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AN: From Creepy to Lady. This is the first chapter. I didn’t want to post this yet, I wanted to wait, but I thought “Ok I’ll post this and see how it goes” if this goes well, I’ll keep going. If not I’ll wait and post the rest latter. So yeah. Oh BTW I got this idea from an anime/manga called “Wall Flower” so if you’ve seen/read it you’ll see some similarities. But it isn’t copy right since I changed it a lot and made it my own. Hope you like.

Trent’s POV

It was a dream come true. Me and all my friends going to the same school. Only problem, we had no place to live. So we went house hunting. We wanted something beautiful and luxurious at a reasonable price. We finally found a place and are on our way to have an interview with the owner now.

The house is beautiful, large, and perfect. It’s like a mini mansion, everything we are looking for. We all walked in very excited and confident to meet the owner. Cody was the first to enter the large French doors. He’s the smallest of us, but he is just as popular with the ladies. We all are. Geoff is a party kind of guy. He’s an ok guy. Then you have Duncan the bad guy. He’s been in trouble a couple of time. Sometimes with the law, sometimes with the girls. Me? I don’t really go down that road. Sure I flirt, and dated. But not as much as these guys.

The house is bigger on the inside than the outside. Marble everywhere and Persian rugs, fine china and paintings everywhere. “Right this way.” A butler said leading us to a room in the far right. Inside were 2 velvet couches and a coffee table and fine china and tea set for us.

“Sit boys” the owner said. She had puffy curly hair, a pink dress and beautiful jewelry. “So you’re interested in my home?” she asked sipping her tea.

“Yes miss.” I said smiling at her.

“Ok. It’s all yours.” she said putting her tea down.

“Seriously???” we all asked jumping out of the couch.

“And rent free.” She said with a smile. We all jumped up and started a victory dance. “BUT…” she said. We all sat down and let her finish. “My daughter will be staying with you and……” she said but was cut off by Duncan.

“We understand miss. Your daughter is safe with us. Nothing will happen to her.” he reassured.

“Thank you but let me finish.” She said with a stern face. Duncan sunk into the chair. “I want you to turn her into a proper lady. She has been threw some trauma and keeps to herself. But with our social stature I cant have her like that. So I need you four to make her into a lady. If you do the rent is free.” We all smile and agree and she looked annoyed. “Stop interrupting me. If you fail, your rent shall be tripled.” She said.

“TRIPPELED???” we all screamed in unison.

“Tippled. But it can’t be that hard. 4 beautiful guys can make her lady like. She’ll see your faces and change. I can feel it.” Then we turned to each other.

“Should we do it?” I asked.

“Hell yeah. Make a girl girly? With our looks? Consider it done.” Duncan said.

“A girl in the house sounds like a fun time.” Cody said.

“We can do this.” Geoff said. Then we turned back and accepter her offer.

“Lovely. My daughter will arrive tomorrow. I’ll check in on you all once in a while. To make sure she is turning into a lady.” she said before exiting the room and house.

We all cheered and settled in leaving her room untouched. It was across the hall from mine and next to Duncan and Cody’s. I can’t wait to meet her and see what we are up against.

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We woke up early and got the house ready. We picked roses for her and ordered food of all kinds. “Get washed up guys. Our project will be arriving soon.” I called stepping out of the shower.

“We would if you didn’t take so long to shower.” Duncan said pushing me out of the way and walking into the bathroom we all must share.

“A huge house and only 2 bathrooms?” I mumbled getting dressed in a normal outfit. As soon as I was dressed we heard the doorbell. “SHE’S HERE!!!” I yelled running to the front door to greet her.

Everyone had a big smile and waiting for her. The door slowly creaked open and we were all taken back.

She was as pale as a ghost, her eyes covered by her short black and blue hair, baggy, raggedy clothes and a creepy doll in her hands. Is this what we must make into a lady?

“Are you the daughter?” Geoff asked. She lifted her head but not to far. Then she looked back at her feet and walked in ignoring us.

“Hi I’m Cody. I am very excited to meet you.” He said offering her his hand. She looked at it as if she didn’t know what to do and walked forward and past the small boy.

“Hey girl. I’m Geoff, and I am very please to have you here.” he asked handing her a rose. She looked at him and I guess he saw her face. He froze and withered away like a ghost.

“I’m Duncan. I’m here to show you a good time.” He said blocking her way. I can see a slight blush growing on her cheeks giving her slight color. Then she ducked under his arm and walked faster to her room.

“Hello pretty. I’m….” I said introducing myself but was cut short.

“I understand I must live with you four and I’ll make myself clear. Don bother me, don’t talk to me, and what ever you do don’t lie to me.” She said before opening her door.

