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Hey do you like this poem i did about alice and jasper's love?

these two were insepreable
the trust and love in his eyes
made her feel safe
when she smiled
it brightened his day
the thrill of the adventure
the adventure of love
was making alice and jasper
fall ever so passionetly inlove
love is like the wind
you cant see it
but you can feel it
love folowed jasper and alice
because they were destined for eachother

 twilight_lover9 posted over a year ago
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TEAM-EDWARDxxx said:
I Like it...

But is okay i guess.. maybe sum more stuff bout like Vampires haha that would be interesting..
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posted over a year ago 
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you could just go to the request a peom question and say that u kno! but thanx! for the tip
twilight_lover9 posted over a year ago
Little_Cullen said:
LOVE it. Punctuation a bit funny, but the actual writing is really cool. I especially like the bit about he makes her feel safe and her smile brightens his day. I love it. Keep it up!
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thank-u so much
twilight_lover9 posted over a year ago
twilightgirlNo1 said:
i think its great but some of the lines could be a little better.
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twilight0girl said:
it's a perfect poem about them.
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it's a perfect poem about them.
posted over a year ago 
Twilightpup said:
Its really good , you should make one about Bella and Edward
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emilyemmett said:
That is really good!! You should write another one!! Maybe about the meadow or Jacob and Renesmee or something!
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sessa123 said:
Its not bad, i always thought a poem used to jus have to rhyme but narr its really gud maybe fix up some little thing and maybe have a good thing to rhyme bout, like werewolves, vampires anything lol KEEP IT UP HUN XX
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zXwolfgirlXz said:
aww i like it

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Brysis said:
It´s cute ♥
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LovelyDragon said:
Ya, I like it. Some of the lines could be a little better, but it's really cool. :)
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