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I would like to start this chapter off with yet, another apology. I havn't been writing for a while, at a writers block. So i went back and read the twilight seris once more. I now have new, exciting ideas. And since you have responded to the different point of views i will Definintly keep that in mind when writing more! (: I hope you enjoy this chapter! Again, any ideas , comments or questions inbox, or comment!






CHAPTER 14: To save a life.
Renesmee's POV (point of view)
(CONTINUATION OF WHERE RENESMEE'S (POV) LEFT OFF IN CHAPTER 13)

I decided to call Jacob, I should probaly check up on him. I picked up the phone and dialed his number. It rang a couple times before someone picked up.

"Hello?" I heard the man say, I didn't reconize the voice.

"Who is this?" I asked, confused.

"Its seth" His voice was slightly shaky

"Whats.. Whats wrong, where is Jacob?"

"Jacob, He's hurt real bad."
I felt my heart drop. No, i whispered lightly. Not Jacob. He couldn't just- "Bring me to him"

"We'll meet you outside of town.." he gave me directions, then hung up the phone. I quickly grabbed my coat, wallet and headed out the door. I Waited impatiently at the elevator, after a moment i changed directions and took the stairs. I quickly made my way through the lobby, but was stopped.

"Ms. Cullen? Is everything alright?" I heard the Manager ask, suspicously.

"Of course," I said as calm as i could "You saw that girl who came in?" He nodded "My aunt, She asked me to meet her," I looked at my watch dramaticly "And i must hurry! Her plane leaves so soon and she asked me to help her with some shopping!"

The manager agreed with my story and let me on my way. Im glad he bought it so easily. I left the hotel and waved down a taxi. I couldn't stop thinking about Jacob, If he was hurt and how badly. I felt a wave of pain crash over me; but i had a role to play now, being a cullen i was quite used to that. I quickly got into the Yellow cab and gave him the directions,

"Why is a young pretty girl, such as you, going to the middle of nowhere late at night?"

The man had a gruff voice and was bald, except for the sides of his hair. He had brown hair and was quite short and stubby;

"Oh, i have .. family. They live out of town so i always meet them around there. They pick me up"

"Hey wait! Aren't you that Renesmee Cullen girl? Your father owns the hotels?"

I nodded, I hope that wouldn't effect anything.

"Wow, first star i've had in my Cab.."

"Sir, i wouldn't really consider myself a-"

"Modest as well! Wow! your the whole package!"

If i hadn't been so stresseed out, i would have been majorly annoyed. I looked away.We arrived at my destination. I rummaged through my wallet, and threw him a couple hundred. "Thanks!" I called, leaving the Cab.

He flipped through the bills "Hey! No problem! Thanks!"

He drove off, I heard his tires sqeal against the pavment. I steped carefully into the darkness,

"Seth?" i called.

Just then i felt somebody grab me, i tried to kick my way free but it was usless. I felt my heart axelerate, and my breaths quicken. He quickly threw me into a car, that's when i heard the voice;

"My, my, tricked quite easily, aren't you?"

There wasn't a long period between being taken and being brought to wherever i was going. He slid the doors open and grabbed me by the upper arm. I was pulled towards an opening. I slid carefuly between each tree of the dark forest.I stopped moving, There i saw Jacob, lifeless, being held up by two of Alex's pack.

"He was quite easy to fool as well, although more of a fight" I heard alex say, He turned to me "Much like you..."

I didn't know wether it was my instincs or Jacob, but this time i would defend myself. I needed to create a diversion.. I wasn't strong, but i could at least make them think i was venomus. I needed the right moment, i needed Jacob to awake. I broke free of alex's hold and ran for Jacob. I put my hands on either side of his face;

"Come on Jake, wake up! Please"

His eyes slowly flashed open "N-Nessie?"

Suddenly i was pulled backwards, I was thrown onto the ground. I stood up,

"Renesmee!" I heard my mother call from across the field, the cullens were here. But alex wasn't going to give up.He grabbed me once more, I turned around and broke free of his hold. I then bit him.

