Chapter 2 is up, please read and comment below. The chapters are getting longer now. I've got some ideas for later chapters, maybe something in Esme's point of view (we never really see her, thought it would be nice), I'm thinking of posting chapters weekly, some of them might be a bit late, I've got a lot on, but please look out for them. See you all with Chapter 3 Soon
Edwards POV
"Alice where are we going, can't we just go home with the others?" I said. All I wanted was to go home to my Bella and make sure she was ok.
"Edward she will be fine. Bella is a eighteen year old woman, I'm sure she can look after herself for fifteen minutes. Now quit whining and stay out of my head,you're not supposed to see this and I need to think without having to translate something in my head to keep you out."
Alice gave me one last look then hopped out of her Porshe 911 Turbo and began to skip to an big oak front door.
"Don't make a run for it either, I will see." She added in an undertone to me over her shoulder.
Alice was gone for nearly an hour before she returned with a black package in her hand. She slid in next to me and gracefully threw the package over her shoulder, so that it neatly landed foulded on the back seat.
"Right, we're done then, call your little girlie friend and tell us to meet us at the house, as I'm sure you already know I have a surprise for her and she is going to love it unless you are finally willing to bet against me?" She smiled up at me.
How could someone so small be so annoying? She knew perfectly well that there was only one time I was willing to bet against her and even then I was worried that she would be right.
The wedding was only the first step and then Bella would do anything in her power (and believe me she could be very convincing when she wanted to) to become a vampire.
Hurry up Edward,call her, or she will get there way after us and then the plan won't work. She needs to get there before us, then Emmett can distract her with something and then we walk in, you go sit with her for a while, whilst I sort everything out. And finally surprise she loves it.
Alice's thought were even more annoying than her words. I dialled the number and waited for 7 rings, humans could be so slow sometimes.
"Hello?" Her soft, velvety voice answered. I couldn't wait to marry her and be able to call her mine.
"Hi honey, it's me," She knew this already though I could tell by the quickening of her breath. "Head on over to the house, Alice says she's got a surprise for you, unfortunatly I can't help you she won't tell me what it is. Plus it will be just you girls tonight, we're planning the bachalor party. Love you."
"Kay," she said, her voice was distracted "I'll head on over."
"Bel-" I started but the line was cut off.
Edward, what's wrong? sometimes I wish I could block out Alice's thoughts.
"Jacob." Was all I replied. I didn't know how I knew but I knew. He was there. I should have known that if I'd forbidden her to go to La Push, he would go to Forks.
Edwards POV
"Alice where are we going, can't we just go home with the others?" I said. All I wanted was to go home to my Bella and make sure she was ok.
"Edward she will be fine. Bella is a eighteen year old woman, I'm sure she can look after herself for fifteen minutes. Now quit whining and stay out of my head,you're not supposed to see this and I need to think without having to translate something in my head to keep you out."
Alice gave me one last look then hopped out of her Porshe 911 Turbo and began to skip to an big oak front door.
"Don't make a run for it either, I will see." She added in an undertone to me over her shoulder.
Alice was gone for nearly an hour before she returned with a black package in her hand. She slid in next to me and gracefully threw the package over her shoulder, so that it neatly landed foulded on the back seat.
"Right, we're done then, call your little girlie friend and tell us to meet us at the house, as I'm sure you already know I have a surprise for her and she is going to love it unless you are finally willing to bet against me?" She smiled up at me.
How could someone so small be so annoying? She knew perfectly well that there was only one time I was willing to bet against her and even then I was worried that she would be right.
The wedding was only the first step and then Bella would do anything in her power (and believe me she could be very convincing when she wanted to) to become a vampire.
Hurry up Edward,call her, or she will get there way after us and then the plan won't work. She needs to get there before us, then Emmett can distract her with something and then we walk in, you go sit with her for a while, whilst I sort everything out. And finally surprise she loves it.
Alice's thought were even more annoying than her words. I dialled the number and waited for 7 rings, humans could be so slow sometimes.
"Hello?" Her soft, velvety voice answered. I couldn't wait to marry her and be able to call her mine.
"Hi honey, it's me," She knew this already though I could tell by the quickening of her breath. "Head on over to the house, Alice says she's got a surprise for you, unfortunatly I can't help you she won't tell me what it is. Plus it will be just you girls tonight, we're planning the bachalor party. Love you."
