Yes finally chapter one is up its kinda long for me so hope you like it and please review ood and bad comments will be excepted because i'd like to know what i can improve!! thank you
Chapter 1- The long and awaited call
"Hello?" i answered immediately.
"Hi is this Pizza Hut?" an unfamiliar voice replied.
I groaned, "NO! I'm waiting for an important phone call!" I yelled which now I feel bad for now.
"Sorry." and I hung up.
"Gosh people are just ignorant these days." I complained to the rest of the band.
"Yeah, I think people found out our numbers and do this on purpose because I’ve gotten two already today for pizza.” Jeremy said.
“Right, ignorant.” I said.
Suddenly Jeremy’s house phone rang and he ran to answer it, ”Hello?” he asked. There was a slight pause and his eyes got all wide and he smiled.
“Yes we’ll be there…thank you so much…goodbye.”
I ran over to him, “Yes, no, maybe so?” I squealed.
All of a sudden Zac burst out laughing.
“What?” everyone said in unison.
“You know what someone said to me yesterday when they called for Papa Johns and you know what I said," Zac said Still laughing.
"No we don't Zac." I said bored.
"I'm a-gonna Papa your butt if you keep calling!" Zac said and fell off his chair laughing at his 'joke'.
I finally laughed because I knew it was funny, ”Okay that’s enough. So Jeremy do we have the gig or not?” I asked.
The rest of us stood up and stared at him.
He looked at us nervously but finally screamed, “we got the gig and a private plane is coming to get us at 8:00 p.m.”
As soon as Jeremy said 8:00 p.m. I ran outside to my Cobalt and jumped in and sped down the road to my house as fast as I could. I was surprised at how fast I was going. It was almost 90 M.P.H.
I reached my house in less than two minutes. I ran into my house and up to my room.
My sister followed me up and asked, “Where are you going this time?”
I was too out of breath to answer right now so all I got out was, “It-a-ly”
She smiled. I knew she was going to ask to come.
“No” I said.
She growled something and walked out of the room.
“Maybe you can come when we’re more close to home and not gone for as long.” I called after her.
I looked at the clock, it was already 6:45p.m. I had to get back to Jeremy’s
When I was done at 7:00p.m., I rushed out side with my four suitcases after saying goodbye to my family and put them in my trunk and headed back to Jeremy’s.
When I got there, Mrs. Farro had her giant twelve passenger van for only the five of us to take us to the airport. I pulled into the driveway next to her and popped my trunk she walked over to it and helped put mine in he back of the van.
Surprisingly the boys already had all the band equipment in the back. Normally I would have to do all that.
I ran over to the door and jumped in with the boys in the backseats and pulled out my phone to check the time and it was 7:40.
“Hey we have like 20 minutes, do you think we’ll make it?” I asked scared we wouldn’t.
“It’s a private plane just for us and the owners children will be on there…I think.” Zac said.
“Yeah Zac, only there children, which I think are Jane and Alec, are going to be on. Well the pilots too but they aren’t going to even talk to us except to put our seat belts on.” Jeremy said.
Suddenly the car came to a stop and I heard planes taking off and landing.
I looked around and saw one thing out of place. One of the planes were black with no writing on it. All the other planes were white and had a city names and ‘continental airlines’ or something else.
“I’m guessing the black one is ours.” I said quietly.
“Well the plane number is 6676...so let’s check first.” Jeremy said.
“I’ll go inside and check.” Mrs. Farro said. I forgot she was even here.
She got out and headed toward the directory terminal.
About ten long minutes later she came back and said, “You still have to go through security but that is the plane.”
I hopped out of the car and almost bumped into a little girl that had the most perfect face, but really pale skin.
“Oh sorry.” I said and took a step back, a little frightened by her appearance.
“No that’s okay and security wont be necessary. I’m Jane by the way, you must be Hayley?” she asked.
“Yes, as a matter of fact I am.” I replied and everyone else came out of the van. “Umm… this is Jeremy, Taylor, Josh, and Zac.” I said while pointing to each one when I said there names.
A young, but breathtakingly beautiful boy walked over to stand next to Jane. He looked about the same age as her.
I assumed he was Alec.
“Hello Paramore. I am Alec. My father Aro is waiting, I think we should leave. Just drive your van over to out plane and we can put you things in and get going.” he said.
They walked toward the plane and I jumped into the van.