He screamed out in pain, although since im not venomus i couldn't do much damadge, but i could do enough for a distraction. The other wolves had dropped Jacob now, and the Cullens were fighting the wolfes.

"Renesmee, go to Jacob" I heard my father yell. I immedietly got up, i ran across the field towards him. I sat down beside were his limp body laid;

"Jake?"

"Renesmee.. I'm so sorry i-" He winced in pain

I cut him off,"No, don't, just don't. Please Jake"

He nodded "Renesmee, Get out of here"

I grabbed his hand "No, I'm not leaving you. It's fine, My family is here and sam, Seth and Embry are covering the forests"

I looked back at the fight, happening just yards away. I saw Rosalie throw one two the ground while her and emmette tore it apart.

"..I have to go help" I heard Jacob say weakly

"No! You can't phase, not with the shape your in. You'd just kill yourself!"

"But Ne-"

"Please Jacob, just stay put, please. Thier fine."

I looked back once more, in time enough to see my father and carlisle knock down Alex. I looked away though, as much as i resented Alex i still found it.. Hard to watch. I put my head on Jacob, sobbing lightly.

"It's alright, " He soothed, whispering "It's over. They can't hurt you now Nessie"

I saw Carlisle quickly make his way over here, as well as some of the wolfes. I Moved out of the way, letting Carlisle examine Jacob's injuries. I looked to my left where the fight had tooken place just moments earlier. The yells and grunts of the fight were now silent. I heard Jacobs moans of pain coming from beside me. My mother had ran over to me;

"Renesmee?"

I nodded slowly, without taking my gaze off
Jacob.

"Your going to go back with Jacob and seth, we have to stay behind. there aren't many more, but they surely won't make it to forks.. You'll be fine on your own for a day or so, right?"

I once again nodded, "Be careful" i said meekly. My mother held me,

"He's going to be alright" she said soothingly "Don't worry"

I turned around to meet her gaze, but her and my father had already gone to look for the wolves. Along with esme, rosalie, alice, jasper, emmette and carlisle. Sam, Seth and Embry helped Jacob into the car, then left Seth there with us to drive.

Carlisle had given him morphine, enough to last most of the ride home but not all of it.
I was happy that Jacob was asleep now, he wasn't in pain. I sat in the back with him, his head rested on my lap.

I remembered when that was me, i now realised how worried Jacob was. Although i was glad he was asleep and protected from the pain, i wanted him to wake-up, i wanted to know he was okay. I looked solemly to the right,

"He's strong" I heard seth say, convicing himself as well as me.

"I know.." . I ran my hands carefully throuugh Jacobs hair "I just hope he heals enough before he wakes up.."

"He's had worse" Seth said, in attempt to make me feel better. I didn't like to pry, Although i was curious now.

"What happened?"

"Well did your parents tell you about Victoria?"

"Yes, and the army she sent after my mother, why?"

"Well, we helped fight the newborns, but we had missed one that we saw after the fight. But my stupid sister, Leah, decided to prove that she was stronger then us. She went for the easy kill and was almost hurt.."

"..Until Jacob stepped in the way?"

Seth nodded "Practicly crushed the whole right side of his body.. Not to mention carlisle had to rebreak the bones because they weren't set right and were healing too fast."

I winced and felt a shudder roll up my spine. The last thing i wanted to think about was Jacob being in pain. Although that was the inevitable..I once again watched minutes pass by, waiting to arrive home and soon enough i did. It hadn't felt like a day had passed by, but then again i wasn't foucusing on anything other then Jake. I went to get out of the car;

"Want me to wake Jacob?" I heard seth ask as i stepped out,

"No, let him rest. I'll be fine" I smiled "Thanks"

"Anytime" He replied, driving off.

I walked into my cozy house and closed the door behind me. I carefiully slipped off my shoes, and walked over to the kitchen. I made myself a small snack of crackers and vegtables.

After nibbling on those, i did my dishes. I went into my room and opened my dresser drawer. I pulled out one of my night gowns and then headed into the washroom. I quickly brushed my teeth and threw my hair up in a ponytail. I dragged my tired body into my bedroom, and flicked on the light.

