Hi! This is my first time writting for the Twilight Saga so please comment and you can also add suggestions. I'm only 13 years old so PLEASE be merciful if this is horrible.
Bella's POV
It has been two years since my marriage with Edward, the birth of Renesmee, and my transformation as being a vampire. Things were normal and the love between Edward and me hasn't change. Renesmee looks about 10 years old and is still growing fast. Things were getting too dreamlike, things were too perfect....
I feel like my brain is going to explode! I have nothing to do these days except to study for finals at Dartmouth. This was my last year and so was Edward's. Uh!!!!!!!!!!! Edward glanced at me with a worried look.
"You should take a break, you are getting all stress out over nothing."
"But the finals are coming up" I said
"I'm not an Alice but you should look in the mirror once in a while." he said.
I glanced at him for a few seconds and headed towards the bathroom to know what he's talking about. My face looks fine so what is he talking about? Now I saw it. My hair looked liked as if I had been in a tornado; it had tangles and alot of split ends. I should also pay attention to what I'm wearing. I'm still in my night gown and it's 3:04 PM!
When I got out of the bathroom, Edward was laying on the bed waiting for me.
"Now do you see what I'm talking about?" he said.
"Yeah, I think I need to talk to Renesmee, it has been awhile I had a mother-daughter bond." I said.
"I think you should ask Alice for help. You don't look like the way you used to when Alice dress you up." Edward said with a grin. We headed downstairs towards the living room.
Bella's POV
It has been two years since my marriage with Edward, the birth of Renesmee, and my transformation as being a vampire. Things were normal and the love between Edward and me hasn't change. Renesmee looks about 10 years old and is still growing fast. Things were getting too dreamlike, things were too perfect....
I feel like my brain is going to explode! I have nothing to do these days except to study for finals at Dartmouth. This was my last year and so was Edward's. Uh!!!!!!!!!!! Edward glanced at me with a worried look.
"You should take a break, you are getting all stress out over nothing."
"But the finals are coming up" I said
"I'm not an Alice but you should look in the mirror once in a while." he said.
I glanced at him for a few seconds and headed towards the bathroom to know what he's talking about. My face looks fine so what is he talking about? Now I saw it. My hair looked liked as if I had been in a tornado; it had tangles and alot of split ends. I should also pay attention to what I'm wearing. I'm still in my night gown and it's 3:04 PM!
When I got out of the bathroom, Edward was laying on the bed waiting for me.
"Now do you see what I'm talking about?" he said.
"Yeah, I think I need to talk to Renesmee, it has been awhile I had a mother-daughter bond." I said.
"I think you should ask Alice for help. You don't look like the way you used to when Alice dress you up." Edward said with a grin. We headed downstairs towards the living room.
"It shocked me.I was not sure if she meant to attack.That's the only interpretation of her behavior that my past had to offer.But she was smiling.And the emotions that were emanating from her were like nothing I'd ever felt before.
"'You've kept me waiting a long time,'she said."
I didn't realize Alice had come to stand behind me again.
"And you ducked your head like a good Southern gentleman,and said,'I'm sorry ma'am.'"Alice laughed at the memory.
Jasper smiled down at her."You held out your hand,and I took it without stopping to make sense of what I was doing.For the first time in almost a century,I felt hope."
Jasper took Alice's hand as he spoke.
Alice grinned."I was just relieved.I thought you were never going to show up."
it is just MY opinion...
i think it was very well done thinking of it just as a movie you know it wont ever be exactly like the book ... or with such many detailz
things i loved:
*the humor they use (for example bella: if things end bad like i would become the meal) haha
*alice ! the character is very well portrayed
*the end ( victoria watching)
*the baseball game!
*men cast haha =P
*stephenie meyer appearing wooow!
things that dissapointed me:
* the clearing ! i dont liked the sparkling effect ...
*it was really fast everything
*alice's story was missing ...
things that were wrong: (i didnt noticed until the third time i saw it)
*billy was driving !
*when edward is playing th e piano for bella he didnt sparkle
*victoria appears in the prom in the crowd (edward would read her thoughtz)
but i like it anyway ! it ir TWILIGHT !
i think it was very well done thinking of it just as a movie you know it wont ever be exactly like the book ... or with such many detailz
things i loved:
*the humor they use (for example bella: if things end bad like i would become the meal) haha
*alice ! the character is very well portrayed
*the end ( victoria watching)
*the baseball game!
*men cast haha =P
*stephenie meyer appearing wooow!
things that dissapointed me:
* the clearing ! i dont liked the sparkling effect ...
*it was really fast everything
*alice's story was missing ...
things that were wrong: (i didnt noticed until the third time i saw it)
*billy was driving !
*when edward is playing th e piano for bella he didnt sparkle
*victoria appears in the prom in the crowd (edward would read her thoughtz)
but i like it anyway ! it ir TWILIGHT !
While visiting “The Ellen DeGeneres Show,” for an episode that airs this Friday — the same day Pattinson’s vampiric portrayal of Edward Cullen springs to life on the big screen, he denied having romantic ties to anyone.
“Now, are you single?” Ellen asked.
“Ah, yeah,” the British actor replied.
And it appears despite women throwing themselves at him regularly, Pattinson may be stuck in singleton mode permanently.
“No one else seems to get into a relationship with me. It’s really strange,” he told Ellen.
“People like screaming at me,” the heartthrob added. “Actually, they like screaming at me in relationships as well. No one wants to commit.”