i like it. just remember though, think more along the lines of so beautiful its scary. remember they are the worlds best predator so you dont need as much darkness under the eyes. but its great i loe it!
I think that it's good.
When vampire's eyes are light they don't have such thick dark circles.
But other then that, I think it's pretty good.
I think that it could be better, but then again who am I to talk?
I made this one and it's pretty lame, so I guess you and I still need some improvement.
Keep making them, I'll keep viewing them, and I'm sure they'll get even better. :)