Chris: and your challange is............. a race around hawii!
Jamie: you say what now?????
Rochelle: is that even posable?
Chris: Oh and all teams are merged!
Jar3d: than how would we know who gose to first class?
Chris: easy. There will be a 1 winner with invenceability every eposde until the finle 5 than after that no incenceabilty.
Annie: I don't get it.
Natalie: yeah she's dumb and i don't know.
Chris: who ever wins. he's or her last team mates will go in first class.
Buddy: what about me and Draven over there?
Chris: Buddy you will be on team USA! Draven team Win.
Rayven and Jamie: sweat!
*confessional*
Jar3d: I'm fine with draven as long as he stays away from my girl courtney!
*over*
Rochelle: so when dose this start???
Natalie: *looks at very dark sky* weel it better start and end fast cause i think a storm is coming.
Bridgette: chris did you check the wether befor we came?
Chris: yes.
Jax: and what did it say?
Chris: 80% of very veyr bad storms.
all buddy: what???
Buddy: oooooooooooo.......... killy!
Ray: huh?
Buddy: Nouthin!
*confessional*
Buddy: I have a scret! i like to kill! kill alout!
*over*
Chris: ready set start.
*everyone gose*
Jar3d: Oh and good move planes are not that safe in bad wether.
Ezekiel: Yeah eh.
Chris: that's why i'm staying at my friend's house.
Alejandro: jerk!
Rochelle: Oh you should be talking.
Alejandro: what ever.
Bridgette: i can't belive that back stbing guy!
Ray: I'm glad noah didn't do that to me.
Draven: Oh but he did.
Ray: Hottie tomoly say what now?
Draven: watch this.
*clip rools*
*Noah has a parashoot and falling out of plane*
Noah: I still hate ray. and she's the most uglyiest person i know. ugly!
*clip stops*
Ray: *stops running* *crys*
*confessional*
Ray: YOU! You little guy! I HATE YOU NOAH!
*over*
Bridgette: Its' going to be ok Ray. How about you win so you can puch him and show him that you hate him.
Ray: Your right Bridge! Thanks.
Bridgette: any time girl.
Ray: lets go!
*Lighting than thounder*
Trent: aaaaaaaaaa........ should we stop?
Jax: it would make us slower to the finsh line..... *thounder than lighting* Your popalty right!
Natalie: lets go.
Rayven: ooooo...... can it be a cake shop?
Natalie,Jax,and Trent: NO!
Rayven: Ok fine.
*Buddy runs by*
Trent: Hey buddy you wanna come insdie this place with us?
Buddy: nO!
Trent: but it's stroming.
Buddy: Kill!!!!!!!! i mean....... I'll live with it.
Trent: ok.
*confessional*
Natalie: By the looks and the sounds of that strom......... He's a goner!
*over*
Jar3d: lets stay here.
Annie and Rochelle: Ok.
Ray: The storm looks bad.
Bridgette: Yeah.
Drvaen: How about we stay here.
Bridgette and Ray: Ok.
Jamie: get away from me Ezekiel!
Ezekiel: I need someone to be with. I'm scared of storms.
*confessional*
Jamie: what a wimp!
*over*
*Alejandro grabes ezekiel and Jamie and ties them up*
Jamie: what are you doing??
Alejadnro: going to win.
ezekiel: This is not fare hommy!
Alejandro: I'm going to win this season and no one will stop me!
Jamie: you say what now?????
Rochelle: is that even posable?
Chris: Oh and all teams are merged!
Jar3d: than how would we know who gose to first class?
Chris: easy. There will be a 1 winner with invenceability every eposde until the finle 5 than after that no incenceabilty.
Annie: I don't get it.
Natalie: yeah she's dumb and i don't know.
Chris: who ever wins. he's or her last team mates will go in first class.
Buddy: what about me and Draven over there?
Chris: Buddy you will be on team USA! Draven team Win.
Rayven and Jamie: sweat!
*confessional*
Jar3d: I'm fine with draven as long as he stays away from my girl courtney!
*over*
Rochelle: so when dose this start???
Natalie: *looks at very dark sky* weel it better start and end fast cause i think a storm is coming.
Bridgette: chris did you check the wether befor we came?
Chris: yes.
Jax: and what did it say?
Chris: 80% of very veyr bad storms.
all buddy: what???
Buddy: oooooooooooo.......... killy!
Ray: huh?
Buddy: Nouthin!
*confessional*
Buddy: I have a scret! i like to kill! kill alout!
*over*
Chris: ready set start.
*everyone gose*
Jar3d: Oh and good move planes are not that safe in bad wether.
Ezekiel: Yeah eh.
Chris: that's why i'm staying at my friend's house.
Alejandro: jerk!
Rochelle: Oh you should be talking.
Alejandro: what ever.
Bridgette: i can't belive that back stbing guy!
Ray: I'm glad noah didn't do that to me.
Draven: Oh but he did.
Ray: Hottie tomoly say what now?
Draven: watch this.
*clip rools*
*Noah has a parashoot and falling out of plane*
Noah: I still hate ray. and she's the most uglyiest person i know. ugly!
*clip stops*
Ray: *stops running* *crys*
*confessional*
Ray: YOU! You little guy! I HATE YOU NOAH!
