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this is the next part of the story. it's much longer than i thought it would be but i think it makes it better.
(P.S this is not my story all credit goes to steph meyer)




Caius, who was getting very frustrated, smiled hugely when Aro tacked on his little condition.
I knew this was coming, but I couldn’t mean it. I stared down at Bella, her soft, beautiful face staring up at me. “Mean it,” she whispered, agony written all over her heart-shaped face. “Please.”
I felt my expression twist at the tone of her voice. She still wanted it so badly, but I couldn’t give it to her. This good, pure, kind-hearted person deserved an eternity in heaven, and I couldn’t risk it for her. I wouldn’t destroy a chance at her never ending happiness.
But before I could even say anything, Alice stepped forward toward Aro, her hand upraised like Aro.
I knew what she was going to do. She was going to show him the rock solid future of Bella, pale white with blood red eyes.
Aro looked at her with an acquisitive glint, his thoughts possessive.
He bent his head over their joined hands, his eyes closing as he concentrated. Alice was motionless, her face blank. I listened to the thoughts running through Aro’s head. My teeth snapped together in anger. Alice had meant him to see only the one vision, but his curiosity was insatiable. He was seeing everything, her whole life. The time passed slowly and I felt Bella grow tenser with every second that went by.
Finally, after looking at all of Alice’s future visions, including the one of Bella cold, white and red eyed, Aro’s soft laughter broke the silence.
“Ha, ha, ha.” He laughed, his head still bent forward. He looked up slowly, his eyes bright with excitement.
“That was fascinating!” Aro continued.
Alice wasn’t happy. “I’m glad you enjoyed it.” She said dryly.
Aro seemed oblivious to Alice’s discomfort. “To see the things you’ve seen—especially the ones that haven’t happened yet!” he shook his head in wonder. The feeling of possessiveness filled Aro’s head.
“But that will.” Alice reminded him quietly and calmly.
“Yes, yes, it’s quite determined. Certainly there is no problem.”
Caius’s thoughts were chagrined and a look of bitter disappointment crossed his features. Felix and Jane seemed to feel the same way.
“Aro.” Caius complained, sounding like a pouting child.
“Dear Caius,” Aro smiled, humouring him. “Do not fret. Think of the possibilities! They do not join us today, but we can always hope for the future. Imagine the joy young Alice alone would bring to our little household... Besides, I’m so terribly curious to see how Bella turns out!” Aro was soothing Caius, but there was a very subtle threat concealed in his words that I didn’t miss.
“Then we are free to go now?” my voice was even, but I wanted to answer in scathing tone, let Caius know my true feelings.
But I couldn’t. Not if I wanted to leave with Bella by my side.
Caius was having difficulty talking, his anger overwhelming, so Aro answered.
“Yes, yes.” Aro replied pleasantly, dismissing Caius. “But please visit again. It’s been absolutely enthralling!”
Caius recovered himself enough to leave us with a threat. “And we will visit you as well.” Caius promised, eyes half closed, looking more dangerous like this than any other expression. “To be sure that you follow through on your side. Were I you, I would not delay too long. We do not offer second chances.”
How could he? Subtle threats were one thing, but to state one so openly? My jaw clenched together tightly, but I nodded.
Caius smirked and drifted back to where Marcus still sat, unmoving and uninterested.
Felix groaned behind us, alerting me to his hunger.
