Okay, so i haven't been on fanpop since i was 12! i'm now 14, and i've found some of my old stories, and i've decided to re-write it, in a more grammatical way, with new fresh ideas.
Hope you guys like it.
I stared into the mirror, gazing at my reflection, focusing on every feature of my face.
I was nothing that you could call beautiful, or stunning. I was just ordinary, I was just me. I had quite plain features, green eyes, pale skin, the only thing that you could call special or different about me, was my hair. My hair was a natural black, it went to my elbows, and had natural waves. My fringe was my faviroute thing about my appearance it was my cover, it covered most of my face, hiding one of my eyes, it made me feel as though I was invisible and no one could see me or bother me.
I walked into the Forks High school, searching for that one friendly face that I was desperate to see, and there it was. Jacob Black, he was standing with a group of tan, quite muscly boys and one or two girls. One of the girls though, caught more of my attention. She was radiant, her beauty was so eye catching, her hair was a golden brown, with red tinges, her eyes were almost what seemed to be golden, and her skin was even paler than mine.
“Lirah, you’re here!” Jacobs voice boomed, he walked towards me, his smile making me manage a smile back; he pulled me in for a hug he was so warm, that I wanted to stay there forever.
But to my disappointment he let go, and brought me towards his group of friends, and the strange beautiful girl. The group was watching me now, and I could feel my cheeks flaming, I flicked my hair causing my fringe to fall in my face, hiding me I smiled at the thought.
“Guys, this is my faviroute cousin, Lirah. And Lirah, this um, this is Renesmee “Jacob said, holding the beautiful girls hand. I realised that this was Jake’s girlfriend, and I smiled
“Nice to meet you all” I said quietly, smiling.
The group of boys nodded, and started asking me questions, some even trying to flirt, but through all of this I noticed one of the boys, standing quite a distance away from me, staring at me. I was confused, and Jake had also noticed the boy’s strange behaviour Jake walked towards the boy and they started walking away from the group, and to my surprise Jake turned and looked at Renesmee for a second, and she nodded. It was like they were telepathic or something, but all I wanted to know is what Jake and that strange boy were talking about. But before I could sneak away and follow, Jake’s girlfriend, the strangely beautiful girl, Renesmee appeared in front of me, smiling.
“Hey, um I love your name, it’s so different” Renesmee said smiling.
“Uh, different? Yours is different too.” I said distracted
“Yeah, many people think it’s weird, my mum made it, it’s a mix between my Dad’s mums name “Esmee” and Mum’s, mothers name “Renee” Said Renesmee smiling.
“Hey, that’s actually pretty cool, what’s your parent’s names maybe Jake has mentioned them before?” I asked trying to make some conversation.
Renesmee’s face hardened “It’s time for class” She said quickly.
“Oh, um I think I left something in my car, I’ll see you later though?” I asked hopefully
“Sure” Renesmee said smiling. She laid a hand on my shoulder, I shivered her hands were freezing!
Renesmee felt my shiver, and she quickly turned on her heel, and glided gracefully towards the school were many of Forks High Schools students were heading.
When Renesmee was clearly inside of the school, I immediately started to head towards where Jake and the boy had disappeared too. But suddenly I heard voices, I followed them, and I could hear them clearly.
“What is it Paul? What happened?” Jake said angrily.
“Jake…” Said the strange boy pleadingly
“Paul, you need to tell me what’s going on, it better not have anything to do with Lirah!”
“Jake I, I imprinted on her” Paul said slowly.
Hope you guys like it.
I stared into the mirror, gazing at my reflection, focusing on every feature of my face.
I was nothing that you could call beautiful, or stunning. I was just ordinary, I was just me. I had quite plain features, green eyes, pale skin, the only thing that you could call special or different about me, was my hair. My hair was a natural black, it went to my elbows, and had natural waves. My fringe was my faviroute thing about my appearance it was my cover, it covered most of my face, hiding one of my eyes, it made me feel as though I was invisible and no one could see me or bother me.
I walked into the Forks High school, searching for that one friendly face that I was desperate to see, and there it was. Jacob Black, he was standing with a group of tan, quite muscly boys and one or two girls. One of the girls though, caught more of my attention. She was radiant, her beauty was so eye catching, her hair was a golden brown, with red tinges, her eyes were almost what seemed to be golden, and her skin was even paler than mine.
