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Chapter 2: Hallelujah

As Jake and I stepped towards our family and friends we were separated and handed off amongst the crowd. My parents found me first and kissed me then I was passed off to all of my grandparent’s aunts and uncles, the various members of the other covens who were basically our extended family and then I met up with my new father in law. He smiled at me warmly I leaned over to hug him and he kissed my cheek. “Welcome to the family Nessie,” he grinned. “Thanks Bil-" he interrupted me jokingly, “Shouldn’t that be dad?” I smiled at him, “Thanks dad,” I giggled. “That was very thoughtful how you involved Sarah in the ceremony, thank you.” He offered. I looked at him and smiled sadly, “I was glad to. I only wish that I could have met her. I don't feel like we have done enough to honor her.” I felt an arm slide around my waist as I looked into Jacob’s happy face. “She would have loved you. You remind me of her a bit," Billy continued, “She was very friendly and thoughtful. People adored her.” I felt myself blush, “Don’t get the blushing bride started dad, she will never stop.” Jake joked. Billy took Jake’s hand, “Congratulations son, you have picked yourself a fine young woman," Jake leaned over to hug his father. His twin sisters came up to us next. His sister Rachel was walking hand in hand with Paul, a diamond ring glimmered on her finger. “Congratulations,” she told us shyly as she gave me a hug. I smiled at her, “Congratulations to you too. Have you guys set a date yet?” She shook her head in annoyance, “We can’t seem to agree.” Jake and I both snickered at that, knowing how difficult Paul can be. Rebecca and her husband came up to us next. She hugged me as well. Jake smiled off into the distance, “Oh good. Amore grabbed a little something that I stashed for you.” I looked at him in puzzlement as Seth, Amore, Nahuel and Leah came up to congratulate us. “Congrats guys,” Seth offered. “Thanks Seth,” I said. He looked at me in mock aggravation, “how many times do I have to tell you that is UNCLE Seth?” Amore and Leah smacked him in the back of the head at the same time. I looked at him through narrowed eyes as I giggled, “Seth, I am not going to call you Uncle just because my grandfather is married to your mother so cut it out.” Jake shook his head at him, “Give it up man, she’s not budging. Seth rubbed the back of his head, which I knew didn’t truly hurt he was just trying to be funny, as he teased me again over it, “Nessie I’m going to have to talk with your parents about teaching you to respect your elders.” Amore rolled her eyes at him, “Come on funny guy lets go dance.” She handed Jake a gift bag, "This was the only way I could smuggle them out of the house," and then she turned to me “I hope that this makes up for when I ratted you out about the shoes this morning,” she said with a wink. Jake and I stepped off to the side and I opened it to find my favorite pair of sneakers. I laughed out loud, “How did you know?” I asked him, “I know my wife very well," he smiled down at me. I quickly slipped them on and chucked my Manolos behind a bush.My dress covered my minor infraction completely. It was perfect timing a few moments later, Aunt Alice came over and told us to start heading over to the other side of the yard to lead the party over smoothly. We started with the father daughter dance. My father twirled me around the floor effortlessly to Debussy’s Claire de Lune. It was a favorite of mine and my parents. He looked at me with the same mixture of happiness and sadness that he had while I was getting ready, “I just cannot believe it,” he finally uttered. I looked at him with my head to the side. He continued, “It is so odd that if I close my eyes it still feels like you are my little girl.” I smiled at him, “I thought that I just told you that I always will be,” I chided him gently. He sighed, “I know, I just can’t seem to hear it enough.” I smiled at him as I kissed his cheek and laid my head on his shoulder. “I love you daddy, thank you for my beautiful wedding.” He smiled at me, “thank you for all of the beautiful memories that you have given me.” As the song came to an end we stepped off of the dance floor so that Jacob and his older sister Rebecca could dance. Since Jake’s mother had died years ago, we figured that his oldest sister would be an appropriate dance partner for him. As I passed him on the dance floor we both stopped and kissed each other amongst the klinking sound of the forks against the glasses we allowed our dance partners to pull us away from each other. Rebecca and my father chuckled. “Save it for later you two, " Rebecca groaned. Jake turned to his sister seriously, "Are you sure that you are