When we got there after what seemed like hours with Mrs. Farro’s cautious driving, Jane, Alec, and two other men walked over to the trunk and pulled out all the suitcases and music equipment.
“Oh be careful with the equipment please.” I told them.
They nodded and started taking to the luggage area of the plane.
Jane walked over to me and said, “I very much adore your music.” and pulled me to the door and up the stairs, which I almost fell at the speed she was walking.
It was very warm here, but Jane was wearing heavy gloves, “It isn’t cold in Italy, is it?” I asked when she noticed me looking at them.
She laughed, ”No I thought it was cold here!” she looked at her brother.
We walked over to the sitting area and I picked a seat next to the window.
Jane sat right next to me.
“So do you have any particular song you want us to play?” I asked trying to make conversation after an awkward silence.
“Umm can you still play some of your old demos?” Jane asked.
“That depends which ones.” I replied.
“Stop This Song (Lovesick Melody) and My Hero.” she replied.
“Lovesick Melody is good but I’m not sure about My Hero. We haven’t sung that in like 2 years it was one of our first songs.”
“Well you have time to practice your not playing until 6:00 p.m. tomorrow. This is a twelve hour flight.”
“Okay we’ll try to get them in with the ones we have now.”
“What’s your set list now?” Jane asked?
I pulled out a piece of paper from my carry-on and said, “Fences, Born For This, We are Broken, That’s What You Get, Decode, Decoy, and I Caught Myself.” I replied.
“Well it will only make it like 10 more minutes, and if it’d too ling you can take one out.” Jane said and stood up.
I haven’t even realized ho long we’ve been talking. It was already 11:30 p.m. I yawned.
“You look tired, I’ll let you get some sleep for tomorrow.” Jane said quietly and reached up to get a pillow and blanket.
I looked around and saw everyone else was sleeping except for Jane and Alec.
I laid my head on the pillow and closed my eyes.
I was just thinking about those songs and about today’s events. I soon drifted into sleep while singing Stop This Song (Lovesick Melody) in my head.
Chapter 1- The long and awaited call
"Hello?" i answered immediately.
"Hi is this Pizza Hut?" an unfamiliar voice replied.
I groaned, "NO! I'm waiting for an important phone call!" I yelled which now I feel bad for now.
"Sorry." and I hung up.
"Gosh people are just ignorant these days." I complained to the rest of the band.
"Yeah, I think people found out our numbers and do this on purpose because I’ve gotten two already today for pizza.” Jeremy said.
“Right, ignorant.” I said.
Suddenly Jeremy’s house phone rang and he ran to answer it, ”Hello?” he asked. There was a slight pause and his eyes got all wide and he smiled.
“Yes we’ll be there…thank you so much…goodbye.”
I ran over to him, “Yes, no, maybe so?” I squealed.
All of a sudden Zac burst out laughing.
“What?” everyone said in unison.
“You know what someone said to me yesterday when they called for Papa Johns and you know what I said," Zac said Still laughing.
"No we don't Zac." I said bored.
"I'm a-gonna Papa your butt if you keep calling!" Zac said and fell off his chair laughing at his 'joke'.
I finally laughed because I knew it was funny, ”Okay that’s enough. So Jeremy do we have the gig or not?” I asked.
The rest of us stood up and stared at him.
He looked at us nervously but finally screamed, “we got the gig and a private plane is coming to get us at 8:00 p.m.”
As soon as Jeremy said 8:00 p.m. I ran outside to my Cobalt and jumped in and sped down the road to my house as fast as I could. I was surprised at how fast I was going. It was almost 90 M.P.H.
I reached my house in less than two minutes. I ran into my house and up to my room.
My sister followed me up and asked, “Where are you going this time?”
I was too out of breath to answer right now so all I got out was, “It-a-ly”
She smiled. I knew she was going to ask to come.
“No” I said.
She growled something and walked out of the room.
“Maybe you can come when we’re more close to home and not gone for as long.” I called after her.
I looked at the clock, it was already 6:45p.m. I had to get back to Jeremy’s
When I was done at 7:00p.m., I rushed out side with my four suitcases after saying goodbye to my family and put them in my trunk and headed back to Jeremy’s.
When I got there, Mrs. Farro had her giant twelve passenger van for only the five of us to take us to the airport. I pulled into the driveway next to her and popped my trunk she walked over to it and helped put mine in he back of the van.
Surprisingly the boys already had all the band equipment in the back. Normally I would have to do all that.