“Lirah, you’re here!” Jacobs voice boomed, he walked towards me, his smile making me manage a smile back; he pulled me in for a hug he was so warm, that I wanted to stay there forever.
But to my disappointment he let go, and brought me towards his group of friends, and the strange beautiful girl. The group was watching me now, and I could feel my cheeks flaming, I flicked my hair causing my fringe to fall in my face, hiding me I smiled at the thought.
“Guys, this is my faviroute cousin, Lirah. And Lirah, this um, this is Renesmee “Jacob said, holding the beautiful girls hand. I realised that this was Jake’s girlfriend, and I smiled
“Nice to meet you all” I said quietly, smiling.
The group of boys nodded, and started asking me questions, some even trying to flirt, but through all of this I noticed one of the boys, standing quite a distance away from me, staring at me. I was confused, and Jake had also noticed the boy’s strange behaviour Jake walked towards the boy and they started walking away from the group, and to my surprise Jake turned and looked at Renesmee for a second, and she nodded. It was like they were telepathic or something, but all I wanted to know is what Jake and that strange boy were talking about. But before I could sneak away and follow, Jake’s girlfriend, the strangely beautiful girl, Renesmee appeared in front of me, smiling.
“Hey, um I love your name, it’s so different” Renesmee said smiling.
“Uh, different? Yours is different too.” I said distracted
“Yeah, many people think it’s weird, my mum made it, it’s a mix between my Dad’s mums name “Esmee” and Mum’s, mothers name “Renee” Said Renesmee smiling.
“Hey, that’s actually pretty cool, what’s your parent’s names maybe Jake has mentioned them before?” I asked trying to make some conversation.
Renesmee’s face hardened “It’s time for class” She said quickly.
“Oh, um I think I left something in my car, I’ll see you later though?” I asked hopefully
“Sure” Renesmee said smiling. She laid a hand on my shoulder, I shivered her hands were freezing!
Renesmee felt my shiver, and she quickly turned on her heel, and glided gracefully towards the school were many of Forks High Schools students were heading.
When Renesmee was clearly inside of the school, I immediately started to head towards where Jake and the boy had disappeared too. But suddenly I heard voices, I followed them, and I could hear them clearly.
“What is it Paul? What happened?” Jake said angrily.
“Jake…” Said the strange boy pleadingly
“Paul, you need to tell me what’s going on, it better not have anything to do with Lirah!”
“Jake I, I imprinted on her” Paul said slowly.
I probaly said thank you thirty times.
When I heard that they didn't have a place to stay i offered for them to stay here. They aren't living in out hotel room but they are only to doors away.
When i woke up i turned to susans side.She wasn't there. A note took her place.
It read
Dear Chris,
I am pretty sure i got you with the note!
The guys said you would think i left. (it worked)
We are hanging out in their room and we are playing spin the bottle. (what!)
Love,
Susan ps. got you again!
I looked at her hand writing it was very pretty.
I got dressed and walked to the elevator.When i noticed i pressed two when i didn't even have to change from 11 the doors closed.I pressed the 11 button mabye 5 times.When it went up I sighed.
...
to be continued...
When we reached my home mason was crying and reenesme was trying to comfort her little brother.Alice and esme were talking very fast so I only caught little bits and pieces of the conversation .But it seemed that we were going to have to wait till edward and jacob and the other boys came back.while esme and alice were disscussing the subject reenesme and i were trying to comfort mason.At the same time i was worriying about edward I noticed reenesme looked very deep in thought.Then alll of the sudden esme is calling me ,my daughter,and my son to come quickly.Whehn we got there alice looked like she would be crying if she could cry.When I asked her what was wrong all she managed to choke out was Edward.Imediatly I knew something very bad had happened.
Ok guys i correct all my writings i hope you can understand them better!! please comment!!!
I didn't know how my life will be as vampire, how things should work with Charlie and Mom, keeping my self away from them is torturing my self.
I felt like I’m trapped without an exit
the only thing that keeps me strong is my family
Edward and Rennesme, now that they are not in more danger I feel more in peace.
But what will I should tell Charlie when the time to move arrives?