up for this?" She nodded hesitantly.They began to dance to Sarah McLachlan's "Angel". I felt the tears welling in my eyes but I had to be strong for my husband. Jake and I wanted to have an homage to his mother, pictures of her and their family played on a projector screen behind them. I could tell that it was emotionally taxing for the entire Black family, but it was important for her to be remembered on such an important day in Jake's life. As their dance wrapped up Jake slowly led his sister to her husband. She wasn't crying but her eyes were red, and she walked weakly. Jake kissed her cheek and whispered something to her, she nodded. He stood back up and then turned and walked over to me with his hand held out. It was our turn. I finally had my husband all to myself. Even though there were dozens of eyes on us it didn’t matter. I forgot that there was anyone else but us. We danced to Jeff Buckley’s Hallelujah.The son was completely down at this point and the candles that covered the yard and that lined the dance floor gave it an air of magic. I felt as though I was in another world wrapped tightly in the safe haven of Jake’s arms. His topaz eyes glistened as I lost myself in them. I felt his hands wrap tighter around the small of my back. “So Mrs. Black, how are you enjoying your reception,” he asked as a smile played on his lips. I grinned at him, “right about now it is absolutely perfect.” I murmured. The sound of flatware against stemware chimed throughout the room and we gladly obliged. Our mouths slowly found each other as he kissed me ever so gently. He pulled back and looked at me gravely, “I meant every word. I will love you forever, I will do the best that I can for you Renesmee.” I looked into his serious eyes and touched his face. “I know you will, and I will do my best for you as well. I have pictured this day for so long now.” I sighed contentedly. He looked at me curiously, “Is it just how you pictured it?” I smiled, “It’s even better.” I placed my hands on his cheeks and let my mind wander to my fantasies of our wedding. Then I switched to my memories of his face as I walked down the aisle to him and when we exchanged our vows.” He pulled me closer, ‘What else have you thought of?” He asked huskily I leaned over and kissed him while my hands stayed on his cheek, as my dreams for our future played out in both of our minds like a movie screen. I pictured our honeymoon, our first home, our first holiday together and then our first baby; a little girl with dark curls, russet skin and deep brown eyes wide with curiousity. He broke away and looked at me with surprise and happiness shining in his eyes. “You want children?” I looked at him in amazement, “Of course I do, I have dreamt of our baby for months now. Don’t you?” He laughed, “Are you kidding me nothing would make me happier, I just haven’t thought about it.” He kissed me again, and that was the end of the discussion. The song ended and we were again pulled off in separate directions. Uncle Emmett grabbed my hand, “Sorry Jake but I haven’t had the chance to congratulate my niece yet.” Jake nodded and smiled at me privately, I felt my face flush as Uncle Emmett chuckled. “You aren’t ever going to grow out of that huh Nessie?” he teased as he whirled me around the dance floor so fast that I thought I might throw up. As the song ended he scooped me up and kissed my cheek, “I am so proud of you, look at you all grown up and married.” I grinned at him, “I might be a grown up but that doesn’t mean I have to act like one, arm wrestling. NOW.” I growled at him playfully. I heard a gasp behind me and saw Aunt Alice; her face pale, “What is it?” I asked frantically, “what do you see?” I whispered. She looked at me as though I were a total idiot. “It wasn’t a vision Nessie it was my horror at hearing my niece offering to ARM WRESTLE in an OSCAR DE LA RENTA are you crazy?” I burst out laughing at my aunt who looked mad enough to pound my Uncle who was at least 2 feet taller than her into the ground. He held his hands up as she advanced on him menacingly, “Emmett so help me…” I ducked out of the way and when I was a safe distance I turned around and Jake was once again at my side as he gracefully led me back into his arms. We managed to sneak away into the night. I was careful not to soil my dress on the ground for fear of what my Aunt would do. Jake looked at me seriously, “Did you really mean it Renesmee? You truly want children?” I nodded. He kissed me then and looked at me and shook his head, “it would be quite a child wouldn’t it, do you think it’s possible,” he asked in wonder. I smiled, “anything is possible,” I said in response and then kissed him. Aunt Alice popped up at my side again. “Renesmee, Jacob cut that out we