I found my way around and then turned it off. I carefully tucked myself under the warmth of my blanket and fell asleep, i suddenly felt empty without Jacob by my side.

I yawned as the morning light approched. I wonderd out into the living room "Hello?" I called, yet there was no answer. I assume everyone was still gone. I went into the linen closet and searched through the many items until i came upon a towel. I carefully pulled it out from between the brightly coloured linens and went to take a shower. I got dressed and threw my hair up into a bun.

I Stepped into the kitchen and looked for somthing easy to eat, i settled for some toast. I placed the piece into the toaster and searched for a drink. I pulled out a carton of orange juice and carefully poured it into a small glass.

I put the juice back into the fridge and grabbed a small plate. I heard the *POP of the toaster, I quickly turned; startled by the sound. I pulled it out of the toaster and placed it on the plate. I sat down infront of the T.V. although i wasn't watching it, it filled the emptyness of the house.
I switched off the television and put my dishes in the sink;

"Ugh" I grunted "Why does everything have to be so complicated"

I looked at the door for a moment, that's when i saw the car keys. I quickly grabbed them and headed out into the driveway. I opened the car door and put the keys into the ignition.The engine of my fathers shiny volvo purred as i drove. I watched tree's pass me, as i drove down the fimiliar road. Following the same yellow line, waiting impatiently to arrive at Jacob's house.
Okay, Here's all 8 of my chapters + my two love stories.
[:

I've decided to make all my Twilight story chapters into a book like thing, So that's why i put them all together in this, I'm naming it "Breaking Twilight."
i was also thinking "Breaking Eclipse"
but I'm still thinking, but yeah.
I'm glad everyone likes my story! x]
theres more coming!
-Yuki <3

Chapter One: The Game.

It was
Saturday evening, I was sitting on one of the couches in my new family’s house,
I was waiting for Edward to come back with Renesmee or as everyone else liked to call
her “Nessie” which I was getting used to by know....
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posted by renesmeblack
11. Casper's Fate
Renesmee




I couldn't help but cry. Aro has my baby, who may be one of the best weapons he's ever had, through his eyes. Or he may be used as bait to kidnap the rest of us. Casper was going to live as part of the Volturi. Mark paced in the hall, trying to find where Casper was. Jacob had broken at least ten water glasses when he got a drink.
Now I was curious what he was looking for in the fridge. He came back with two bottles of formula.
"We have to feed the kids," he explained. Karrie rushed up to him and took the pink bottle from his hand. After one sip, she threw the bottle...
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hey everybody. sorry its taken so long i've had quite a lot to do. its not long but i hope you like it anyway :) Cari i hope the last bits okay you logged off when i needed the answer so i just went with my instincts, i hope thats fine with you??

part 3
Carlisle wasn’t listening to much of our conversation. He seemed preoccupied in his own thoughts.
“Are you okay?” I asked him. Edward suddenly let out a growl, letting go of my waist, he stalked out.
“What’s the matter?” Emmett asked.
“I know who’s after us.” Carlisle said dully.
“Who?” Esme pleaded.
“Victoria’s sister,...
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Chapter 16: Unspoken Favorites (Jake's POV)

As I was about to take my anger out on Edward, a crushing thought came into my mind.
My voice was unsteady. “I told her she would be ok… I knew all along that this was a bad idea and I went along with it. It’s all my fault… and here I am blaming everyone else. I’m sorry.” My head was spinning I had to get out of there. As I headed for the stairs a strange beeping started up in Amore’s room. A strange heart began to beat furiously. I paused where I stood about to head down the stairs. I slowly turned around ignoring everyone else as...
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Hey guys!!
So I kinda let the idea sit around for a couple days and now have a total of 7 people who would be interested in writing a piece for the contest.