How will he react to this, He will have too many questions and how I suppose to explain it to him? I think that he already knows what we really are, but he is too scared to say it or just think about it.
But what I really know right now is that we are safe and will start our Happy Ever After no matter what happen or what people think about us.
I think
I didn't know how my life will be as vampire, how things should work with Charlie and Mom, keeping my self away from them is torturing my self.
I felt like I’m trapped without an exit
the only thing that keeps me strong is my family
Edward and Rennesme, now that they are not in more danger I feel more in peace.
But what will I should tell Charlie when the time to move arrives?
How will he react to this, He will have too many questions and how I suppose to explain it to him? I think that he already knows what we really are, but he is too scared to say it or just think about it.
But what I really know right now is that we are safe and will start our Happy Ever After no matter what happen or what people think about us.
I think
ok so this is a old song from the fiftys but i think it relates to how bella feels after edward leaves her in new moon so here it is
Why does the sun go on shining
Why does the sea rush to shore
Don't they know it's the end of the world
'Cause you don't love me any more
Why do the birds go on singing
Why do the stars glow above
Don't they know it's the end of the world
It ended when I lost your love
I wake up in the morning and I wonder
Why everything's the same as it was
I can't understand, no, I can't understand
How life goes on the way it does
Why does my heart go on beating
Why do these eyes of mine cry
Don't they know it's the end of the world
It ended when you said goodbye
Why does my heart go on beating
Why do these eyes of mine cry
Don't they know it's the end of the world
It ended when you said goodbye
Why does the sun go on shining
Why does the sea rush to shore
Don't they know it's the end of the world
'Cause you don't love me any more
Why do the birds go on singing
Why do the stars glow above
Don't they know it's the end of the world
It ended when I lost your love
I wake up in the morning and I wonder
Why everything's the same as it was
I can't understand, no, I can't understand
How life goes on the way it does
Why does my heart go on beating
Why do these eyes of mine cry
Don't they know it's the end of the world
It ended when you said goodbye
Why does my heart go on beating
Why do these eyes of mine cry
Don't they know it's the end of the world
It ended when you said goodbye
While I was trying to sleep I couldn't help feel excited about Breaking Dawn and remember the theories I read throughout the day. Then, I remembered the thing about dear Alice having lost all memory of being human. This led me to believe (since her lover was a vamp. right? or something like that.) that maybe Alice actualy wanted to become a vampire.
As a penalty or something, she forgot her memory....
So, maybe this will happen to Bella.... But, I doubt it.
It was just a random (and possibly a WAY off) theory, but I just wanted to share it with all of you.
^___^'
As a penalty or something, she forgot her memory....
So, maybe this will happen to Bella.... But, I doubt it.
It was just a random (and possibly a WAY off) theory, but I just wanted to share it with all of you.
^___^'
Twilight Fan-Fiction
Cake scene
~Bella's Point of view~
I felt my heart pumping,My lovely daughter was getting married to jake it's like my whole life was turned around,Renesmee with jake I so happy when I see Jacob with a suit he reminds me of my dance with him at my wedding
~Edward's point of view~
"Bella,I'm so happy our daughters getting married"
I saw Jacob walking towards us with a happy smile
~Jacob's point of view~
'Hey Bella,Edward I can't believe that it's me and renesmee's wedding"
I was so scared inside and happy on the outside,Everytime I see Nessie with the Beautiful Wedding gown I feel so happy and exciting, I over Heard Edward calling my name over the loud. Music,I bet it won't be good........TO BE CONTINUED;)
Cake scene
~Bella's Point of view~
I felt my heart pumping,My lovely daughter was getting married to jake it's like my whole life was turned around,Renesmee with jake I so happy when I see Jacob with a suit he reminds me of my dance with him at my wedding
~Edward's point of view~
"Bella,I'm so happy our daughters getting married"
I saw Jacob walking towards us with a happy smile
~Jacob's point of view~
'Hey Bella,Edward I can't believe that it's me and renesmee's wedding"
I was so scared inside and happy on the outside,Everytime I see Nessie with the Beautiful Wedding gown I feel so happy and exciting, I over Heard Edward calling my name over the loud. Music,I bet it won't be good........TO BE CONTINUED;)