have a cake to serve.” Jake rolled his eyes and I whispered to him, “Let’s just humor her it’s almost over.” “I heard that!” She hissed. After the cake Aunt Alice got everyone’s attention so that we could do the garter. Jake smiled at me mischievously and I felt my face get warm for about the millionth time in one day as he put my leg on his shoulder and made a huge show of getting the garter off. My face was in my hands for most of it. There was a shriek of anger and I looked over into my Aunt Alice’s flashing eyes and realized that my sneaker secret was out. The entire crowd burst into laughter. Uncle Emmett laughed so hard he fell off of his chair. My mother controlled her laughter enough to be able to soothe my aunt. Jake looked up at me, “Oops.” I shrugged, “She’ll get over it. Um, but I think we better get the shoes out of the bush before she finds them” Another groan broke out, “I think it’s too late,” Jake winced. Sure enough my aunt was staring me down holding muddy Manolos. Jake stood up and the single guys lined up behind him as he flung the garter into the air. Seth emerged, victoriously holding it in the air like a trophy. I heard my mother, “See Alice, maybe Amore is next, and she likes fancy shoes. You will get to do this again.” Seth smiled and then the smile left his face when he saw my Uncle Emmett glaring at him. Seth started to walk away when a smile broke out on my Uncle’s face, “I was just joking man, I know it’s coming. You don’t have to be worried of what I think it’s Rose you will have to answer to,” he winked at Seth. Just then Zafrina caught up with me. “So I will see you in a few days then?” I nodded at her excitedly, “I can’t wait!” Before I could say anything else to her my husband grabbed my arm. “One more dance,” he pleaded. I conceded, "Since when does Jacob Black like to dance?" I teased. he laughed, "Since it is the only time that I can have with you." As we danced I felt the day catching up with me so I laid my head on his chest, and noticed how the candles and the star-filled sky seemed to be one and the same. He kissed my forehead, “Tired princess?” I smiled up at him, “I can’t believe you still call me that.” He chuckled, “What else should I call you my old lady? You will always be my princess.” I leaned up to kiss him but my aunt Alice was right behind me, “Come on you have to get changed.” I waved her off and kissed Jake instead I could hear her foot tapping. “Ok, this is obnoxiously déjà vu of you. I seem to remember having the same problem at your mother and father’s wedding. They almost missed the plane…which you will too if you don’t move it.” Jake groaned in annoyance as I pulled back. “We have the next two weeks all to ourselves,” I reminded him. He smiled and unwillingly let me go. Aunt Alice and I went into the house where my mother and Amore were waiting to help change me out of my dress. I reached for the jeans and tee shirt that I had left in Amore’s room and my aunt sucked in a breath, “Oh no you don’t, especially not after the shoe incident.” She said I turned to my aunt, "What?” She looked horrified, “you do realize that we will all be taking pictures of you up until you are gone right? Obviously you cannot wear jeans” She pulled out a white sheath dress with a matching brocade coat. There was a black satin ribbon that tied around the waist. “I will let you wear flats, though.” My aunt was actually trying to be somewhat democratic so I gave in. My mother helped me into it and whispered very lowly in my ear, “It’s almost over.” I smiled at her appreciatively. After I was all ready and our luggage was piled into the trunk of my car by my uncles and father we said our goodbyes. All of the unmarried females gathered at the base of the stairs and I tossed my bouquet. I immediately heard a squeal. I knew that squeal without even turning around I was sure it had been Amore. I looked at her and she was laughing she looked at me and put the bouquet up in the air. I smiled and blew a kiss to her. She turned to Seth, “So I guess we are next, huh.” He smiled at her and kissed her cheek.My aunt Rose 's eyes widened. Everyone was on the front porch throwing rice at us. I kissed my parent’s goodbye, “I love you both, thank you for everything.” My father smiled, “We love you too Nessie. Have fun.” My mother looked at me suddenly worried, "Do you have the passports, the plane tickets, your cell phone charger?” I smiled at her, “Relax mom, I have it all.” She hugged me, her voice breaking, “I love you.” I hugged her back. “I love you too.” They said goodbye to Jake, “You take care of her.” My mother threatened severely. Jake nodded and hugged her, “Always do. Bye Bells.” I hugged all of my aunts and uncles and as many people as I could saving my aunt