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???:it was a dark and stormy night...just like this one...running down the stairs...the kind teacher lost her footing on the steps..she fell and died...you've all the story..no? There was a school built a long time ago called heavenly host elementary school..it was called.. Such a horrible thing to happen..the principle was devastated..see,he cared for the school as if it was his child...but one thing led to another...and the school was to be shut down...the principal was so stricken with grief that I t the day of its closure.....
He climbed to the top of the roof and threw himself to his death...or so the story goes....
Everyone gasped as a lighting had struck after that sentence...it went quiet In the cabin...everyone looked at Gwen as she told the story around the candle she had set...
Gwen:the reasons of the school getting torn down we're not just becuase of the nurses death...but there were many deaths that have happened in there as well...however!...they say that the teacher who fell down the steps still has no idea she's dead,even to this very day...and on rainy days when people tell this story...she knocks on the door to tell the children to go home...in fact! It's almost time to start her rounds...that's when she appears..after a sudden blackout...that leaves the place completly dark....knock knock..you'll here from the door sliding open so slowly...as her pale face looks inside...saying"anyone still here?" Then--
Just then a sudden flash of lighting hit near the cabin they were in..and a blackout hit..causing all of them startled..
Mike fell to the ground after the sudden shock letting out a little scream..clinging onto Zoey...
Mike:it's..it's a blackout!!
Zoey:mike! Pull yourself together! Don't scare all of us like that!
Mike:s-sorry..
Gwen:I don't like this...this shouldn't be happening...
Duncan looked over with a smirk thinking she caused this
Duncan:nice try Gwen...you had me going there for a second...
Gwen:it wasn't me Duncan!! I've been standing here the entire time! This is a real blackout!
Dawn:d-does anyone else hear that?!
Alejandro:sounds like it's coming from outside...
Everyone suddenly gasped as they heard a faint"knock knock" against the door...
Gwen:n-no way...
Mike the. Clinged onto zoey tight making a cry noise
Zoey:mike! What's wrong with you! Get ahold of yourself!
They all heard a faint"knock knock" again...gasping again..
Suddenly Duncan walked up from behind mike
Duncan: hey mike..arnt you gonna get the door..?
Mike:w-what?!
Duncan:all the girls..and Cameron are all in fear...don't u hate seeing them like This...?
Mike:so why don't YOU get the door!
Duncan:well it doesn't break my heart....
Mike:that's cold....fine!
Mike then slowly walked to the door his heart Beating fast...
???:is anyone still there..?
???: g o h o m e no w.........
The door suddenly opened and lighting flashed as mike flew back terrified and hit the floor...and the lights came back on...
The person that opened the door was none other than heather...laughing at mike..
Mike:h-heather...?
Gwen and heather walked over and laughed
Gwen:I call that a great plan..don't you think..?
Heather:got to be honest...yea
Cameron and dawn: we've been had!
Duncan was laughing at mike who was on the floor while Zoey helped him up...
Courtney:that's real immature Duncan you know that..?
Duncan: whatever sweetheart..."smirks"
Courtney: ugh!
They all let out there laughs and calmed down almost calling it a night...but when had one more thing they wanted to do...
Gwen:I thought we could try out this charm...I found it on the internet...seems pretty cool..
Gwen then showed a paper doll scrap in her hand...everyone wondered what she wanted to do now...?
Gwen:it's called sachiko ever after...it supposed to keep all of us close even when were far apart...
Duncan:eh...I'll give it a try...
Courtney:as if! I don't want to be near you guys the. I already have to!
Duncan:suit yourself then dollface...
Everyone then all huddled up around Gwen...including courtney who finally gave in and joined...
Gwen:alright...so there's 12 of us...we have to say "sachiko we beg of you" 13 times In our heads silently...
Everyone then nodded as it went quiet for a few minutes...
Gwen:.....alright...everyone say it 13 times...?
Heather:yes of course! Now come on I don't have all day!!
Gwen:ok...now everyone hold onto the doll scrap and hold onto it real tight...and well pull on 3...
