Hey guys, my name is Karly and I've decided to write my own fan fiction. Okay, imagine Edward never came back because Alice never told Roslie anything, so Edward never assumed Bella died. And now it's just Jacob and Bella. Here's the start of my story- lengthy by the way- and let me know what you think or any ideas you have that you would like me to add in. I appriciate all thoughts negative or positive. :) Thanks. :)
*Full Moon*
The piercing shrill of my alarm clock woke me up out of my deep sleep. I threw my arm at it hitting the buttons, hoping it was snooze. I sat up slowly and rubbed my eyes. There was a knock on my door. “Bells, are you awake yet? You’ll be late for school.” It was my dad, Charlie.
‘Oh, yeah, I’m up dad.” I replied getting out of my bed and I started taking off my tank top. I grabbed my clothes for today and headed to the bathroom. I ran the shower to warm the water as I brushed my teeth. I looked at myself in the mirror as I remembered my dream from last night. Edward has been in my dreams since he left a few months ago. Lately, the dreams of Edward have been fading. Jake and I hang together all the time now. I shut my eyes and started to remember that one very night of just me and Jacob in my house.
“Bella, that’s not their car!” He yelled getting out of the truck after me. “It’s a trap!”
I refused to believe him. “It’s Carlisle’s car. I just know it.” I pushed past him and ran into my pitch black house. I fumbled for the light switch and fell into something hard and ice cold. The light suddenly went on and I stood in Alice’s arms. “Alice!” I basically screamed in delight. I threw my arms around her hugging her. “Does . . . does ‘he’ know you’re here?” I trailed off.
“No, no no, Bella, he has no clue I’m here. I am just here to check on you.” She looked down. “I saw your future go blank and the last I saw you, you had jumped off of a cliff.” She sniffed the air suddenly. “And you smell like wet dog.” She wrinkled her nose.
“Well, um, I’m, uh, okay. I mean you can see that now, but yes I did jump off of a cliff. It’s called cliff diving. And Jacob saved me. You probably can’t see much of my future anymore because I’ve been spending all my time with Jacob. That explains the wet dog smell. He’s sort of a werewolf.” I mumbled to her.
“A werewolf?” She basically jumped from her seat. “It’s bad company! Let alone, not safe! It’s dangerous-“ I cut her off with a hand signal.
“Jake wouldn’t hurt me.” I changed the subject. “Are you going to tell him you were here?” She looked at me.
“He keeps to himself most of the time anymore. He doesn’t seem to want to talk much anymore. He has no clue I’m here and it’s going to stay that way. He thinks I am hunting.” She fell quiet. “I can smell the dog. He’s close. I should be going. I only came to see if you were okay.” She got up off the couch. “And Bella,” she turned to me, “this time I will keep in touch. I promise.” I smiled as she went out the back door.
Jake was standing in the hallway to the kitchen as I walked away from the back door. I walked over to the dirty dishes in the sink and began placing them in the dish washer. I never heard his footsteps move from that spot so I only assumed he stayed in the hallway. I was wrong. I turned around and he was right there. Right there. I looked at his lips and turned away, back to putting the rest of the dishes away. He placed his arm on my shoulder and turned me to face him. “Que Quowle.” He cupped my face in his palm and started to lean in. I closed my eyes and waited for his lips to meet mine.
The phone rang interrupting us. He spun around to wall phone and answered it. “Hello, Swan residence.” He said boldly. Jacob tensed a bit as the person spoke. “No. He’s not here. He’s out. Call back another time and he’ll decide.” He hung up then and I touched his arm. He looked at me and eased up. “It was just Billy, looking for Charlie.”
My flashback slowly went away as I arrived at school. Jacob ad I haven’t really talked about that night we almost kissed. I think about it a lot. Alice kept her word from that night and she has kept in touch. I stepped out of my truck and started walking to the doors of the school when I noticed a well-built figure standing by the front doors- his arms crossed and his back to me. Others were staring at him. He was so tall and his muscles were showing through the tight shirt he wore. When he turned around I smiled at him as he smiled back. I wrapped my arms around him giving him a big hug. “Hi Jake,” I said sleepily.
