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hey guys i was wonderin if u like this poem thing i wrote?

im not sure how to love
im not sure what it is
is it a song is it a poem?
but when im with you i feel whole
we were perfect but u messed up
you left me in the cold rain
you never came back
i used the rest of my tears
now i feel like im wasting away...

Sounds just like what Bella was feeling in the forrest in New Moon...good job!

Hellohoudini posted over a year ago

i like it....its very good

Elizabeth1993 posted over a year ago

thankyou all so much for u lovley comments

twilight_lover9 posted over a year ago

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twilightyoussi said:

it is soo biautiful just like you

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posted over a year ago

aw thanx so much

twilight_lover9 posted over a year ago

angoxx127 said:

srry i dont really like it it is so nt good i think i could throw up try to make it better will ya

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posted over a year ago

thats really mean i liked it i no ur just showing your opinion but u can b a bit kinder about it!

Elzybells posted over a year ago

Elzybells said:

well done :)

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posted over a year ago

thank u soo much

twilight_lover9 posted over a year ago

Bella_090 said:

I like it. :)

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AliceRoxx said:

Yes I like it too :) Try and build the emotion like you do and maybe add imagery so we can picture it? x Well Done x

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posted over a year ago

Yh i agree with you, it is a really good poem and i liked it too :)

mrzcullenxx posted over a year ago

kenya124 said:

Awesome!! That was really good.
Jeez your lucky you can come up with stuff like
that lol.But good job

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ScottishChic said:

AWWWWWWW. i think tht was kinda sweet. Really great poem Good Job!!!! xD

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Lucy_Lou14 said:

im not a great fan of poems, but thats pretty good, very deep,sensitive etc, gud job!

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