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twilightGGlost
Edward_Bella234
_madz_
patrisha727
jamie_kataeff
Twilight597
dinosteph
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I am going to give this list another 24 hours and then tomorrow night I will post word limits, themes, and how judging is going to work. I'll let you know right now that we're going to keep it short, probably around 1500 words.
posted by twilight-7
I stared at Alice, convinced I’d misheard what she just said. She’d seen Charlie? That was impossible....no one could see him. Not with the Shadow Hunters there. But Mitchell said the Shadow Hunters were gone. So that means Alice can see him.
I smiled widely and jumped with happiness. Mitchell stood up slowly, finding it hard to believe too.
“What did you see?” we both asked together.
She frowned then, looking up at Edward. He nodded once. I hated that. She was asking him permission to tell me. Why did people do that? Edward wasn’t my owner. They could tell me anything they wanted to,...
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posted by _madz_
okay guys, this is really short. im sorry, i've just had no time this week. please tell me what you think anyway :)


part 22
“If there was only some way to make you see that I can’t leave you.” I whispered. “Time, I suppose, will be the way to convince you.”
The corner of her mouth pulled up slightly. The idea must have pleased her. “Okay.” She said agreeably.
I was glad to see her happier again but the pain was still flowing through me at full force.
A questioning look came into her eyes before she asked “So—since you’re staying. Can I have my stuff back?” she spoke in...
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posted by AdaLove
Laurent was an original member of James' coven. When James and Victoria chose to hunt Bella Swan, Laurent told the Cullens everything about them.
After this, Laurent went to live with the Denali Coven; despite living with "vegetarian" vampires, Laurent cheated the diet as evidenced by his red irises.

******Death*******

When Bella visited Edward's meadow, Laurent stumbled across her, having returned to Forks as a scout for the vengeful Victoria. He attempted to kill Bella (he was currently hunting when he found her) and he reasoned that being killed by him was a better fate than being found by...
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Hey. two in one day! Here’s the next part.

part 2
“Are you okay?” esme asked
“no.” I replied holding Edward.
“What’s the matter Bella”” jasper asked.
I let go of Edward and turned towards the rest of my family. All of them had their faces full of worry. I couldn’t hurt them again, this is my last time I told myself. I took a deep breath that whizzed down my throat. “ I’m so sorry.” I told them” I’ve put you in danger again.”


Part three.
“Well there’s no surprise there then.” Emmett chuckled. Rosalie threw a look of pure disbelief I his direction. Emmet shut...
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posted by AdaLove
Emmett McCarty was changed into a vampire by Dr. Carlisle Cullen in 1935, two years after Rosalie Hale had been changed. When Rosalie came across him, Emmett was being mauled by a bear in the mountains of Tennessee. He had nearly died from the attack, but Rosalie saved him and carried him over a hundred miles back to Carlisle. Rosalie was noted as saying that it took nearly all her strength not to kill him. She also said that she brought him to Carlisle so that he, with his stronger endurance of human blood, could save Emmett. She also said that the reason behind having Carlisle save Emmett...
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hi again. some people wanted more to this story, so I’ve done a bit more. I’ve had a lot of coursework to do so this is sort of short so hopefully it will keep your interest.

Part 1
“Bella what’s the matter?” Edward asked anxiously.

I let my shield down, heft it right out my brain so that it wouldn’t protected me anymore. And shouted with my mind in to Edwards.

“His got amnesia.”

Edward looked confused “who?” he asked out loud?
“Charlie” I whispered with my mind just before it snapped right back.

Edward flinted towards me in less the 3.2 of a second and he had me in his glorious...
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posted by renesmeblack
3
Renesmee




I loved hanging out with Billy. In many ways he and Jacob were the same. They both thought taking their girlfriends to the movies was a good taking-it-steady kind of date. Billy had the same eyes and laugh Jacob had.
But there was one thing different. Billy was going to let me have this child, the child Jacob wants to be rid of. I couldn't help but feel angry with him about this. Wasn't having the child a mother's choice? The father wasn't going to carry a boulder on their stomach. And they definately won't be giving birth to a screaming infant. The rest of the family shouldn't have...
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posted by mrsblack_1089
This is a continuation to my original story, Sunbreak. I couldn't find a good enough name, so for now it's just 'The Sequel' haha. =D I hope everyone likes this as much as Sunbreak, and I rely on LOADS of positive comments to continue this Sequel! So read, review and rate! Enjoy! xoxo mrsblack_1089


"I just can't believe how big they are!" Emily cooned as she and I watched the twins sleeping. The blue-ish, green-ish light of the bonfire flickered across their faces where they lay on Jacob's lap, breathing steadily in and out.
I could never get over how breathtaking my two little children were....
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posted by renesmeblack
Hey, peeple! I wanted to let you know that the never-ever-ever-ending story of Renesmee hasn't ended. YOU'RE STILL READING IT RIGHT NOW!!!
Yup. Welcome to chapter 22. Yay!
Okay, I'll let you get back to your reading...