“Hi Bells,” He said cheerfully. “I came to ask if you wanted to hang out after school today. I, er, kind of dropped my phone in the water at La Push Beach.” We both giggled knowing that one was a lie. “So I didn’t have a chance to call you off Billy’s home phone, you know.” I hugged him again and nodded. “Alright, I’ll pick you up after school right here. Now give me your keys, I’m taking your truck back to my house and I’m picking you up my way.” He grinned.
“Okay, Jake,” I tossed him my keys, “I need to go now or I will be late for class.” I kissed his cheek and ran to the front doors of school and turned back towards him. I noticed all the girls around him trying to flirt with him and just shook my head and waved to him. He shot me a wink and I walked into the building.
Class was taking a while. Maybe this is why the day dragged by, because I just wanted to spend my time with Jake. Lunchtime came around and I walked through the cafeteria and sat down next to Ben and Angela. I sat quietly and began to eat my food. No one at our lunch table talks anymore, I’m okay with it I guess. By the time lunch was over I was wishing for the last two hours of school to just end. Finally, my wish came true when the end of the day bell rang loud and clear.
Just as Jake said, he was right there waiting out front of school for me. He had his motorcycle there by his side and I smiled at it. He tossed me a helmet and I felt my smile widen. “Jake,” I said all innocently. “Can I drive it?” I looked up at him towering over me. He nodded and I got on the bike excitedly and started it. I put my helmet on and I could see everyone staring at me and I honestly didn’t give a crap. Jacob got on the back and put his hand, on top of mine, on the clutch. And then we were off, racing down the street. I took the roads to La Push and I pulled up at Jake’s red house. Boy, did I love his beat up place!
Billy wasn’t home so it was just us two. I then remembered that night at my house. I fell back onto Jake’s couch and turned the TV on flipping through the channels. Jake began cooking some dinner. “Billy’s away for the weekend. He and Sue went on a weekend fishing trip. You’re more than welcome to stay the night.” He almost whispered the last sentence. I sat up at looked at him. “Charlie won’t agree, I know.” He went back to cooking.
I was still looking at him. “Well, I do have an idea, but you’d have to do it.” He raised an eyebrow looking back at me. “Later, just call him, off my phone, and tell him I fell asleep and offer to let me stay the night, that you don’t mind at all. If then he refuses to let me stay then oh well, just ‘wake me up’ and I’ll go home to Charlie.” Jake agreed with the idea. I had pat the couch and motioned for him to come sit with me. Jake turned off the food and sat beside me. I put my legs on his lap and stretched out on the couch turning my attention to the TV show. Jacob started rubbing my legs and it tickled. He didn’t seem to care that every once in a while I gave him a little kick telling him to knock it off.
I didn’t want to lie down anymore so I sat up and leaned my head on his shoulder. I let out a little sigh. Why do I want Jake to just kiss me already? Ever since we almost kissed he hasn’t gotten that close to my face. I sighed again. I might have to do this one on my own. I think he was scared of what I would have thought that night.
I climbed on Jake’s lap and smiled. ‘Gotta play this cool,’ I thought. “You’re very warm and comfy. You’re like a big teddy bear.” I said.
He laughed. “No, Bells, I’m like a big wolf. Art.” He then made me laugh and I smiled as I petted his head.
“Oh, what a good boy you are. Yes you are.” I joked around. He smiled sheepishly. My eyes locked on his lips and I looked away hoping he didn’t notice. I looked back at him and looked into his brown eyes. ‘This is my chance. Now or never.’ I thought to myself. I leaned towards his face slowly and closed my eyes. I felt my lips touch his. Jake pressed his lips back against mine. I felt a slight smile working on the corner of my lips and I pulled back starting to blush.
“Sorry,” I whispered looking down at my hands.
Jake lifted my chin up with his fingers and looked into my eyes. “Don’t be,” He said before locking his lips on mine again. Our lips moved in together, slowly. He cupped my face in his hands and I put my arms around his neck. I had to break out of the kiss to breathe, but I wanted to kiss him even more. What was with him that, at this moment, makes him irresistible.
I put my head on Jake’s shoulder and he smiled. We sat like that for an hour, neither of us wanted to move. My stomach interrupted us with its demand for food. And Jake’s stomach, soon after mine, growled as well. He picked me up off of his lap and put me on the couch as he went to the kitchen to heat our dinner back up.
