to his dad, I thought you should know.” Renesmee sniffed and before I could ask what for, Nessie carried on. “He fell down the stairs and now he can’t remember a thing ... what’s it called...” I heard Nessie click her fingers impatiently “amnesia”
It was at that minuet before I could say anything; I found the phone crushed to pieces. I dropped it to the floor feeling more numb then when Edward left me when i was human. Thinking of him he walked into the living room all exited, only to stop dead in the door. It was a surprise that Emmett and Jasper didn’t crash into him. Edward walked over to me with Esme, Carlisle, Rosalie, Emmett, Jasper and Alice behind him. Alice must have just got her vision of Charlie because she let out a gasp of fear.
“Bella what’s the matter?” Edward asked anxiously.
I let my shield down, heft it right out my brain so that it wouldn’t protected me anymore. And shouted with my mind in to Edwards.
“his got amnesia.”
Edward looked confused “who?” he asked out loud?
“Charlie” I whispered with my mind just before it snapped right back.
Edward flinted towards me in less the 3.2 of a second and he had me in his glorious arms to hug me really tight like he was trying to get the horrible thoughts out my head.
“Edward what has happened?” Carlisle asked concerned.
I gave up trying to be strong and indicated that Edward should let me go. He did so I ran into the trees. Anywhere but here, anywhere but here, I thought over and over again. It was all just too much. To handle at the moment. The house was far behind me when I heard Edward say.
“Charlie’s got amnesia, he fell down the stairs last night.”
“Well his going to die anyway. So why not now?” Emmett laughed at his joke but no one joined in.
I shrieked a growl and it echoed around the forest, back towards the house.
“oh god. I think she heard” Esme said worriedly.
Part 1.
I’m bored. I told myself for the thousandth time. There isn’t anything on TV, Edwards gone hunting with Emmett and Jasper, and I can’t find any of the others anywhere. Renesmee has gone off with Jacob on a second honeymoon to the Amazon to visit Zafrina and Senna.
Alice appeared out of thin air, holding a hairbrush and grinned as she looked at my face. If Alice thinks she can do my hair then she’s got another thing coming. It was times like these when I wished Renesmee was here to preoccupy Alice’s longing for long hair...
“What’s this about?” I groaned.
“Bella I’m doing your hair. Now come on straighten up your back” Alice demanded “and park your bum on that chair” she pointed to a stool on the other side of the room. If Emmett was here he would do his impression of parking a car. I sighed, my head back and looked up at the ceiling. I started to make my way towards the stool, but my phone buzzed saving me from the dreaded brush and Alice’s never ending excitement. I flipped it open it informed me that it was Renesmee or Jacob calling.
“Hello” I answered nervously. Normally Nessie called in the evening.
“Mom” Renesmee was crying... what for? Charlie?
She said the one thing I didn’t want to hear. I sank to my knees.
“His been taken to hospital this morning, Jacobs just been on the phone to his dad, I thought you should know.” Renesmee sniffed and before I could ask what for, Nessie carried on. “He fell down the stairs and now he can’t remember a thing ... what’s it called...” I heard Nessie click her fingers impatiently “amnesia”
It was at that minuet before I could say anything; I found the phone crushed to pieces. I dropped it to the floor feeling more numb then when Edward left me when i was human. Thinking of him he walked into the living room all exited, only to stop dead in the door. It was a surprise that Emmett and Jasper didn’t crash into him. Edward walked over to me with Esme, Carlisle, Rosalie, Emmett, Jasper and Alice behind him. Alice must have just got her vision of Charlie because she let out a gasp of fear.
“Bella what’s the matter?” Edward asked anxiously.
I let my shield down, heft it right out my brain so that it wouldn’t protected me anymore. And shouted with my mind in to Edwards.
“his got amnesia.”
Edward looked confused “who?” he asked out loud?
“Charlie” I whispered with my mind just before it snapped right back.
Edward flinted towards me in less the 3.2 of a second and he had me in his glorious arms to hug me really tight like he was trying to get the horrible thoughts out my head.
“Edward what has happened?” Carlisle asked concerned.
I gave up trying to be strong and indicated that Edward should let me go. He did so I ran into the trees. Anywhere but here, anywhere but here, I thought over and over again. It was all just too much. To handle at the moment. The house was far behind me when I heard Edward say.
“Charlie’s got amnesia, he fell down the stairs last night.”
“Well his going to die anyway. So why not now?” Emmett laughed at his joke but no one joined in.