1
Jacob




I had to be surprised. Why wouldn't I be? Edward was pretty mad when he read in my mind what happened two nights ago. He was even madder when he found Renesmee was crazy enough to keep... IT. I thought Renesmee was going mad. She would still bite if we'd taken the thing out first chance. I felt sick to my stomach. This wasn't right. I'm going to be a father. If it's a son,...
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posted by jaime-kataeff
Renesmee's POV

Today is my first or last day with Jacob, still to be decided.

See I am a unique person, I was conceived, carried and delivered by my mother whilst she was human and my father as a vampire, (I very nearly killed her, but my father saved her life by turning her), And that was when I met him... "My Jacob", we've been together everyday since I was born, I saw him as my big brother,protector... but now my feelings have changed towards him. I have started to notice him in a completely different light, I find his smile,eyes,russet coloured skin, smell irrestible. I catch myself just...
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posted by thecullensftw_x
I stretched out my long, marble arms, and ran a hand through my honey-coloured hair. Keeping up the act of a human is having effects on me. I don't need to do that stuff, but it comes as habit. The mood of the house was tense, and I was really feeling the strain. Even with my beautiful little Alice sitting by my side, squeezing my hand gently, I wasn't feeling much calmer; the weight of the mood was too strong. I sank back into the sofa, and listened as Edward and Bella arrived at the door.
"Hey, you two," Edward said as he barged through the door. He tried to keep his tone and face expressionless,...
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Chapter 10: The Cat’s Out of the Bag
I was in complete awe of my body as well as the little miracle that it contained, “She knows your voice Jake,” I told him through my tears of happiness. He smiled at me and seemed to be genuinely happy for the first time since he found out that I was pregnant. He again kissed my stomach and then continued with a trail of kisses leading to my face, kissing my cheeks and nose, “I love you so much Renesmee.” I kissed his ear, “I love you too,” his lips found mine and he kissed me so overpoweringly that I fell back into the bed with him. He lay...
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posted by twilight-7
I hope you enjoy this Guys!

Edward’s POV

I picked up the disgusting human and happily slammed him into the wall repeatedly. He didn’t show any sign that it had hurt him so I threw him to the floor and was tempted to stand on his neck but I thought that would be too quick for him. This vile person had kept my fiancé locked up in a filthy rotten little cell, chained to a wall like a dirty animal for seven days and I would enjoy enacting my revenge on him.
“Charlie!” Kayla screamed. “Charlie! Help!”
That reminded me. I had made a great deal of noise hurting the pathetic little man. Why...
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posted by renesmeblack
17
Jacob



It turns out that yesterday was Renesmee's "18th" birthday. I have a lot to catch up on. Renesmee was shopping at a fancy new dress store downstairs, where I ordered Alice to take her to buy two new dresses. One was for her party, the other for the next part of the night.
Meanwhile, I was at the jewelry store, looking at sparkling necklaces. One was perfect for Renesmee. It was a ruby-and-diamond flower, with a gold chain. I bought it, and then felt my heart race as the cashier asked, "Is that all?"
I looked around, eyes resting on a particular case.
"One more thing," I murmured as I headed...
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posted by twilightGGlost
THIS IS NOT PART 5!!!! Just wanted to tell you guys whats going on with TOF…I have exams this week so the next few parts will be few and far between but I will try to write soon..the next part will be out tomorrow afternoon so don’t worry…I wanna thank my biggest fan just_bella…and special thanx to _madz_ and mcclare34 and patrisha727

I wanna thank EVERYONE who commented:

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Ur comments REALLLLY help..the positivity and saying ur fave part...
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