Alice for last, “Thank you for my wedding I am sorry that I was a difficult bride.” She smiled at me, I could tell that she was over it. "It’s not your fault Ness, you are your mother’s daughter.” At that instant my aunt was pelted with rice, “HEY knock it off Bella!” my aunt demanded. I shook my head as I let Jake lead me away. I looked over and saw Emily and Sam I went up to them and Jake followed, “Thank you for coming you two. We really appreciated it.” Sam nodded solemnly and Emily smiled . I looked at her inquisitively, I had so many questions for her but not enough time, “The baby is due soon, isn’t it?” I asked. She nodded her smile brightened, “A couple of weeks, I cant wait I am so done with being pregnant.” She groaned. I smiled at her, “well good luck let us know if we can do anything I want to come see him when he is born, I already got him a few little things.” Sam chuckled, "Nessie we don’t know if it is a girl or a boy. I smiled back, “I have a feeling it’s a boy, I know it, I can just tell. You know you could ask Amore if you want to know” They shook their heads at me, “Well Jake it seems like you know how to pick them.” Sam joked, “YeaI like them eccentric.” He teased I rolled my eyes at him, “You can’t make fun of me until after the honeymoon.” My mother came up to me, “If you two don’t hurry there wont’ be a honeymoon now get going!” We hurried to the car. As Jake drove off I yelled, “I love you,” out the window to my fmaily and friends. When they were out of sight I turned back to my husband. He handed me a duffel bag, “Your mother wanted me to give you this.” I opened it and there was a note. “Here honey, slip these on when you are out of sight. That outfit will be horribly uncomfortable on the plane. Love you, miss you, Mom
I smiled at him. “What?” He asked. I am going to hop into the back and change, eyes on the road Mr. Black.” He smiled in amusement and obeyed. We were going so fast and it was pitch black out so I didn’t worry about anyone looking into the windows. Once I was situated in my usual jeans, t shirt and beloved sneakers I crawled back up front and took my hair down. The curls fell around my shoulders it felt so good to take the pins out. He turned to me and smiled, “Do you realize how big of a distraction that was?” I grinned at him wickedly, “I thought I told you not to look.” He smiled at me, “I didn’t but it was still a distraction.” I kissed his cheek, “that is what the honeymoon is for,” I whispered into his ear. He suddenly began to drive even faster. I settled back into my seat and smiled to myself. I was ready to start the first night of our forever.
posted by BuffyFaithFan1
Hello, My Name Is: Death
Volume One
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[FIVE]
"Oh my god!" I said and backed up into the wall.
"Don't worry! Don't worry! I'm not a member, I used to be, but I'm not anymore. Once I saw how...how evil they were, I couldn't stay. They told me all they do is bring justice among the world...and once I got there, they served themselves with murder. I couldn't stand that. I was only a member long enough to have this brand branded on me...and then I fled the place like a bat out of hell!"
I couldn't believe Tabra was a member of the Death Clan of the Fallen! I mean,...
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posted by BuffyFaithFan1
Hello, My Name Is: Death
Volume One
BuffyFaithfan1
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[TWO]
Okay, so around a half hour later, my friend Tabra finally got here. I'm feeling a little bit more at ease, but I'm still holding the gun when he entered.
"Are you okay, Cydnee?" He asked me, sitting down on the couch by my feet.
"Yea, I'm fine. Just feeling the aftershock of almost getting a knife impaled to my face." I said and looked at him. "How are you?"
"I'm doing good actually. But, I'm really worried for you, Cyd." He saw the gun and his eyes widened. "What are you gonna do with that gun?"
"Use it."...
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"so you whole name is renesme? and nothing els?"
i smiled. " my name is renesmee carly cullen black but most people just call me nessie for short"
"so you single?" jay asked.i thought he was ment to be shy?
"jay you just carnt go asking random people if there single or not" sam mock punched his arm "but are you?"
"guys leave her alone if she dont wonna answer she doesnt have to" i gave a nervouis chuckle
"thats allright and yeah i am" i admitted as i tried to supress a sigh.
"wow really? i mea no offence but that shocks me cause your fiiiiiiine" jay spaced the word out placing his hands on the...
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posted by a-jforever
Ok heres the start of my new fanfiction. Enjoy.XX