We both sat at the table and ate our dinner. I couldn’t stop smiling. This, probably, was the happiest I’ve been since he left. Jake couldn’t keep his eyes off of me. This had made me blush deep red. “It’s getting late now, Jake. Give Charlie a call.” I got up putting both our empty plates in the sink.
“Sure, sure. I’ll give him a call. Just go ahead and go in my room and steal yourself a shirt to sleep in.” Jacob instructed. I listened and tossed him my cell phone and skipped into his room. I went through his drawers and all he had were his huge shirts. I took off my sweat pants because I had shorts on underneath and then took my shirt off- taking my bra off as well and slipped on one of his extra-large shirts on. My goodness was it huge! It fell all the way to my knees.
I walked and stood in the doorway to the living room taking my hair out of its tight bun, letting it breathe. Jake was just getting off the phone with Charlie.
*Full Moon*
The piercing shrill of my alarm clock woke me up out of my deep sleep. I threw my arm at it hitting the buttons, hoping it was snooze. I sat up slowly and rubbed my eyes. There was a knock on my door. “Bells, are you awake yet? You’ll be late for school.” It was my dad, Charlie.
‘Oh, yeah, I’m up dad.” I replied getting out of my bed and I started taking off my tank top. I grabbed my clothes for today and headed to the bathroom. I ran the shower to warm the water as I brushed my teeth. I looked at myself in the mirror as I remembered my dream from last night. Edward has been in my dreams since he left a few months ago. Lately, the dreams of Edward have been fading. Jake and I hang together all the time now. I shut my eyes and started to remember that one very night of just me and Jacob in my house.
“Bella, that’s not their car!” He yelled getting out of the truck after me. “It’s a trap!”
I refused to believe him. “It’s Carlisle’s car. I just know it.” I pushed past him and ran into my pitch black house. I fumbled for the light switch and fell into something hard and ice cold. The light suddenly went on and I stood in Alice’s arms. “Alice!” I basically screamed in delight. I threw my arms around her hugging her. “Does . . . does ‘he’ know you’re here?” I trailed off.
“No, no no, Bella, he has no clue I’m here. I am just here to check on you.” She looked down. “I saw your future go blank and the last I saw you, you had jumped off of a cliff.” She sniffed the air suddenly. “And you smell like wet dog.” She wrinkled her nose.
“Well, um, I’m, uh, okay. I mean you can see that now, but yes I did jump off of a cliff. It’s called cliff diving. And Jacob saved me. You probably can’t see much of my future anymore because I’ve been spending all my time with Jacob. That explains the wet dog smell. He’s sort of a werewolf.” I mumbled to her.
“A werewolf?” She basically jumped from her seat. “It’s bad company! Let alone, not safe! It’s dangerous-“ I cut her off with a hand signal.
“Jake wouldn’t hurt me.” I changed the subject. “Are you going to tell him you were here?” She looked at me.
“He keeps to himself most of the time anymore. He doesn’t seem to want to talk much anymore. He has no clue I’m here and it’s going to stay that way. He thinks I am hunting.” She fell quiet. “I can smell the dog. He’s close. I should be going. I only came to see if you were okay.” She got up off the couch. “And Bella,” she turned to me, “this time I will keep in touch. I promise.” I smiled as she went out the back door.
Jake was standing in the hallway to the kitchen as I walked away from the back door. I walked over to the dirty dishes in the sink and began placing them in the dish washer. I never heard his footsteps move from that spot so I only assumed he stayed in the hallway. I was wrong. I turned around and he was right there. Right there. I looked at his lips and turned away, back to putting the rest of the dishes away. He placed his arm on my shoulder and turned me to face him. “Que Quowle.” He cupped my face in his palm and started to lean in. I closed my eyes and waited for his lips to meet mine.
The phone rang interrupting us. He spun around to wall phone and answered it. “Hello, Swan residence.” He said boldly. Jacob tensed a bit as the person spoke. “No. He’s not here. He’s out. Call back another time and he’ll decide.” He hung up then and I touched his arm. He looked at me and eased up. “It was just Billy, looking for Charlie.”