“Ah, Felix.” Aro smiled, amused. “Heidi will be here at any moment. Patience.”
Images filled Aro’s head, images of what was coming. Bella couldn’t see that.
“Hmm.” The edge in my voice was clearly discernible. “In that case, perhaps we’d better leave sooner rather than later.”
“Yes.” Aro agreed for an entirely different reason. “That’s a good idea. Accidents do happen. Please wait below until after dark, though, if you don’t mind.”
“Of course.” I agreed quickly. Best not to push my luck. Bella cringed against me, clearly not wanting to spend any more time here than necessary. Wise of her.
“And here.” Aro added, motioning to Felix with one finger. Felix came forward at once, and Aro unfastened the grey cloak he wore. He tossed it to me. I didn’t want to put it on. I knew what Aro would think.
I put it on anyway, leaving the hood down.
Aro sighed, and I almost winced. “It suits you.”
Suddenly the strange longing Aro felt became impossibly humours. I chuckled, but stopped suddenly. Heidi’s thoughts had interrupted me, surrounded by the thoughts of numerous other people.
“Thank you, Aro. We’ll wait below.” We needed to move quickly, Bella would surely realise what the people were for.
“Goodbye, young friends.” Aro stared in Heidi’s direction, his eyes bright with anticipation.
“Let’s go.” I whispered urgently to Bella. Demetri gestured that we should follow, setting off the way we came in.
I pulled Bella along by my side, wishing I could pick her up and carry her so we could move faster. I almost did when Alice, standing on Bella’s other side muttered “Not fast enough.”
The babble of voices was loud to me, but by the scared look Bella gave Alice, she couldn’t hear them yet.
“Well this is unusual.” A man’s voice came from just outside the antechamber. Bella’s eyes flickered towards the sound, so I knew she could hear him.
A shrill female voice answered. “So Medieval.” Bella shrunk back against me as we pressed against the wall to let them all through. She was still shaking slightly, but when I quickly glanced down at her, confusion was written in her eyes, and a tiny crease wrinkled her forehead between her eyebrows. She still didn’t realise what was happening.
“Welcome, guests! Welcome to Volterra!” Aro’s melodious voice called.
I pulled Bella’s face against my chest in an effort to stop her seeing what was in front of us, but I was a second too late. Her breaths came shallow and quick, and moisture swelled up in the corner of her eyes.
Agony filled me. I didn’t want Bella to feel this.
The smallest gap appeared in the crowd, and I pulled Bella forward, Alice quickly following.
A strikingly beautiful woman stood in the now empty hallway. Heidi.
“Welcome home, Heidi.” Demetri greeted her from behind us.
Heidi smiled absently, staring at our small group, her eyes focusing on my arm wrapped around Bella. I barely glanced at Heidi. My eyes were fixed on Bella’s now pale face.
“Demetri.” She responded in a velvet voice, her eyes now flickering between Bella and the cloak I wore. Her thoughts were like Rosalie’s. Loud, haughty and self absorbed.
Hmm, I wonder I he made a deal with Aro? She thought, not really caring. She had caught a glimpse of herself in the glass of a picture frame behind us, and was uninterested in everything else.
“Nice fishing.” Demetri complemented her, trying to grab the beautiful woman’s attention.
“Thanks.” She responded, flashing a stunning smile. “Aren’t you coming?”
“In a minute. Save a few for me.” So Felix doesn’t get them all, Demetri tacked on.
Heidi nodded and ducked through the door with one last curious look at Bella.
I pulled Bella along fast, so she was running to keep up, but we still didn’t get far enough away before the screams started.
    