I ran over to the door and jumped in with the boys in the backseats and pulled out my phone to check the time and it was 7:40.
“Hey we have like 20 minutes, do you think we’ll make it?” I asked scared we wouldn’t.
“It’s a private plane just for us and the owners children will be on there…I think.” Zac said.
“Yeah Zac, only there children, which I think are Jane and Alec, are going to be on. Well the pilots too but they aren’t going to even talk to us except to put our seat belts on.” Jeremy said.
Suddenly the car came to a stop and I heard planes taking off and landing.
I looked around and saw one thing out of place. One of the planes were black with no writing on it. All the other planes were white and had a city names and ‘continental airlines’ or something else.
“I’m guessing the black one is ours.” I said quietly.
“Well the plane number is 6676...so let’s check first.” Jeremy said.
“I’ll go inside and check.” Mrs. Farro said. I forgot she was even here.
She got out and headed toward the directory terminal.
About ten long minutes later she came back and said, “You still have to go through security but that is the plane.”
I hopped out of the car and almost bumped into a little girl that had the most perfect face, but really pale skin.
“Oh sorry.” I said and took a step back, a little frightened by her appearance.
“No that’s okay and security wont be necessary. I’m Jane by the way, you must be Hayley?” she asked.
“Yes, as a matter of fact I am.” I replied and everyone else came out of the van. “Umm… this is Jeremy, Taylor, Josh, and Zac.” I said while pointing to each one when I said there names.
A young, but breathtakingly beautiful boy walked over to stand next to Jane. He looked about the same age as her.
I assumed he was Alec.
“Hello Paramore. I am Alec. My father Aro is waiting, I think we should leave. Just drive your van over to out plane and we can put you things in and get going.” he said.
They walked toward the plane and I jumped into the van.
When we got there after what seemed like hours with Mrs. Farro’s cautious driving, Jane, Alec, and two other men walked over to the trunk and pulled out all the suitcases and music equipment.
“Oh be careful with the equipment please.” I told them.
They nodded and started taking to the luggage area of the plane.
Jane walked over to me and said, “I very much adore your music.” and pulled me to the door and up the stairs, which I almost fell at the speed she was walking.
It was very warm here, but Jane was wearing heavy gloves, “It isn’t cold in Italy, is it?” I asked when she noticed me looking at them.
She laughed, ”No I thought it was cold here!” she looked at her brother.
We walked over to the sitting area and I picked a seat next to the window.
Jane sat right next to me.
“So do you have any particular song you want us to play?” I asked trying to make conversation after an awkward silence.
“Umm can you still play some of your old demos?” Jane asked.
“That depends which ones.” I replied.
“Stop This Song (Lovesick Melody) and My Hero.” she replied.
“Lovesick Melody is good but I’m not sure about My Hero. We haven’t sung that in like 2 years it was one of our first songs.”
“Well you have time to practice your not playing until 6:00 p.m. tomorrow. This is a twelve hour flight.”
“Okay we’ll try to get them in with the ones we have now.”
“What’s your set list now?” Jane asked?
I pulled out a piece of paper from my carry-on and said, “Fences, Born For This, We are Broken, That’s What You Get, Decode, Decoy, and I Caught Myself.” I replied.
“Well it will only make it like 10 more minutes, and if it’d too ling you can take one out.” Jane said and stood up.
I haven’t even realized ho long we’ve been talking. It was already 11:30 p.m. I yawned.
“You look tired, I’ll let you get some sleep for tomorrow.” Jane said quietly and reached up to get a pillow and blanket.
I looked around and saw everyone else was sleeping except for Jane and Alec.
I laid my head on the pillow and closed my eyes.
I was just thinking about those songs and about today’s events. I soon drifted into sleep while singing Stop This Song (Lovesick Melody) in my head.
I personal would like to just speak my mind. To all of you don't want her to be Jane, I guess I understand. But, I like Dakota Fanning. She's a great actress and I think she'd be great. Here are some reasons why I want he to be Jane.
1. She's been in TONS of movies, so she has experience.
2. She looks the role (In my opinion.)
3. She in "Push" so I would think she has some experience with things like New Moon (and the rest).
4. She's always the good-girl. For once she should be bad.
Those are only some that I can think of at the moment.
If you don't want her to be, I respect that. Also, if you think that, leave a comment saying why or why not please!
Also, if you actually read this:
Thanks!