I dropped the gun to the floor. I was thirsty enough not to care about what Kate would say; she needed to get a life. I mean she seriously needed to get a life. She lived off reading about the deaths her crew committed. I sprung out of the tree landing neatly on my feet.

“Who...” The woman asked.

“Shhhh...I won’t hurt you.” What a lie I thought to myself trying to keep the smile off my face.

“What...what do you want of me?” She stuttered. I instantly flashed to her side, taking her hand leaning closer to her.

“I won’t hurt you.”...
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posted by a-jforever
I havent posted this in ages I realised so here we go. Please Comment.XXX



Jasper’s POV


“What did Rosalie say earlier?” I asked my eyes narrowing.

Alice met my eyes, sinking her gaze deeply into mine before looking away.

“Oh never mind now.” She sighed standing up.

“Alice?” I asked I didn’t like it when Alice kept things from me.

“It doesn’t matter Jazz.” She said happily getting to her feet.

“Ok then.” I said letting the subject drop.
She took my hands swinging them back and forward.

“Are you ok?” She asked, a small smile playing around her lips.

“Yes....why?” I asked...
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posted by decullen
12 Years later

I'm almost 18 and its almost graduation.Its Edwards turn for a sleepover.I cant wait.I wish I could tell him that I love him but I don't want to wreck our friendship.I heard a knock at my bedroom door.I opened it,the most perfect man was standing in front of me.

"What are you doing here?"I asked and finished packing.

"I came to see if your ready."He said and gave me his crooked smile.I got lost in his eyes we got closer and closer until our noises were touching.

"WHAT ARE YOU TWO DOING UP THERE!"We heard Alice and Jasper shouting up the stairs.They were one of those couple who were...
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posted by a-jforever
Here's my new fanfic. Enjoy.XX


Her lips trembled as I began to pull back. “Please Alice; you know it’s only for two days.” I said searching her eyes, my hand running carefully along her back.

She was speechless.

“You know I hate to be away from you too, but this is something I have to do alone, you’ve inspired me to find out more about my past but I have to do it alone.” I said moving my hand to brush the length of her cheek.


Her beautiful face was washed with pain and sadness was rolling over me like waves. I almost gave in and told her I was going to stay with her but she spoke,...
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posted by DarkStranger
the funniest thing is, that I don't know why it took me so long to write this chapter. I didn't wanted to write today, but when I read all the comment's, I changed my mind. So... hope you like it :)
xxKatie


Still Edward POV (when Bella leaves)

It took two seconds to understand what Bella said. And one second to stand up and follow her.

The trees where merged, I saw only face on Bella, in front of me. My subconscious was playing with me. I could not understand what is real what is not.

I suddenly stopped. I took a deep breath, trying to smell Bella. But I only smelt animals, and their blood.

Panic...
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posted by a-jforever
Sorry I havn't posted this story in so long. I've been buzy. Hope you enjoy.XX Please comment on improvement

Emmett’s POV

The day was over. It wasn’t so bad, if I say so myself. Other than Gym which Jasper hadn’t turned up for. I guess it was too much for him, poor kid. We did badger him on about it a bit though, and it got on his nerves. Maybe I would see if he wanted to wrestle to take his mind off things. I grinned to myself scaring the little girl walking next to me. I joined Alice and Rose in Edwards Volvo.
“Where’s Edward?” I asked.

“Funny. I was gonna ask you the same thing”...
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posted by DarkStranger
E.POV
week ago

Carlise asked me to oversee the vampires in NY. They were coming closer Forks. They pose a threat to all, especially to us. We were afraid of volturi.

It was difficult to stand out with the family, even a week. Bella.. I imagined her sitting next to me. I imagined her smiling and laughing. It may sound crazy, but I missed her so much, though only an hour has passed when I saw her. Her brown hair. I missed her brown eyes when she was human. I missed her blush and heart beat. But all these things have nothing against my presence with her. I increased speed. Finally I saw NY. It was...
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posted by a-jforever
Hope you like it XX

Edwards POV


It was just another normal day. There was a new girl, who every male was already picturing them with. She had long brown hair and muddy brown eyes. She went by the name of Isabella although she preferred Bella. I didn’t really see what was so special about her. She was looking at us but we didn’t pay any attention. I was surprised to hear her asked the other human girl, Jessica, who we were. “Who are they?” Bella asked throwing a glance in our direction. I looked from Jessica to Bella who quickly dropped her gaze. Jessica giggled, looking at the table....
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posted by amy_r_cullen
Come here Renesme me and moma have got you somthing i lifted Renesmee onto my sholders she liked to feel taller than everyone else, i lead the way out, bella was holding my hand with a grin on her face she was as exited as renesmee was i wouldn't allow bella to see renesmee's gift because she would tell her.

"close you're eyes nes...Renesmee were nealy there."
"i cant wait to see what you and moma got me".
we didn't get you something asuch.

here we are you can open you're eyes now renesmee, i had lead everyone over the yard to the clearing
there infrunt of us was a ginourmas tree house one me emmett and jasper could make i wanted it bigger because renesmee was still growing fast even thow she looked like a teenager.
Renesmee interupted my thouts by leaping of my shoulders and streat into the tree house.
"I think she likes it than" bella laughed
"I love it renesmee carected frim the tree, everyone burst out in laughter.
posted by cici1264
Here are the the artist on the Eclipse Soundtrack. They are in no particular order. So this is not the order of the soundtrack songs.

