*non-First class*

Jordan: I can't belive we are back here again.
Rayven: Yeah me ether.
Jordan: and i can't belive Jax is gone.
Bridgette: yeah me ether.
Rayven: i can
Jared: yeah me too. I knew he would leave some time.
Ray: Guys how lonng dose it take good luck necklases to work?
Bridgette: I'm gusse 1 day. why?
Ray: cause it's been like 3 weeks and no good luck. Only bad luck.
Draven: maby it isn't a good luck charm just a necklas.
Ray: is it a bad luck charm?
Draven: maby it's just a necklas.
Ray: *sigh* maby.

*confessional*

Ray: maby he's right! *gets slamed by door*

Draven: you can be subprised what you can do with Hawii bad luck stuff and a plan old necklas. *evil smile*

*over*

*first class*

Rochelle: first class rocks!
Buddy: I love this place.
Natalie: *yawn* it's getting late. we should get to sleep.
Buddy: I'm hyper can I stay up all night?
Alejandro: it's your desion.
Buddy: i will.
Ezekiel: ok eh. I might too eh.
Chris: ALL CONPETERS COME TO THE MAIN ROOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Natalie: oh come on i was almost asleep!

*main room*

Chris: Ok we are headding too Washington DC.
Rochelle: again????
Chris: yes again. I will tell you your challange there.

*Wasington DC*

Chris: Your challange is to make the best fire work!
Rayven: aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.......... why?
Chris: inoner for the 4th of july.
Jordan: the forth was 5 weeks ago.
Chris: well This is Total Drama 4th of july.
Jared: so how do we do this?
Chris: I have fire work supplys to make it.
Alejandro: wait we have to make the fire works?
Chris: yeah. wouldn't be challanging would it?
Bridgette: This is going to be hard.
BUddy: No! This is going to be fun.
Ray: why do we have to do this at night?
Chris: fire works work better at night.
Ray: oh yeah.
Chris: well lets get started.
Ray: ok.

*5 minutes later*

Rayven: How do we do this?
Draven: want me to help?
Rayven: sure.
Draven: Ok I think you will need a instroion guide.
Rayven: oh yeah. wouldn't you need to start your's?
Draven: No. I need to help you first.
Rayven: *blushes*

*confessional*

Rayven: he's soooooooooo sweat.

*over*

Rochelle: I can't find gun patter.
Natalie: maby it's in this gun.
Rochelle: where did you find that?
Natalie: Chef's gun room.

*chef's gun room*

Chef: where is my favorite gun? who stoll my favorite gun????????

*over*

Rochelle: If he finds out your so dead.
Natalie: That's why i hope he dosen't.
Ray: *picks up a Rock that looks like noah* This rock looks liek Noah.
Rayven: Let me see. It dose.
*song bell*
Ray: what??????
Chris began. or your off my show.
*slow*
Ray: I miss the way, Noah said hello!
By smileing bigger than the sun.!
I missed the daytime when Noah moved so slow.
Rayven: Ooh, Ooh.
Ray: 'Cause other times, he'd be funny!
Oh,Noah! Oh, Noah! I, I miss you so!
Oh, my Noah, my little Noah. Why'd I ever let you go?
Ray: I miss he's smile, and the way he liked to be funny
all the time, when there was trouble-
Which was all the time. (laughs)
Oh, I miss the way, he'd always say goodnight.
Rayven: Ooh, Ooh.
Ray: And smile bigger Oh, Noah! Oh, Noah! I, I miss you so.
Oh, my Noah, my little Noah!
Why'd I ever let you go?
Why'd I ever let you go...?
*over*
Chris: good job.
Ray: *starts crying and runs into the plane.*
Rayven: come back Ray. *runs into the plane*

*plane*

Ray: *bawls*
Rayven: it's going to be ok.
Ray: I want him back.
Rayven: we all do.
Ray: But he was useing me.
Rayven: well you know what they say, if you love someone you have to let him go, and if he loves you back, he'll come back.
Ray: But with all this bad luck he really is useing me.
Rayven: well, Bad luck is a mith, if you don't belive in it than you wont have it.
Ray: maby your right.
Rayven: now lets go and make some fire work, and not the ones you were making in here.
Ray: *giggles* yeah lets go.
Rayven: yeah.
Ray: Oh and Rayven.
Rayven: yeah?
Ray: your a good friend.
Rayven: awwwwww thank you.

*3 hours later*

Chris: ok lets see your fire works. Bridgette!
*bridgette shoots fire work*
Chris: good job. now Jordan.
Jordan: *shoots fire works*
Chris: good job. Rayven
Rayven: well me and Ray made a fire work together.
Ray: yeah.
Chris: ok lets see it.
*they shoot it and it lights up the whole sky*
Chris: wo! That's amzing.
Rayven and Ray: Thanks.
Chris: ok Jared!
*He shoots it*
Chris: good. now Draven.
*Draven shoots it*
Chris: good. now Ezekiel?
Ezekiel: *shoots it* like it eh?
Chris: yeah. now Natalie.
*Natalie shoots it*
Chris: good job. now Rochelle!
Rochelle: *shoots it*
Chris: good. now Buddy.
Buddy: *trys to shoot it and it hits and bird and kills it* oops.
Chris: ok............. now finly Alejandro.
*Alejandro shoots it and it's a pitcher of Chris*
Chris: Love it. an our 2 or should i say 3 winners are Alejandor, Rayven, and Ray!!!
Ray and Rayven: yes we did it!
Alejandro: yes!
Chris: i will see all of you in 1 hour.

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ok vote! message me or IM me your vote. here they are:

Ray (invencabilty)
Rayven (invencabilty)
Alejandro (invencabilty)
Bridgette
Jordan
Jared
Draven
Ezekiel
Natalie
Rochelle
Buddy



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