My flashback slowly went away as I arrived at school. Jacob ad I haven’t really talked about that night we almost kissed. I think about it a lot. Alice kept her word from that night and she has kept in touch. I stepped out of my truck and started walking to the doors of the school when I noticed a well-built figure standing by the front doors- his arms crossed and his back to me. Others were staring at him. He was so tall and his muscles were showing through the tight shirt he wore. When he turned around I smiled at him as he smiled back. I wrapped my arms around him giving him a big hug. “Hi Jake,” I said sleepily.
“Hi Bells,” He said cheerfully. “I came to ask if you wanted to hang out after school today. I, er, kind of dropped my phone in the water at La Push Beach.” We both giggled knowing that one was a lie. “So I didn’t have a chance to call you off Billy’s home phone, you know.” I hugged him again and nodded. “Alright, I’ll pick you up after school right here. Now give me your keys, I’m taking your truck back to my house and I’m picking you up my way.” He grinned.
“Okay, Jake,” I tossed him my keys, “I need to go now or I will be late for class.” I kissed his cheek and ran to the front doors of school and turned back towards him. I noticed all the girls around him trying to flirt with him and just shook my head and waved to him. He shot me a wink and I walked into the building.
Class was taking a while. Maybe this is why the day dragged by, because I just wanted to spend my time with Jake. Lunchtime came around and I walked through the cafeteria and sat down next to Ben and Angela. I sat quietly and began to eat my food. No one at our lunch table talks anymore, I’m okay with it I guess. By the time lunch was over I was wishing for the last two hours of school to just end. Finally, my wish came true when the end of the day bell rang loud and clear.
Just as Jake said, he was right there waiting out front of school for me. He had his motorcycle there by his side and I smiled at it. He tossed me a helmet and I felt my smile widen. “Jake,” I said all innocently. “Can I drive it?” I looked up at him towering over me. He nodded and I got on the bike excitedly and started it. I put my helmet on and I could see everyone staring at me and I honestly didn’t give a crap. Jacob got on the back and put his hand, on top of mine, on the clutch. And then we were off, racing down the street. I took the roads to La Push and I pulled up at Jake’s red house. Boy, did I love his beat up place!
Billy wasn’t home so it was just us two. I then remembered that night at my house. I fell back onto Jake’s couch and turned the TV on flipping through the channels. Jake began cooking some dinner. “Billy’s away for the weekend. He and Sue went on a weekend fishing trip. You’re more than welcome to stay the night.” He almost whispered the last sentence. I sat up at looked at him. “Charlie won’t agree, I know.” He went back to cooking.
I was still looking at him. “Well, I do have an idea, but you’d have to do it.” He raised an eyebrow looking back at me. “Later, just call him, off my phone, and tell him I fell asleep and offer to let me stay the night, that you don’t mind at all. If then he refuses to let me stay then oh well, just ‘wake me up’ and I’ll go home to Charlie.” Jake agreed with the idea. I had pat the couch and motioned for him to come sit with me. Jake turned off the food and sat beside me. I put my legs on his lap and stretched out on the couch turning my attention to the TV show. Jacob started rubbing my legs and it tickled. He didn’t seem to care that every once in a while I gave him a little kick telling him to knock it off.
I didn’t want to lie down anymore so I sat up and leaned my head on his shoulder. I let out a little sigh. Why do I want Jake to just kiss me already? Ever since we almost kissed he hasn’t gotten that close to my face. I sighed again. I might have to do this one on my own. I think he was scared of what I would have thought that night.
I climbed on Jake’s lap and smiled. ‘Gotta play this cool,’ I thought. “You’re very warm and comfy. You’re like a big teddy bear.” I said.
He laughed. “No, Bells, I’m like a big wolf. Art.” He then made me laugh and I smiled as I petted his head.
“Oh, what a good boy you are. Yes you are.” I joked around. He smiled sheepishly. My eyes locked on his lips and I looked away hoping he didn’t notice. I looked back at him and looked into his brown eyes. ‘This is my chance. Now or never.’ I thought to myself. I leaned towards his face slowly and closed my eyes. I felt my lips touch his. Jake pressed his lips back against mine. I felt a slight smile working on the corner of my lips and I pulled back starting to blush.
“Sorry,” I whispered looking down at my hands.