1. Metric – “Eclipse (All Yours)”

2. Muse – “Neutron Star Collision (Love Is Forever)”

3. The Bravery – “Ours”

4. Florence + The Machine – “Heavy In Your Arms”

5. Sia – “My Love”

6. Fanfarlo – “Atlas”

7. The Black Keys – “Chop And Change”

8. The Dead Weather – “Rolling In On A Burning Tire”

9. Beck and Bat For Lashes – “Let’s Get Lost”

10. Vampire Weekend – “Jonathan Low”

11. UNKLE – “With You In My Head (featuring The Black Angels)”

12. Eastern Conference Champions – “A Million Miles An Hour”

13. Band Of Horses – “Life On Earth”

14. Cee-Lo Green – “What Part Of Forever”

15. Howard Shore – “Jacob’s Theme”
posted by Tatti
1918, May 22

The past months has been rough. They tried to torment me as much as possible in order to know where my sister is. My visions was more and more calming because I could see Cynthia successfully trying to get away from her terrible past and starting all over again. I even saw a vision with her coming back to our parents soon and my intuition kept telling me that this return won't be a risk. Later I get a new why.
On one beautiful night of May Eleonora Rowenson found her husband dead in his study. The coroner decided it was a heart attack and since the old man was quite old and suffered...
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posted by kiwi12
Alice

Jasper gave me a weird look, but he took the outfit and went to change after he went hunting. I didn't need to hunt as often as he did, but I needed more time to get ready. I was really happy with the way I looked. It took me a long time to finish, but Jasper still wasn't at our meeting place. I wanted to check his future, but a part of me worried that he'd slipped. I would feel bad if I was wrong about that, but I didn't want to handle that situation again.

I smoothed my dress and fixed my hair just before he walked up. His eyes bugged and his jaw opened slightly. Recovering himself, he...
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posted by KatiiCullen94
6 Months later. . .
(Tanna is around 11 months and bella is about 8 months pregnant)

"bella, your killing me... how is this working? this is a full human pregnancy, with a half vampire child? Again, you amaze us vampires." Carlisle replied puzzeled. i think he was started to rethink whiether he is actaully good at his job....
i felt a sudden jolt, within me... a kick. i sighed and smiled. Carlisle's face brighted once he saw. His hand brushed my now "massive" stomach.
He chuckled as he felt it again.
"Carlisle, do you know when Edward comes home. i need him for the birth.. this is his baby...
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Nikki’s POV

I called Kristen Immediately
-Hi – she sounded tired
-Hey dear!
-Nikki?
-Yes! Guess what! Kellan is coming to my house to night to watch a movie with me!!!
-Just Kellan?
-I don’t need anybody else!! – She laughed
–What movie?
-I don’t know yet!
-How about Ahs? Does she know?
-Not exactly! – She laughed
-Bye Nikki, I was sleeping!
-It’s five o’clock p.m.!!!
-Yesterday after I left the nightclub I went to Rob’s house!
-Was it cool?
-We had sex all night! That’s why I’m tired!
-Ok! I’ll let you sleep! Bye! – She didn’t answer
Ok in about three hours Kellan would be...
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posted by Darktimes104
I wanted to take a minute to thank all of you who read my story and comment...PLEASE continue to do so.(thank you...now to the story :D )

Emmett's POV

I tried to open my eyes, it worked for a minute. I saw her, my angel, the one that saved me. I tried to leave them opened but the pain got worse so I had to close them. After the pain subsisted I tried to speak, I heard screams, it was coming from me. The pain was getting worse now, it was starting at my heart and shooting all around my body. I was still screaming. "Father, Edward!" I heard someone call in an angelic voice. At that moment my heart...
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posted by Darktimes104
Thank you for reading the 1st chapter...here's the second, I hope you enjoy and PLEASE comment!!!


Rosalie's POV

After Edward left I darted deeper into the woods beyond the clearing. There were bears around, I smelt them. I continued a little deeper into the woods until one of them came into view. I bent down into a crouch and struck at a cub that was in front of me. After I was done with the cub, I heard a scream of agony coming from straight ahead. I followed the sound until I came to a small clearing no bigger than a dorm room at college. In the clearing I saw another bear, probably the mother...
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posted by Darktimes104
The first Fan Fiction story I ever wrote...PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE commit...ID care if the comment is good or bad i need to know, i can handle it. :)


Rosalie's POV

I was in my room sobbing over my old life and the the fact I will be cold and hard forever. A knock at my door broke my thoughts. I quickly pulled myself together and said, "come in." The door opened wide enough to revel Edward, my brother for all intensive purposes. Edward was tall and always looked to have a sadden, i'm going to hurt you if you say the wrong thing to melook on his face. His hair stuck up every which a way, people we...
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