1. She's been in TONS of movies, so she has experience.
2. She looks the role (In my opinion.)
3. She in "Push" so I would think she has some experience with things like New Moon (and the rest).
4. She's always the good-girl. For once she should be bad.
Those are only some that I can think of at the moment.
If you don't want her to be, I respect that. Also, if you think that, leave a comment saying why or why not please!
Also, if you actually read this:
Thanks!
1. He tells her to stay away from him.
2. She says shes not afraid of him.
3. He lets her cry on his shirt and ruin it.
4. He just wants her to be happy.
5. She trusts him.
6. He didn't kill her
7. When the car threatened to crush her all he could think was "Not her"
8. The lion fell in love with the lamb.
9. He left her only for her protection.
10. He won't end her life for her.
11. He took her to the prom because he did't want her to miss anything.
12. He feels very protective of her.
13. He risked blowing the family secret to save her.
14. He is her "Prisoner".
15. He dazzles her.
16. She doesn't care that he is a "Killer".
17. He sayed with her in the Hospital
18. He watches her sleep.
19. She always forgives him.
20. He dove her home when she felt sick.
2. She says shes not afraid of him.
3. He lets her cry on his shirt and ruin it.
4. He just wants her to be happy.
5. She trusts him.
6. He didn't kill her
7. When the car threatened to crush her all he could think was "Not her"
8. The lion fell in love with the lamb.
9. He left her only for her protection.
10. He won't end her life for her.
11. He took her to the prom because he did't want her to miss anything.
12. He feels very protective of her.
13. He risked blowing the family secret to save her.
14. He is her "Prisoner".
15. He dazzles her.
16. She doesn't care that he is a "Killer".
17. He sayed with her in the Hospital
18. He watches her sleep.
19. She always forgives him.
20. He dove her home when she felt sick.
Distributor: Summit Entertainment Release Date: November 21, 2008
Genre: Romance Running Time: 2 hrs. 0 min.
MPAA Rating: PG-13 Production Budget: $37 million
TOTAL LIFETIME GROSSES
Domestic: $138,552,000 86.7%
+ Foreign: $21,325,749 13.3%
= Worldwide: $159,877,749
DOMESTIC SUMMARY
Opening Weekend: $69,637,740
(3,419 theaters, $20,368 average)
% of Total Gross: 50.3%
Widest Release: 3,620 theaters
In Release: 17 days / 2.4 weeks
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I got into the house.I knew that it was worse than james I held my Drink.
Edward We need to be prepared.I could train with Jasper he wasin the army before he was turned. He could train us both me and Buffy .I held my cross bow "Hmm"I oiled it .
I saw that my tojo blades were getting rusty
I decided to Grab all my slaying stuff.
More avanced Sliver stakes but doesn't work as well as holy water and fire filled Cross.
I ran down to the basement.I felt pain from another.It was Jazz.He was reading "gone With The Wind".
Oh god why "jazz please stop i can feel your hurt."
huh?
It's one of my abilities now stop felling sorry for your self and help us didn't you hear from edward theres a new evil in town!
Edward We need to be prepared.I could train with Jasper he wasin the army before he was turned. He could train us both me and Buffy .I held my cross bow "Hmm"I oiled it .
I saw that my tojo blades were getting rusty
I decided to Grab all my slaying stuff.
More avanced Sliver stakes but doesn't work as well as holy water and fire filled Cross.
I ran down to the basement.I felt pain from another.It was Jazz.He was reading "gone With The Wind".
Oh god why "jazz please stop i can feel your hurt."
huh?
It's one of my abilities now stop felling sorry for your self and help us didn't you hear from edward theres a new evil in town!
Okay, this might be a big-old pointless rant, but i absolutely hate when people BASH on other character (i'm not saying any names) and i'm not just talking about Jacob-hating. If you want to bash on Jacob or any other character for that matter go the Jacob-Hating Spot, and if their isn't one, create one then!!!! I don't mind people sharing well-though out and intelligent opinions, it's just that i'm absolutley sick of all this hating on Jacob and Jacob lovers! I hate completely and utter idiocy comments done on this spot for Twilight lovers IN GENERAL like "Jacob f*** sucks!" and we've all seen it and heard of it, and i doubt this article will make any difference but i needed to get it out of my system. You don't see me going aroung saying things like "Edward sucks, and Bella will ALWAYS belong to Jacob." because it would seriously piss of ALOT of people. My thoughts. That's all. Don't care if someone comments on this just to somehow piss me off.
(End of pointless-rant)
(End of pointless-rant)
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