I NEED HELP!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ok i am in the making of making a story called mysterious love can you guys please please help me by messageing me so i can give you a link to the first chapter and then can you please comment on it or come back too the message and tell me what you think or you can just answer this question and say "can i please have a link?" and i will message you and give you a link please help me i need help i dont feel that people no it exists enuff. [sry if i am miss spelling a lot lol.]

and if you like the first i will send you a link too the second chapter and so on and so fourth.

there are 8 chapters so far.

sry this has nothing to do with twilight but still answer please