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posted by ktbminnie12
You're in for a real treat!!!!

Bella’s POV

    It’s been 4 months. I’m still sitting in this dark basement, alone and scarred. I missed Edward so much. I hope they find me soon. I don’t know how much more of the beatings I could take.
    Every night, Lorenzo would come in and beat me until I passed out. I don’t know why he did it. I didn’t do anything to him. One night he beat me so hard, I started bleeding. I could feel the marks on my arms where he beat me so hard.
    Three days ago, I asked him to leave me alone. Actually, it was more of a demand and scream. I told him to leave me alone and I hoped he would die a slow and painful death. I got severely punished for that. He slapped me across my face and stepped on my ankle with full force. I could feel it break. It’s still broken and it hurts so bad.
    I have a gash in my wrist where I’ve tried to yank off the chain that was holding me there. You know what sucks more, Lorenzo doesn’t hunt. He can poof himself up some blood with his witch powers. So he never leaves.
    I have burns on my arms where he’s burned me a couple of times. It hurts, but not as bad as my right ankle. It hurts the worst. I can’t even move it.
    I looked at my engagement ring. The one Edward gave me. It’s the only thing keeping me alive. The only thing that reminds me to go ahead and kill myself. It’s all I have of Edward.
    I still have on my clothes from the party. I’m lucky enough though for Lorenzo to actually let me take a shower. But he has to be in there while I take it. Hasn’t he ever heard of personal space. The only time he steps out is when I am getting dressed.
    I only get showers twice a month. I’m lucky enough today, to get one.
    Lorenzo came down and stopped in front of me.
    “How’s the puny human today?” he sneered.
    “Good, Master,” I said. He could hear the scare in my voice. I know I could.
    He slapped me across my face and undid the chain. Did I mention he slaps me a lot?
    “Get up before I change my mind about your shower privileges,” he said.
    “Yes, Master,” I said.
    I got up slowly and hobbled up the stairs. I only hobbled because of my foot. I reached the top of the stairs and grabbed the handle. From there I hobbled to another set of stairs. I hobbled up those stairs and stopped at the bathroom.
    Lorenzo unlocked it and went inside.
    “Let me know when you’re in the shower,” he said.
    “Yes, Master,” I said.
    He pushed me in and, naturally, I fell down. But I had an excuse. I had a broke ankle. I picked myself back up and watched Lorenzo shut the door. I quickly undressed and turned on the water.
    When I got in I pulled the shower curtain across so I couldn’t reveal my naked body.
    “I’m in, Master,” I said.
    I heard him come in. I had to hurry. I only get five minutes to shower, then five to dry off. I washed my hair and shut the water off. Now I had eight minutes.
    “I’m done, Master,” I said.
    I heard him leave. I stepped out and wrapped myself in the towel. I quickly dried off. When I was done I hobbled over to the door and opened it.
    “Finally, you’re done,” Lorenzo said.
    He grabbed my hair and pulled me down to the basement. My ankle was protesting the whole way. When we reached the stairs to the basement, he shoved me down them. I fell down each stair.
         My ribs started hurting. Either they were severely bruised or they were broken. I tried to get up but winced in pain. Oh yeah broken.
    Lorenzo started laughing. He came down and dragged me by my hair. He chained me up and went upstairs. I started sobbing.
    I couldn’t take it anymore. I was fixing to snap when I heard something happening upstairs. I heard a blood curling scream. I suddenly smelled smoke. That means someone had to have found me.
    But what if it was Lorenzo. I didn’t care. I was taking that chance.
    “Is anyone there?” I screamed out.
    Nothing.
    “Hello? Can you hear me? I need help please? Is anyone there?” I started sobbing.
    Suddenly, the door flew open. I looked to the top and froze as the light hit the figure.
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This is a pretty long one...regardless, I hope you love it as much as the other 5. Chapter 7 is in the making!!!!!!!!!

My night was almost sleepless. Ever since I found out that I loved Jacob, all I could do was think about him, preventing me to sleep. Once or twice I swear I saw him looking through my window, but that was probably just my imagination running wild.
After giving up on sleep, I got up early, dressing in faded blue jeans and an old top. It would kill Aunt Alice, but I was going to be covered in paint soon anyways. I didn't have to be at the meeting room until four, so I was free...
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posted by bluefeet
The Cullens
The Cullens
Twilight must be one of the most popular teenage books of all time and not only was it such a hit for the teenagers, but it was going well for various adults. The main gender that reads the series would be female, but it is widely read by males, too.

The movie was very well done. I thought it captured the main facts of the story. The actors were excellent, and all of the characters suited the ones that were imagined by millions of people worldwide. It really drew me in, caught my attention, and not once could I take my eyes off of the screen.

Criticism:
I think they rushed the movie a bit. I...
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posted by papa
Update 11/21: WE HAVE A GRAND PRIZE WINNER AND 4 RUNNER UPS!

**Grand Prize** IcelandGirl812
Across the table
Dark topaz eyes burn into
Deep chocolate ones

**Runner Up** HarryPotterFan
An eternity
cradled in your perfect arms,
still not enough time.

**Runner Up** funnyshawna
There's rain on the roof
The sun locked behind the clouds
Her perfect daylight

**Runner Up** katlynncore
We sit face-to-face.
Both breathing. One heart dancing.
Closer and closer.

**Runner Up** DARKSARCASM
Fangirls? Poetry?
Angst, romance, sparkly vampires
Oh, the poor judges.

Thank you to EVERYONE who participated. There were so many...
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Disclaimer: These are my views, please don't be offended

I don't know about everyone, but TOO many people type using net-speak and horrid spelling, grammar, and capitalization. Typos are perfectly fine, but when someone types something that looks like this:

i lyk ttly luv edward he is so s3xy jacob is a hawttie 2

It completely irritates me.

Those few lines have many things wrong with it:

1) Lack of capitalization and punctuation.

Without proper capitalization, the sentences look very amateur. We don't know when a new sentence starts, and it shows lack of respect (excuse me for sounding cheesy) towards...
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