“I never lie.” I said grabbing her hand. I slowly brought it to my lips. But she screamed and slapped me.

“DON’T TOUCH ME! STAY AWAY FROM ME. LEAVE ME ALONE!” she yelled before she slammed her door close and putting a sign up that read ‘Gwen’s room. KEEP OUT…Or else.”

“At least we know her name.” Geoff said reading the sign.

“I got this.” Duncan said opening the door and entering. We all pressed our ears to the wall to listen. We didn’t hear anything until……

“STAY AWAY FROM ME. DEMON. DEMON DEMON…..” Then Duncan came out with cuts on his arms and slap marks on his face.

“How’d it go?” Cody laughed.

“Something is wrong with her. every time I talk to a girl like that they melt. She freaked out and hit me.” He said with a scold. “She’ll be harder than we thought.” He said before leaving.

I waited outside her door for a little then I opened it and looked inside. She was sitting on her bed talking to her doll.

“Why has she done this to me?” she cried. “Why?” she said before she broke down crying. I opened the light and she screamed and hid under her bed.

“Dinner is ready. Would you like to join us? We are not that bad.” I said with my trade mark smile. She peeked her eyes out from under the bed and looked at me. I think….I cant tell, her hair is too long.

“No. Let me be. Please.” She said hiding completely.

“Ok.” I said leaving. I entered the dinning room and everyone was looking for her. “Let her breath, give her time to warm up to us.” I said setting a tray for her. I set it outside her door and knocked on her door. “Diners outside by your door. But we’d love for you to join us next time.” I said before retiring to my room. We’ll work on lady liking her tomorrow weather she wants to or not. What is her problem anyway?
*IN THE CROC'S CHAMBER* phil:ok, it seem's we gotta jump over that pit,swing on the vine over the other huge pit,and finally pull that switch to reveal the treasure. alex:okay,so are you gonna do it,man? phil:yeah. *ON THE SQUIRRLES SIDE* violet:ok,so apperantly i have to lower myself into that hole,get the chest,and hope to god the pirahnans dont chew off my leg.get me some rope. *JACKI BRINGS ROPE* violet:thanks.*TIES IT AROUND WAIST,GIVES OTHER END TO JACKI,LOWERS HERSELF INTO HOLE,GETS CHEST AND.....* *MEANWHILE* *PHIL PULLS LEVER* *TREASURE CHEST FALLS IN THE MIDDLE OF THE CHAMBER* phil:WOO-HOO!!!...
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posted by amylina123
raynie looking at gordon
raynie looking at gordon
nelly: well those are all the contestants now u guys will kno the rules

nelly:rule 1 each week 1 of the contestents from the cast will get pampered at their fake wedding with their lovebird yep rule 2 every1 gets a part of a wedding thing and the team that wins will get something speical with their lovebird rule 3 last of all the thing that u get asigned 2 is going 2 get graded any question first wedding is 4 raynie

raynie:yay i'm the 1 person

nelly:lets throw in a suprise oh gordon


raynie:gordon is here?


nelly:yep

raynie:ehhhhhhhh

gordon:raynie is that u?

raynie:u bet its me
raynie still looking at gordon
raynie still looking at gordon
Duncan's POV: Halloween? Yea, it's my fave holiday. Why? 'Cause I get to scare the piss out of people. Haha, that's what I'm good at, isn't it?

I'll probably go as myself...

HA! I scare Courtney half to death every day !!

Danny's going as a male version of Bloody Mary... maybe I'll go as a ghost...

No, not as the kind with the bitchy lame sheet with two cut holes in it. That's for three year olds. I think I'm ready for face paint and fake blood.

Ha, I use that stuff nearly every day, are you kidding?

I flipped my phone open and dialed Tiannah's number.

"'Sup?" Came her voice on the other line.

"Hey,...
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Courtney's POV: Soon we got there, and once I stepped onto flat ground I nearly doubled over.

"You alright?" Duncan chuckled and reached down an arm.

I looked up at him, slipped my hand in his for him to pull me up - but instead I yanked down as hard as I could, sending him to the ground next to me. I stood up, perfectly fine, with him at my feet on the pavement.

"What the hell?" Duncan looked up at me and smiled a bit.

I rolled my eyes and started walking up to the school doors. Duncan got up and brushed himself off, and followed me.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

About half an hour later, I sat on a pink bean bag chair,...
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Courtney's POV: Everyone is always excited about Halloween. Egging people's houses, ding-dong ditching, getting and eating plethoras of candy until you vomit, dressing up in hopes of freaking somebody out. All... but me. Halloween means the school talent show, but it also means I have to deal with you-know-who scaring the piss out of me.