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the next bit will be on soon. stay tuned...
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Second Chapter, please comment below and let me know what you think

Uh great, are you kidding me? My car would have to break down in front of this house of all them wouldn’t it? Gosh my life sucks. The creepy house down the road stared at me menacingly; I was closer to this house now than I had ever wanted to be in my entire life.
It was pouring down buckets and I could scarcely see because the now arising fog. I’d have to go to the house to get help, after all I could leave my car stalled in the middle of the street like this, but the big guy scared me so much that I was willing to sit here...
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posted by countrygirl2008
Some say once you start your life as a vampire you gradually forget your human life over time.That's not my case.I remember clearly like it was yesterday.
I was born in the early 1640's .My father Xviar was an angelican pastor.His hobby which was also his life was killing vampires and werewolves.He was devoted to it.More than he was to us.My mother Rebecca was a home maker.She was loved by me and the farm hands.After i was born she couldnt have any more kids.So i was her one and only child.Her light.I loved spending time with my mother in the kitchen or hanging around and helping the farm hands.The...
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posted by ebcullen4ever
Have you ever wondered what was Edward's POV of New Moon?I thought I would try to do what Stephenie did by writing Edward's POV for Twilight with Midnight Sun and write his POV of New Moon.

This is my first ever attempt at writing fanfiction,so please be kind.I hope you enjoy it.

Chapter 1: My Beautiful Bella

After coming home from my hunting trip,I went to my room to get ready to go to school.As I was getting ready,my eyes drifted to the picture on my dresser and I smiled looking at it.The picture was of my angel,my reason for existing,my beautiful Bella.It was a picture of the two of us at prom.It...
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posted by ebcullen4ever
These are my fave quotes from the Eclipse book and movie.I hope you enjoy them.

The word boyfriend had me chewing on the inside of my cheek with a familiar tension while I stirred. It wasn’t the right word, not at all. I needed something more expressive of eternal commitment… But words like destiny and fate sounded hokey when you used them in casual conversation.

Bella Swan, Eclipse, Chapter 1, p.6

It worked — your cooking skills have me soft as a marshmallow.

Bella Swan, Eclipse, Chapter 1, p.9

I wrenched the door out of my way — ridiculously eager — and there he was, my personal...
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I'M BACK!!!!! Sorry I've been gone for so long.I had a major writers block and my life has been hectic!! Anyways! AT LAST!!! A NEW Chapter of My Brother's Roommate!! *cheers*



"Is this the last box Bells?" Emmett asked me as he sat the last box in the living room.

"Yea, Everything else is being shipped." I said back and leaned against the wall. I couldn't believe it. I loved my new house.The fresh new paint smell, the porch, the backyard....it was perfect.

I closed my eyes and when I opened them again, it was dark and Edward was laying next to me looking into my eyes.

"Hi" He whispered and smiled...
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posted by Vamp_Fan_25
These are some Twilight teams and why you should be part of them!

Team Edward....because mysteries are fun to solve

Team Jacob....beacuse well I think we all know why were on his side

Team Bella....beacause nice girls always finish first

Team Alice....beacuse good things come in small packages

Team Jasper....beacause he'll protect you

Team Rosalie....because beauty comes before brains

Team Emmett....beacuse Jacob's muscles are flimsy

Team Esme....beacuse mum's rule the world

Team Carlisle....beacuase he is the only hot doctor you will find
posted by SenTay
Disclaimer I don't own anything related to Jackson Rathbone. Except my obsession.

Edward's POV

"Daddy!" screamed Renesme. Another nightmare. "What's wrong princess?" "I had a nightmare! A man! He was standing in the kitchen, and his knife was ITCHY!" Confused, I started to remember something. In the kitchen with a knife that's itchin...... I ran back to the house. "Emmett!" I screamed, " For the eighth time! "Keep Awake" is NOT a lullaby!"


I will kill you in your sleep
So you better try, try and keep awake
I will kill you in your sleep
So you better try, try and keep awake
I will kill you in your...
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Chapter 4 is now up please read and comment below. Chapter 5 is coming soon and so is the wedding with a few funny bits from Emmett in them. Look out for it.


Alice's POV
As I braked the car in a perfect posistion right outside the front door, I caught it. It was a vision I had whilst I was thinking about how to get Bella to co-operate without a fuss.
In my vision I plainly walked into the room, dress in my hand, in plain sight,as to not scare her with the unknown. As my vision self walked to the edge of the room her heart had suddenly increased. She had tried to run out, when Edward had walked...
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posted by LexisFaith
Tough, I ain’t never been nothin’ but tough
All my edges have always been rough
But Jesus loves me anyway
Oh, back home, there ain’t nothing wrong
With a woman that got a little back bone
Just wait 'til you taste her kind of love…
You want a shy little thing, a pretty little high-heel thing
You’re gonna cry if I don’t polish up… tough