Jake lifted my chin up with his fingers and looked into my eyes. “Don’t be,” He said before locking his lips on mine again. Our lips moved in together, slowly. He cupped my face in his hands and I put my arms around his neck. I had to break out of the kiss to breathe, but I wanted to kiss him even more. What was with him that, at this moment, makes him irresistible.
I put my head on Jake’s shoulder and he smiled. We sat like that for an hour, neither of us wanted to move. My stomach interrupted us with its demand for food. And Jake’s stomach, soon after mine, growled as well. He picked me up off of his lap and put me on the couch as he went to the kitchen to heat our dinner back up.
We both sat at the table and ate our dinner. I couldn’t stop smiling. This, probably, was the happiest I’ve been since he left. Jake couldn’t keep his eyes off of me. This had made me blush deep red. “It’s getting late now, Jake. Give Charlie a call.” I got up putting both our empty plates in the sink.
“Sure, sure. I’ll give him a call. Just go ahead and go in my room and steal yourself a shirt to sleep in.” Jacob instructed. I listened and tossed him my cell phone and skipped into his room. I went through his drawers and all he had were his huge shirts. I took off my sweat pants because I had shorts on underneath and then took my shirt off- taking my bra off as well and slipped on one of his extra-large shirts on. My goodness was it huge! It fell all the way to my knees.
I walked and stood in the doorway to the living room taking my hair out of its tight bun, letting it breathe. Jake was just getting off the phone with Charlie.
This is for people who have been reading Esme's Story:
I don't want to call it Esme Cullen story the whole time so I have come up with some ideas for names. please comment and tell me which ones you like. Ones i don't end up using for my story, feel free to use for any of yours:
Daybreak
Forever Awakening
Beyond Starlight
Nightfall
Sudden Dusk
Moonlight
Midnight Glimmer
Sunrise
Sunset
Dawn of Life
Precious Enchantment
If you can think of any others, please let me know
I want my story to have a more interesting name so it draws more attention than just 'Esme Cullen Story'. I went online to a list of words with 'atmosphere' and I found these words and made different combinations with them.
PLEASE HELP ME!!!
THANK YOU!!!
I don't want to call it Esme Cullen story the whole time so I have come up with some ideas for names. please comment and tell me which ones you like. Ones i don't end up using for my story, feel free to use for any of yours:
Daybreak
Forever Awakening
Beyond Starlight
Nightfall
Sudden Dusk
Moonlight
Midnight Glimmer
Sunrise
Sunset
Dawn of Life
Precious Enchantment
If you can think of any others, please let me know
I want my story to have a more interesting name so it draws more attention than just 'Esme Cullen Story'. I went online to a list of words with 'atmosphere' and I found these words and made different combinations with them.
PLEASE HELP ME!!!
THANK YOU!!!
ALICE AND JASPER:
FOR THE FIRST TIME IN ALMOST A DECADE I FELT HOPE
JASPERS HEART FROZEN IN TIME BY A SINGLE BITE.
FLYING LIKE A HUMMING BIRDS WINGS (THIS LINE WAS SAID TO BELLA BY EDWARD -ECLIPSE-)
HOPE, HAPPINESS, KINDNESS, UNDERSTANDING, AND...LOVE
ALL AT ONCE COMING FROM SUCH A SMALL PERSON.
EMOTIONS HE BEARLY RECONIZED.
EMOTIONS HE WOULD NEVER LEAVE.
EMOTIONS THAT WOULD SOON BE HIS WHOLE LIFE.
EMOTINS THAT BELONGED TO ALICE HIS ONE AND ONLY REASON TO LIVE.
LOVE SO STRONG, THEY WOULD KILL. KILL ONCE, TWICE... UNTIL THEY GOT TO THERE OTHER HALF
ALICE ISNT JUST JASPERS LOVE
SHE IS HIS KEY, HIS KEY TO HAPPINESS
THERE SOULS ATACHED FOREVER
THERE SOULS INTERWINED TOGHETHER
THERE SOULS BELONG TO EACH OTHER
SOULMATES FOR THE REST OF INTERNITY
BROUGHT TO HAPPINESS TOGHETHER AND WHEN IT COMES TIME THEY WILL BE TAKEN OUT TOGHETHER
THANX FOR READING
WRITTEN BY RACHEL KETTLEWELL
TWILIGHT GIRL
FOR THE FIRST TIME IN ALMOST A DECADE I FELT HOPE
JASPERS HEART FROZEN IN TIME BY A SINGLE BITE.