"Kay," she said, her voice was distracted "I'll head on over."
"Bel-" I started but the line was cut off.
Edward, what's wrong? sometimes I wish I could block out Alice's thoughts.
"Jacob." Was all I replied. I didn't know how I knew but I knew. He was there. I should have known that if I'd forbidden her to go to La Push, he would go to Forks.
enjoy!
I probaly said thank you thirty times.
When I heard that they didn't have a place to stay i offered for them to stay here. They aren't living in out hotel room but they are only to doors away.
When i woke up i turned to susans side.She wasn't there. A note took her place.
It read
Dear Chris,
I am pretty sure i got you with the note!
The guys said you would think i left. (it worked)
We are hanging out in their room and we are playing spin the bottle. (what!)
Love,
Susan ps. got you again!
I looked at her hand writing it was very pretty.
I got dressed and walked to the elevator.When i noticed i pressed two when i didn't even have to change from 11 the doors closed.I pressed the 11 button mabye 5 times.When it went up I sighed.
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to be continued...
When we reached my home mason was crying and reenesme was trying to comfort her little brother.Alice and esme were talking very fast so I only caught little bits and pieces of the conversation .But it seemed that we were going to have to wait till edward and jacob and the other boys came back.while esme and alice were disscussing the subject reenesme and i were trying to comfort mason.At the same time i was worriying about edward I noticed reenesme looked very deep in thought.Then alll of the sudden esme is calling me ,my daughter,and my son to come quickly.Whehn we got there alice looked like she would be crying if she could cry.When I asked her what was wrong all she managed to choke out was Edward.Imediatly I knew something very bad had happened.
you always cut my heart out with two words: good bye
Ok guys i correct all my writings i hope you can understand them better!! please comment!!!
I didn't know how my life will be as vampire, how things should work with Charlie and Mom, keeping my self away from them is torturing my self.
I felt like I’m trapped without an exit
the only thing that keeps me strong is my family
Edward and Rennesme, now that they are not in more danger I feel more in peace.
But what will I should tell Charlie when the time to move arrives?
How will he react to this, He will have too many questions and how I suppose to explain it to him? I think that he already knows what we really are, but he is too scared to say it or just think about it.
But what I really know right now is that we are safe and will start our Happy Ever After no matter what happen or what people think about us.
I think
I didn't know how my life will be as vampire, how things should work with Charlie and Mom, keeping my self away from them is torturing my self.
I felt like I’m trapped without an exit
the only thing that keeps me strong is my family
Edward and Rennesme, now that they are not in more danger I feel more in peace.
But what will I should tell Charlie when the time to move arrives?
How will he react to this, He will have too many questions and how I suppose to explain it to him? I think that he already knows what we really are, but he is too scared to say it or just think about it.
But what I really know right now is that we are safe and will start our Happy Ever After no matter what happen or what people think about us.
I think
Hilarie Burton as Peyton Sawyor!
ok so this is a old song from the fiftys but i think it relates to how bella feels after edward leaves her in new moon so here it is
Why does the sun go on shining
Why does the sea rush to shore
Don't they know it's the end of the world
'Cause you don't love me any more
Why do the birds go on singing
Why do the stars glow above
Don't they know it's the end of the world
It ended when I lost your love
I wake up in the morning and I wonder
Why everything's the same as it was
I can't understand, no, I can't understand
How life goes on the way it does
Why does my heart go on beating
Why do these eyes of mine cry
Don't they know it's the end of the world
It ended when you said goodbye
Why does my heart go on beating
Why do these eyes of mine cry
Don't they know it's the end of the world
It ended when you said goodbye
Why does the sun go on shining
Why does the sea rush to shore
Don't they know it's the end of the world
'Cause you don't love me any more
Why do the birds go on singing
Why do the stars glow above
Don't they know it's the end of the world
It ended when I lost your love
I wake up in the morning and I wonder
Why everything's the same as it was
I can't understand, no, I can't understand
How life goes on the way it does
Why does my heart go on beating
Why do these eyes of mine cry
Don't they know it's the end of the world
It ended when you said goodbye
Why does my heart go on beating
Why do these eyes of mine cry
Don't they know it's the end of the world
It ended when you said goodbye