Tough~ Kellie Pickler
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Bella Pov
"Just kiddin'!" Emmett burst out laughing. "You sould have seen your face!" He was doubled over, hands on his knees.
I kicked his shin. "You ass!"
"Mom and Dad are gonna' sleep...
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This is the second book to my first short story "As the sun sets" This is a story about the life of Renesmee Carlie Cullen ( In her POV with some exceptions) now that she is a teenager! I suggest reading my first book (as the sun sets), so you can better understand this one (Daylight)

This will take place just where we left off in the first novel! Please Enjoy, and thank-you! I hope you enjoy this book as much (if not more) as you did the last! Again any comments, questions, suggestions please leave a comment or message me! I will always respond to fanmail ASAP!

-----------------------------------------Bri...
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This is a small book i am writing about the life of Renesmee cullen after (Breaking Dawn) It is in he rpoint of view for almost the whole time (with a few exceptions) I suggest starting from chapter 1 to get the full impact and information (:



Chapter 25: Avoided

I was relived when the air smelt fresh when i arrived home. Although i hadn't fed, my thirst didn't burn my throat as it had before. I walked up the large stairs and into my grandfathers home, carefully closing the door behind myself.
As soon as i stepped foot into the doorway, my mother had me in her arms.

"Oh Renesmee!" She hugged...
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posted by LexisFaith
Bella POV

I woke up next Edward on Sunday morning. We had fallen asleep while he was crying. That heartless bitch. I could see that at least in his sleep he was peaceful. I got in the shower and lathered up in my Herbal Essences Hello Hydration shampoo- the smell was amazing- and conditioner and coconut liquid body wash. So I like the smell of coconut. What?
After I got out, I dried my hair in my room so not to wake Edward, and slipped into a cobalt blue summer dress. I walked through the bathrooms and walked into Edward's room to wake him.
"Edward." I shook him gently. His eyes opened and found...
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posted by Summer_Leanne
Hi again, guys! So, as I said in my Cold Roses update, this is the last post I will be doing until Tuesday of next week because this weekend is 4th of July. Thanks for understanding, darlings, and thank you SO SO much for all of your heartwarming comments! I'm thrilled you all are loving the story so far :) I do hope you enjoy this chapter ^.^ Enjoy!! :D
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When we reached home, I found that Edward's prediction had been correct. Renesmee had locked herself in her room and was sprawled across her bed.

She turned up the music on her IPod when she...
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posted by LexisFaith
Right now, I am listening to 'Knee Deep' by Zac Brown Band. It's pretty upbeat and nice for this chapter. Certin parts of the song go along with this last...yes..this last chapter :) So if you wanna listen to it, go get on youtube!! :)
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Bella was 8 and a half months pregnant with a girl. Charlee Ann Cullen. Charlee after Bella's beloved father, and Ann, my mother's middle name. Mason was all about having a little sister. He talked about reading to her and feeding her but he would not "under any circumstamps, play tea party". He stopped off mad...
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I would like to start this chapter off with yet, another apology. I havn't been writing for a while, at a writers block. So i went back and read the twilight seris once more. I now have new, exciting ideas. And since you have responded to the different point of views i will Definintly keep that in mind when writing more! (: I hope you enjoy this chapter! Again, any ideas , comments or questions inbox, or comment!






CHAPTER 14: To save a life.
Renesmee's POV (point of view)
(CONTINUATION OF WHERE RENESMEE'S (POV) LEFT OFF IN CHAPTER 13)

I decided to call Jacob, I should probaly check up on him. I...
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posted by LexisFaith
So, I totally forgot I even wrote this story to begin with. This is my first fan-fic where everyone is the way they are in the books, so bare with me through this.

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"It's beats for you, Ness." Jacob whispered in her ear.
She giggled and snuggled closer to him. "How come Seth didn't come see me?"
"He wanted to." Jacob ran his fingers through her curls. "But Sue wanted him home for supper."
"Speaking of supper." Esme walked out from the kitchen holding a large plate in on hand, and a tiny pink one in the other.
"Yum!" Renesmee jummped up and sat beside...
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