FLYING LIKE A HUMMING BIRDS WINGS (THIS LINE WAS SAID TO BELLA BY EDWARD -ECLIPSE-)
HOPE, HAPPINESS, KINDNESS, UNDERSTANDING, AND...LOVE
ALL AT ONCE COMING FROM SUCH A SMALL PERSON.
EMOTIONS HE BEARLY RECONIZED.
EMOTIONS HE WOULD NEVER LEAVE.
EMOTIONS THAT WOULD SOON BE HIS WHOLE LIFE.
EMOTINS THAT BELONGED TO ALICE HIS ONE AND ONLY REASON TO LIVE.
LOVE SO STRONG, THEY WOULD KILL. KILL ONCE, TWICE... UNTIL THEY GOT TO THERE OTHER HALF
ALICE ISNT JUST JASPERS LOVE
SHE IS HIS KEY, HIS KEY TO HAPPINESS
THERE SOULS ATACHED FOREVER
THERE SOULS INTERWINED TOGHETHER
THERE SOULS BELONG TO EACH OTHER
SOULMATES FOR THE REST OF INTERNITY
BROUGHT TO HAPPINESS TOGHETHER AND WHEN IT COMES TIME THEY WILL BE TAKEN OUT TOGHETHER
THANX FOR READING
WRITTEN BY RACHEL KETTLEWELL
TWILIGHT GIRL
For those of you who don't know me, or have never read my fanfictions, I'm renesmeblack. I write a story from Renesmee, Jacob, Mine, and occasionally Emmett's POV. Now, I have a ton of bad ideas, and some of the things you read from me are crash tests. Thankfully, many of my readers enjoy my fanfictions. The dummy is saved!
My stories are for girls who can't stop reading the books. It's for girls who'd pester Stephenie Meyer to write a sequel, if they had a chance! I love Jacob, so that's another reason why girls read my, frankly, ameteur (hope I spelled that right!) writing. You wanna know the best part?
Okay, here goes nothing.
IT NEVER ENDS!!!
There. I feel better now. Yup, you read correctly. It'll never end until I grow out of the Twilight Stage (like that'll happen.).
For the very few fans I have, thanks for the support and I'll see you in the reading section!
-Thanks!
renesmeblack xoxo
My stories are for girls who can't stop reading the books. It's for girls who'd pester Stephenie Meyer to write a sequel, if they had a chance! I love Jacob, so that's another reason why girls read my, frankly, ameteur (hope I spelled that right!) writing. You wanna know the best part?
Okay, here goes nothing.
IT NEVER ENDS!!!
There. I feel better now. Yup, you read correctly. It'll never end until I grow out of the Twilight Stage (like that'll happen.).
For the very few fans I have, thanks for the support and I'll see you in the reading section!
-Thanks!
renesmeblack xoxo
Here's New Moon Confessions. like I said before, I don't any of these, I just posted them for people's enjoyments.
#1
I can hear Edward in my head too!
#2
If Edward dies, I headed off to Volterra.
#3
Alice stole my Porsche.
#4
Jane has my favorite vampire power.
#5
I have Edward's soul. *Evil Laugh*
#6
Bella's Epiphany = Stating the obvious.
#7
Edward didn't go to South America. He was visiting me.
#8
I named all of my dogs after Jacob and his friends.
#9
I skipped all of the chapters without Edward in them.
#10
I second Emmett's vote.
#11
I cut myself in front of Jasper for fun.
#12
If Bella won't marry Edward, I will.
please comment and rate!
#1
I can hear Edward in my head too!
#2
If Edward dies, I headed off to Volterra.
#3
Alice stole my Porsche.
#4
Jane has my favorite vampire power.
#5
I have Edward's soul. *Evil Laugh*
#6
Bella's Epiphany = Stating the obvious.
#7
Edward didn't go to South America. He was visiting me.
#8
I named all of my dogs after Jacob and his friends.
#9
I skipped all of the chapters without Edward in them.
#10
I second Emmett's vote.
#11
I cut myself in front of Jasper for fun.
#12
If Bella won't marry Edward, I will.
please comment and rate!