Gwen:1......2........3!
Everyone then pulled tight and a sudden flash was heard from outside, startling everyone...
Gwen:alright everyone...hold onto those scraps...don't lose them..and well always be together...
Scott:are you serious? That was it...whatever..
Dawn:oh B look! Make sure to hold Onto yours ok?
B smiled as he shoved his in his pocket
Trent: nice story by the way Gwen...you really had me going there..heh..
Gwen smiled lightly and put hers in her pocket..
Courtney: that was it! Ugh! I swear Gwen you always have the weirdest story's ever!
Duncan: calm down sweetheart..."smirks"
Courtney: stop calling me that!
Alejandro: alright...I'm gonna hit the hay...
Everyone then walked towards the door but stopped as a sudden earthquake happened...and the ground begin to shake hard...
Dawn:a-a earthquake! But how!!
Suddenly...a huge hole apperead....and sucked everyone inside screaming as they all fell into the dark abyss....
End of chapter 1.......
???:it was a dark and stormy night...just like this one...running down the stairs...the kind teacher lost her footing on the steps..she fell and died...you've all the story..no? There was a school built a long time ago called heavenly host elementary school..it was called.. Such a horrible thing to happen..the principle was devastated..see,he cared for the school as if it was his child...but one thing led to another...and the school was to be shut down...the principal was so stricken with grief that I t the day of its closure.....
He climbed to the top of the roof and threw himself to his death...or so the story goes....
Everyone gasped as a lighting had struck after that sentence...it went quiet In the cabin...everyone looked at Gwen as she told the story around the candle she had set...
Gwen:the reasons of the school getting torn down we're not just becuase of the nurses death...but there were many deaths that have happened in there as well...however!...they say that the teacher who fell down the steps still has no idea she's dead,even to this very day...and on rainy days when people tell this story...she knocks on the door to tell the children to go home...in fact! It's almost time to start her rounds...that's when she appears..after a sudden blackout...that leaves the place completly dark....knock knock..you'll here from the door sliding open so slowly...as her pale face looks inside...saying"anyone still here?" Then--
Just then a sudden flash of lighting hit near the cabin they were in..and a blackout hit..causing all of them startled..
Mike fell to the ground after the sudden shock letting out a little scream..clinging onto Zoey...
Mike:it's..it's a blackout!!
Zoey:mike! Pull yourself together! Don't scare all of us like that!
Mike:s-sorry..
Gwen:I don't like this...this shouldn't be happening...
Duncan looked over with a smirk thinking she caused this
Duncan:nice try Gwen...you had me going there for a second...
Gwen:it wasn't me Duncan!! I've been standing here the entire time! This is a real blackout!
Dawn:d-does anyone else hear that?!
Alejandro:sounds like it's coming from outside...
Everyone suddenly gasped as they heard a faint"knock knock" against the door...
Gwen:n-no way...
Mike the. Clinged onto zoey tight making a cry noise
Zoey:mike! What's wrong with you! Get ahold of yourself!
They all heard a faint"knock knock" again...gasping again..
Suddenly Duncan walked up from behind mike
Duncan: hey mike..arnt you gonna get the door..?
Mike:w-what?!
Duncan:all the girls..and Cameron are all in fear...don't u hate seeing them like This...?
Mike:so why don't YOU get the door!
Duncan:well it doesn't break my heart....
Mike:that's cold....fine!
Mike then slowly walked to the door his heart Beating fast...
???:is anyone still there..?
???: g o h o m e no w.........
The door suddenly opened and lighting flashed as mike flew back terrified and hit the floor...and the lights came back on...
The person that opened the door was none other than heather...laughing at mike..
Mike:h-heather...?
Gwen and heather walked over and laughed
Gwen:I call that a great plan..don't you think..?
Heather:got to be honest...yea
Cameron and dawn: we've been had!
Duncan was laughing at mike who was on the floor while Zoey helped him up...
Courtney:that's real immature Duncan you know that..?
Duncan: whatever sweetheart..."smirks"
Courtney: ugh!