I shrieked a growl and it echoed around the forest, back towards the house.
“oh god. I think she heard” Esme said worriedly.
We All Want The Same Thing!
I personal would like to just speak my mind. To all of you don't want her to be Jane, I guess I understand. But, I like Dakota Fanning. She's a great actress and I think she'd be great. Here are some reasons why I want he to be Jane.
1. She's been in TONS of movies, so she has experience.
2. She looks the role (In my opinion.)
3. She in "Push" so I would think she has some experience with things like New Moon (and the rest).
4. She's always the good-girl. For once she should be bad.
Those are only some that I can think of at the moment.
If you don't want her to be, I respect that. Also, if you think that, leave a comment saying why or why not please!
Also, if you actually read this:
Thanks!
1. She's been in TONS of movies, so she has experience.
2. She looks the role (In my opinion.)
3. She in "Push" so I would think she has some experience with things like New Moon (and the rest).
4. She's always the good-girl. For once she should be bad.
Those are only some that I can think of at the moment.
If you don't want her to be, I respect that. Also, if you think that, leave a comment saying why or why not please!
Also, if you actually read this:
Thanks!
1. He tells her to stay away from him.
2. She says shes not afraid of him.
3. He lets her cry on his shirt and ruin it.
4. He just wants her to be happy.
5. She trusts him.
6. He didn't kill her
7. When the car threatened to crush her all he could think was "Not her"
8. The lion fell in love with the lamb.
9. He left her only for her protection.
10. He won't end her life for her.
11. He took her to the prom because he did't want her to miss anything.
12. He feels very protective of her.
13. He risked blowing the family secret to save her.
14. He is her "Prisoner".
15. He dazzles her.
16. She doesn't care that he is a "Killer".
17. He sayed with her in the Hospital
18. He watches her sleep.
19. She always forgives him.
20. He dove her home when she felt sick.
2. She says shes not afraid of him.
3. He lets her cry on his shirt and ruin it.
4. He just wants her to be happy.
5. She trusts him.
6. He didn't kill her
7. When the car threatened to crush her all he could think was "Not her"
8. The lion fell in love with the lamb.
9. He left her only for her protection.
10. He won't end her life for her.
11. He took her to the prom because he did't want her to miss anything.
12. He feels very protective of her.
13. He risked blowing the family secret to save her.
14. He is her "Prisoner".
15. He dazzles her.
16. She doesn't care that he is a "Killer".
17. He sayed with her in the Hospital
18. He watches her sleep.
19. She always forgives him.
20. He dove her home when she felt sick.
Distributor: Summit Entertainment Release Date: November 21, 2008
Genre: Romance Running Time: 2 hrs. 0 min.
MPAA Rating: PG-13 Production Budget: $37 million
TOTAL LIFETIME GROSSES
Domestic: $138,552,000 86.7%
+ Foreign: $21,325,749 13.3%
= Worldwide: $159,877,749
DOMESTIC SUMMARY
Opening Weekend: $69,637,740
(3,419 theaters, $20,368 average)
% of Total Gross: 50.3%
Widest Release: 3,620 theaters
In Release: 17 days / 2.4 weeks
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I got into the house.I knew that it was worse than james I held my Drink.
Edward We need to be prepared.I could train with Jasper he wasin the army before he was turned. He could train us both me and Buffy .I held my cross bow "Hmm"I oiled it .
I saw that my tojo blades were getting rusty
I decided to Grab all my slaying stuff.
More avanced Sliver stakes but doesn't work as well as holy water and fire filled Cross.
I ran down to the basement.I felt pain from another.It was Jazz.He was reading "gone With The Wind".
Oh god why "jazz please stop i can feel your hurt."
huh?
It's one of my abilities now stop felling sorry for your self and help us didn't you hear from edward theres a new evil in town!
Edward We need to be prepared.I could train with Jasper he wasin the army before he was turned. He could train us both me and Buffy .I held my cross bow "Hmm"I oiled it .
I saw that my tojo blades were getting rusty
I decided to Grab all my slaying stuff.
More avanced Sliver stakes but doesn't work as well as holy water and fire filled Cross.
I ran down to the basement.I felt pain from another.It was Jazz.He was reading "gone With The Wind".
Oh god why "jazz please stop i can feel your hurt."
huh?
It's one of my abilities now stop felling sorry for your self and help us didn't you hear from edward theres a new evil in town!