I requested a costume online. Well, not exactly requesting, per say. I was looking in an online Kohls catalog, and found a costume and I called in and requested one be put on hold for me. Turns out, it was the last copy of the costume. :)

The costume was basically...
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posted by wetts2
chrissy:ok lets vote some one of the island
ben:i vote for cory because he got the plain on fier
cory:i vote for ben because he said he is going to vote me off
tyra:ben told cory he is going to vote him off i have to do it
dain:hector called me a b****
hector:dain flirted with me i dont like bad girls
luke:ben said im with luke i dont relly know what that means but i think it means hes gay
elly:i vote of ben cuz he is a nerdy boy nerds are smart and might win so im not tacking eny riscks
grace:um ben i gousse nerds stop the party and im not feeling the party whrite know
luis:cory he mesed up the plain...
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kari was polishing her motorcycle when trent ran in her garage screaming:HELP!FANGIRLS!
(he hid behind kari)
kari was his girlfriend.
sam laughed 'ARE YOU HIDING YOUR BOYFRIEND?!
HA!
kari looked pissed 'SUE ME!'
sam was her very cousin.
fangirls:EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!
kari let out her pitbulls 'butch and pudgy'.
the fangirls ran.
but trent's biggest fan was still there and recited the poem 'your hair is black my heart is blue, I will stuff you with rags and sew you in two!'
kari blocked trent from her
dont make me hurt you!
she cracked her knuckles.
and the girl peed her pants.
trent was parayzled kari...
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Courtney's POV: I awoke the next morning, and I was having the WORST hangover ever. But it was rather odd; I didn't drink last night.

I sat up and pet my hair. My cell phone rang on its night stand, and I flipped it open and answered it. "Hello?"

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!" came Bridgette and Gwen's high-pitched shrieks.

"AHH WHAT THE HELL?" I laughed.

"OMG we know about last night!" Gwen gushed.

"Yea, I went to a party, had soda, and danced and sang. Get over it."

"No, we're talking about Duncan." Bridgette put emphasis on his name. "Ya know, between you and him...."

"What?" I giggled. "All we did was...
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Coutrney's POV: I sat on my bed the next morning, brushing my thick brown hair. I had a bad headache from screaming at Duncan and crying like a maniac, but I don't know if I can trust him. I mean, I've hated him since we met, but there was a small sliver of trust, and now there's none.

I tossed the brush across the room and grunted. Stupid Saturdays. Wait, at least I don't have to school with that vampire. Yea, being a vampire and doing a report on them is very smart. Smooth move, Duncan. At least I picked a historical book author.

I laid on my bed and played through the list of contacts on my...
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*its about 3 pm at macks house*

*somebody knocks on the door*

Mack: doors open

*harold and owen walk in*

Owen: hey whatcha doing
Mack: playing wrestling on PS3
Harold: sweet whos fighting
Mack: its Matt morgan vs. Mick foley vs. Suicide
Harold: Sweet can I play
Mack: yeah ok
Owen: I call matt morgan
Harold: Im freakin awesome as foley
Mack: fime I guess I get suicide
Mack: oh and its anything goes
Owen: just great you always win
Mack: yeah
Harold: I remeber you pinned me in like 2 minutes
Mack: yeah

*the video games starts to play*

Announcer: the folloring contest is a no holds barred triple threat mach scheduled...
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Omigod. I probably went to www.totaldramaaction.com ten times to vote for Duncan... ^^ So, please. If you would please do me a favor, would you –if you haven’t already- vote for Duncan...? Please... it would make me so happy if he won!
If you still aren’t convinced, this is my poetry at its special...

“It’s been the whole season...
It’s passed so fast.
But there is a reason...
We should make TDA last.

It’s TDA I love, TDA that I’ll miss.
As long as I can think of...
If you don’t know why I’m saying this
READ THE VERSE ABOVE! ^^

The episodes are all exciting
All twenty-five; agree?
TDA’s...
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posted by KARIxTRENT
kari was snowboarding waiting for everyone else to wake up.
trent:woah gnarly moves.
kari:heheh thanks.
chris had a meghorn:EVERYONE MEET ME IN THE MESS HALL!
kari fell:GAH!
groan
(she rubbbed her head)
in the mess hall:
kari dumped her tray:SOMEDAY BUT NOT TODAY!
trent:you can have my toast kari.
kari smiled at him.
duncan:how can ANYONE eat this slop?!
leshawna:dont know about yall but I aint eating this.
lindsay:me neither.
confessions of kari:
peh todays challange:EATING CHEFS SLOP!
ha!
posted by potterandtdi
Duncan

'Her eyes. It hit me. The girl I was on had the most beautiful eyes I'd ever seen. Now she's holding on to my waist. On my motorcycle.MY motorcycle. Not Geoff's, not Trent's. MINE. I wanted to stare into those eyes. I really do. I hope she feels the same way.' I thought in my head. I peek out of my daydreams and see my house. I park behind my dad's car. I get off my motorcycle. She sits there. She stares beyond my house. To the graveyard nextdoor. "Oh, don't mind that. It's not that spooky." I tell her. I try to get her to focus. She looks like she's possessed. I wonder what's wrong.