They all let out there laughs and calmed down almost calling it a night...but when had one more thing they wanted to do...
Gwen:I thought we could try out this charm...I found it on the internet...seems pretty cool..
Gwen then showed a paper doll scrap in her hand...everyone wondered what she wanted to do now...?
Gwen:it's called sachiko ever after...it supposed to keep all of us close even when were far apart...
Duncan:eh...I'll give it a try...
Courtney:as if! I don't want to be near you guys the. I already have to!
Duncan:suit yourself then dollface...
Everyone then all huddled up around Gwen...including courtney who finally gave in and joined...
Gwen:alright...so there's 12 of us...we have to say "sachiko we beg of you" 13 times In our heads silently...
Everyone then nodded as it went quiet for a few minutes...
Gwen:.....alright...everyone say it 13 times...?
Heather:yes of course! Now come on I don't have all day!!
Gwen:ok...now everyone hold onto the doll scrap and hold onto it real tight...and well pull on 3...
Gwen:1......2........3!
Everyone then pulled tight and a sudden flash was heard from outside, startling everyone...
Gwen:alright everyone...hold onto those scraps...don't lose them..and well always be together...
Scott:are you serious? That was it...whatever..
Dawn:oh B look! Make sure to hold Onto yours ok?
B smiled as he shoved his in his pocket
Trent: nice story by the way Gwen...you really had me going there..heh..
Gwen smiled lightly and put hers in her pocket..
Courtney: that was it! Ugh! I swear Gwen you always have the weirdest story's ever!
Duncan: calm down sweetheart..."smirks"
Courtney: stop calling me that!
Alejandro: alright...I'm gonna hit the hay...
Everyone then walked towards the door but stopped as a sudden earthquake happened...and the ground begin to shake hard...
Dawn:a-a earthquake! But how!!
Suddenly...a huge hole apperead....and sucked everyone inside screaming as they all fell into the dark abyss....
End of chapter 1.......
*At the camp fire pit*
Chris: Okay there are two teams, the good team and the evil team. And here they are... The good team is... Alex,Penny,Rebecca,Lisa and lulu. The TDI characters on the good team are... Cody,Geoff,Lindsay,Katie and Bridgette.
The people on the evil team are... Rayven,Jared,Jade,Annie and Aydan. The TDI characters on the evil team are... Duncan,Alejandro,Heather,Courtney and Izzy.
Chris: Okay everybody the first challange will by the dock in one hour!
*Stay tuned for part 3! Chris will anounce the first challange*
Chris: Okay there are two teams, the good team and the evil team. And here they are... The good team is... Alex,Penny,Rebecca,Lisa and lulu. The TDI characters on the good team are... Cody,Geoff,Lindsay,Katie and Bridgette.
The people on the evil team are... Rayven,Jared,Jade,Annie and Aydan. The TDI characters on the evil team are... Duncan,Alejandro,Heather,Courtney and Izzy.
Chris: Okay everybody the first challange will by the dock in one hour!
*Stay tuned for part 3! Chris will anounce the first challange*
chris:your challangee:
(he threw everyone off the boat)
kari spit water out of her mouth.
phil screamed:SHARK!!!!
trent was grabbed by the shark.
(kari gasped for air and went down to go save him she beat up the shark)
and she pulled unconicous trent up.
kari:someone bring trent to land!
duncan took him and brought him to land,and kari preformed cpr on him.
trent gasped for air and kari and trent hugged.
duncan:oh great there goes our cruise!
chris had the boat to himself.
everyone:no!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(he threw everyone off the boat)
kari spit water out of her mouth.
phil screamed:SHARK!!!!
trent was grabbed by the shark.
(kari gasped for air and went down to go save him she beat up the shark)
and she pulled unconicous trent up.
kari:someone bring trent to land!
duncan took him and brought him to land,and kari preformed cpr on him.
trent gasped for air and kari and trent hugged.
duncan:oh great there goes our cruise!
chris had the boat to himself.
everyone:no!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!