Okay, I have never done anything like this before, so please do not laugh, but constructive criticism is welcome. Thanks <3
This is my version of Bella's cliff diving experience in New Moon:
Plummeting through the air at a million miles an hour. I was soaring, cutting my path through the low hanging clouds. I was on top of the world, I was queen. I could see nothing but blue. Suddenly, the air was gone. I was covered in liquid, submerged in a pool of terror. I would have swum to the surface, I could see it, but my legs were failing me. I was going to die if I just stayed here, frozen. I started having hallucinations, seeing myself break the trance and save myself from certain death. I saw myself rip to the surface and take a deep, satisfying breath. The hallucination was making my throat burn for air, I could see myself alive, breathing in the salty sea air from above in my mind, but I could also see the bottom of the ocean from where I was in reality. I was frozen, locked in place I sank away into the deep depths of the unknown. My vision was hazed and my lungs were on fire. Out of habit I opened my mouth and took what was to be my last breath, in that split second what seemed like all the water in the ocean filled my lungs. I was coughing and spluttering, frantically trying, and failing to displace the water weighing me down. It was no use; I faded into the pitch-black background of existence. All I could think of was him, I was dying and my mind was crammed with memories of our time together. I internally cursed myself for still being unable to think of his name, even in my dying moments I could not forgive him for leaving me. I knew this would kill him, but it was not his fault, he should not be punished for my selfishness. Then it clicked, I had to live, if not for me, then for Edward. There I said it, Edward Cullen! In the split second it took me to realise what I was doing was wrong, I also realised it was too late. I was no longer breathing, I could no longer see anything and I could feel that I was no longer attached to the body I was clinging to. I was dead.
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This is my version of Bella's cliff diving experience in New Moon:
Plummeting through the air at a million miles an hour. I was soaring, cutting my path through the low hanging clouds. I was on top of the world, I was queen. I could see nothing but blue. Suddenly, the air was gone. I was covered in liquid, submerged in a pool of terror. I would have swum to the surface, I could see it, but my legs were failing me. I was going to die if I just stayed here, frozen. I started having hallucinations, seeing myself break the trance and save myself from certain death. I saw myself rip to the surface and take a deep, satisfying breath. The hallucination was making my throat burn for air, I could see myself alive, breathing in the salty sea air from above in my mind, but I could also see the bottom of the ocean from where I was in reality. I was frozen, locked in place I sank away into the deep depths of the unknown. My vision was hazed and my lungs were on fire. Out of habit I opened my mouth and took what was to be my last breath, in that split second what seemed like all the water in the ocean filled my lungs. I was coughing and spluttering, frantically trying, and failing to displace the water weighing me down. It was no use; I faded into the pitch-black background of existence. All I could think of was him, I was dying and my mind was crammed with memories of our time together. I internally cursed myself for still being unable to think of his name, even in my dying moments I could not forgive him for leaving me. I knew this would kill him, but it was not his fault, he should not be punished for my selfishness. Then it clicked, I had to live, if not for me, then for Edward. There I said it, Edward Cullen! In the split second it took me to realise what I was doing was wrong, I also realised it was too late. I was no longer breathing, I could no longer see anything and I could feel that I was no longer attached to the body I was clinging to. I was dead.
PLEASE rate and comment. Thanks XOXO
Regarding Kayla.....
Guys, I regret to inform you that my internet had committed technical suicide. I have stolen someone's laptop to write this and I hate to tell you that until someone revives my internet no further Kayla chapters can be posted.
This is an unforseen event and I will kick as many asses as I can to get the internet working agan.
I will continue to write the chapters and try to steal as many laptops and PCs as possible to post them.
I hate that I leave my story with you at such a critical point. Unfortunately this post is just a spur of the moment thing and I don't have my memory stick with me or I'd shove a chapter on at the end of this message.
Very sorry my peeps. You can verbally abuse me, my internet or BT broadband or all three!
Emmii-Luu
Guys, I regret to inform you that my internet had committed technical suicide. I have stolen someone's laptop to write this and I hate to tell you that until someone revives my internet no further Kayla chapters can be posted.
This is an unforseen event and I will kick as many asses as I can to get the internet working agan.
I will continue to write the chapters and try to steal as many laptops and PCs as possible to post them.
I hate that I leave my story with you at such a critical point. Unfortunately this post is just a spur of the moment thing and I don't have my memory stick with me or I'd shove a chapter on at the end of this message.
Very sorry my peeps. You can verbally abuse me, my internet or BT broadband or all three!
Emmii-Luu