*over*
Bridgette: Its' going to be ok Ray. How about you win so you can puch him and show him that you hate him.
Ray: Your right Bridge! Thanks.
Bridgette: any time girl.
Ray: lets go!
*Lighting than thounder*
Trent: aaaaaaaaaa........ should we stop?
Jax: it would make us slower to the finsh line..... *thounder than lighting* Your popalty right!
Natalie: lets go.
Rayven: ooooo...... can it be a cake shop?
Natalie,Jax,and Trent: NO!
Rayven: Ok fine.
*Buddy runs by*
Trent: Hey buddy you wanna come insdie this place with us?
Buddy: nO!
Trent: but it's stroming.
Buddy: Kill!!!!!!!! i mean....... I'll live with it.
Trent: ok.
*confessional*
Natalie: By the looks and the sounds of that strom......... He's a goner!
*over*
Jar3d: lets stay here.
Annie and Rochelle: Ok.
Ray: The storm looks bad.
Bridgette: Yeah.
Drvaen: How about we stay here.
Bridgette and Ray: Ok.
Jamie: get away from me Ezekiel!
Ezekiel: I need someone to be with. I'm scared of storms.
*confessional*
Jamie: what a wimp!
*over*
*Alejandro grabes ezekiel and Jamie and ties them up*
Jamie: what are you doing??
Alejadnro: going to win.
ezekiel: This is not fare hommy!
Alejandro: I'm going to win this season and no one will stop me!
Duncans POV:
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Did you want some thing princess?
Courtneys POV:
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YEs Duncan I dont know how to tell you this but...... Im pregnent but...... its not your baby.
Duncans POV:
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Whos is it I mean who would do this to you?
Courtneys POV:
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Its.............I cant tell you its to painfull he raped me a I was powerless Im so sorry Duncan please forgive me it was a mistake.....
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Did you want some thing princess?
Courtneys POV:
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YEs Duncan I dont know how to tell you this but...... Im pregnent but...... its not your baby.
Duncans POV:
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Whos is it I mean who would do this to you?
Courtneys POV:
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Its.............I cant tell you its to painfull he raped me a I was powerless Im so sorry Duncan please forgive me it was a mistake.....
need christmas ideas and co-writer!!!
Left-Suzie, Right-BRITNEY
Hello everyone. I'm going to rewrite TDR because i don't like how they are adding so many new characters. well anyways since we don't know where TDR will take place i decided to have it take place at a Roller coaster/fair/circus type thing called Mclain Land. The returning cast will be
Heather
Alejandro
Cody
Zeke
Dj
Izzy
Gwen
Tyler
Owen
Trent
Duncan
Bridgette
Geoff
Lindsay
Noah
Sierra
Beth
Courtney
LeShawna
and 2 new "Campers"
also i will need a very good artist to draw pics for this story. so if you can draw (and i mean VERY VERY well then please comment with some of your work) also i might need a few people to come up with some dialgue, so if you like to write comment me about that. And this is not a post your OC thing, and i dont need challenge ideas i already came up with them. Thank you and i would like an artist as soon as possible and i would love it if one of you could get a hold of Escorte on deviantart! THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH!
Heather
Alejandro
Cody
Zeke
Dj
Izzy
Gwen
Tyler
Owen
Trent
Duncan
Bridgette
Geoff
Lindsay
Noah
Sierra
Beth
Courtney
LeShawna
and 2 new "Campers"
also i will need a very good artist to draw pics for this story. so if you can draw (and i mean VERY VERY well then please comment with some of your work) also i might need a few people to come up with some dialgue, so if you like to write comment me about that. And this is not a post your OC thing, and i dont need challenge ideas i already came up with them. Thank you and i would like an artist as soon as possible and i would love it if one of you could get a hold of Escorte on deviantart! THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH!
I loved Total Drama Island when it first came on "Cartoon Network", I loved how everyone had a unique personality, how Chris was cruel to the campers, and I thought the show had good character and relationship development.
But then, Total Drama Action premered, and I was not that Impressed. Any character development that had occured, was erased from the show all together, The contestants became annoying as hell(especially Geoff and Trent), And all the good couples were destroyed(but I don't like the GwenXTrent couple at all). The Geoff and Bridget couple was just awful, she needs to ditch him and go with DJ, and I thought that "Teletoon" and "Fresh Tv" had decided to get rid of any words like crap and screwed so there wouldn't be so many edits.
I wont even mention the abomonation that is Total Drama World Tour. They shouldn't sing at all. But I will say one thing about the two new contestants, they were created to annoy the hell out of everyone.
But then, Total Drama Action premered, and I was not that Impressed. Any character development that had occured, was erased from the show all together, The contestants became annoying as hell(especially Geoff and Trent), And all the good couples were destroyed(but I don't like the GwenXTrent couple at all). The Geoff and Bridget couple was just awful, she needs to ditch him and go with DJ, and I thought that "Teletoon" and "Fresh Tv" had decided to get rid of any words like crap and screwed so there wouldn't be so many edits.
I wont even mention the abomonation that is Total Drama World Tour. They shouldn't sing at all. But I will say one thing about the two new contestants, they were created to annoy the hell out of everyone.
