hi guys just being really brave here coz i dont usually do this but would u plz read a poem i wrote? it was inspired by twilight saga :)

my friend Twilight_lover encoraged me 2 put my poem up here! plz tell me wot u really think i want to b told the truth coz i love writing and i want to improve it thx :

Love is the closest thing we have to magic
But It can be hurtful and painful too
it lies in those whos hearts are cold
it glows in those who are true.

You can find it in the least expected places,
It can kill to let love go
It can comfort those who are in need of help
It can fight and take over woe

Love is something that never dies,
It stays in the hearts of the gone,
Love is a candle that never goes out,
No one knows where its from

Love is the glue that holds us together,
It is the thing that makes us smile
Without knowing, we rely on love
More then anyone would know

It can kill those who turn against it,
It can take over those who don’t
It can bring tears and laughter and cries of pain
But die is what it wont

People hurt for those that leave
Love finds the one who another needs
They need the ones they can’t live without
It can cause hearts to bleed


Sometimes love burns
To an extent that we can’t bear
Love is an emotion,
something we can to share

Maybe you don’t love the one who loves you,
But even if your heart is full of hate
Love comes first before anything
It burns on after fate

Love can bring back life to those
Who have lost meaning and hope
So I belive love is good,
It warms the ones grey and cold who havn’t the strength to cope

Love is goodbye, but also a welcome
A bird that flies there, free
Love is something you can’t buy,
Whatever the price may be.

To watch a face twist up in pain,
Love is how you sooth
Love is calm but also wild,
Music that makes you move

Peaceful is what love is,
a flutter in the air
love is sometimes peaceful
love isn’t fair

A palm on an island,
a petal on a rose
love never stops growing
we don’t know how big love grows.


Love is the closest thing we have to magic
B