Miranda...
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posted by KARIxTRENT
chris:last time on tdd..
sadie got voted off!
rayentte was listening to music.
gordon:hey watcha listin to?
raynette showed him.
gordon:I love this song!
rayntte:so do I.
(they both smiled and inched closer and kissed)
trent was massing karis shoulders.
confessions of trent:
on a scale of 1 to 10.. the chick is a 20!
smart,cool,hot,pretty and indpendant, I think I am in love..
(he love sighed)
rayennte and gordon were holding hands.
lindsay:aww...
they are so hooked up!
trent:lindsay they were already hooked up.
lindsay:ohh..
kari:nice rayntte.
(they high fived)
posted by bubblegum05
Duncan and Courtney in the bar
Duncan and Courtney in the bar
Chapter 1- Crazy Crooked Car

I was in my car when it all started. It was freezing outside, and the sun was down. Something wasn't right. The trunk started shaking by its self. Something had jumped onto the back of my car and was going through the window. In a flash he jumped up at me. "AHHHHHHHHHHHH!" I screamed. "Duncan! You nearly gave me a heart attack!" He was laughing so hard his nose piercing looked like it was about to come apart. That would of been funny. "Oh!" He laughed," Did i scare you princess?" I gave him the look i always did when i was mad at him. "No." I sighed, "If you need...
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posted by potterandtdi
I walked down the street with my black converse clopping on the pavement. I hear a faint bang but ignore it. I hear it again, but a little louder. Someone pushes me off the sidewalk and into a nearby alleyway. I open my eyes and see a handsom man on top of me. He has a green mohawk topping his jet black hair. His skin was a nice
in-the-middle color, not too pale, not too tan. And his eyes, oh, those teal blue eyes got me. They were rich and smooth. They had a touch of green, only a faint one. Those eyes were what got me. "I'm sorry I tackled you. I hope it didn't hurt." he said. He reached...
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NOTE:I DIDNT REMMEBER IT WORD FOR WORD


Yeah, I deserve to win the million. I also desrve Courtney and her princess ways but NOOOOOO SHE BROKE UP WITH ME! I was in a pool with Courtney, and she said she wanted to make out. It was the best moment ever in my life. Untill BETH woke me up with all her chattering! "WEAR A BLIND-FOLD LOSER!" I screamed. Then, I waited for laughs. "Uh guys?" I said. "Oh ya, nobody else in the cabin."I shoved my pocket knife into the side of my bunk. "Now i'll never get to sleep." In a flash something that looked like pruple hairspray came in through the top of my...
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Episode 20: “Get a Clue”
***
I chatted with Beth at breakfast, scrambled eggs.
“You’re like sooo lucky you have your boyfriend here,” she was saying. “Brady... well, I haven’t seen him in so long.”
“You must miss him,” I said politely.
“Yeah,” she sighed. I didn’t really believe her. But, she was my friend, so...
Suddenly, Harold spit a microchip at me. “Ew!” I gasped. “Harold!”
“Sorry,” he said. “What is it?”
“Only on way to find out,” Beth said. “Stick it in Courtney’s PDA.”
“That is not going near my PDA,” Courtney protested.
Duncan grabbed...
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Episode 17; “Super Hero ID”

Everyone was awake by three in the morning on that day. Courtney and Lindsay really smelled! And I said so.
They were too busy arguing to notice. I sighed, and since I was awake already, I changed and stepped out. Oh, well. I’m off to meet Duncan.

I stepped out (everyone else did, also) and Chris was already there. He explained the challenge, super-power, blah, blah, blah.
I designed and made my costume quickly, so I could spend “quality time” with Duncan.
It was sky blue and cream, with a red sash around my waist. A red ribbon held back my hair. I showed it...
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Episode 15: “Million Dollar Babies”
I decided to eliminate Lindsay and Gwen from the competition.
***
“A sports challenge?” I echoed.
“Sounds like fun, right?” Duncan laughed.
“For you, maybe.”
He smiled and kissed my cheek.
I waited while Chris explained the challenge… blah blah blah tires…
“Ready? Annnndd….. GO!” Chris yelled when he had finished.
So our team went, and after all, it wasn’t that hard.
And Chris told us who we’d be competing against.
Courtney and… Heather.
Me and Duncan.
Justin and Leshawna.
Harold and Beth.
What was that? “Kiyurie, you’re switching...
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