Ok here is CH2. I hope you are enjoying it. Also loving the reviews. Pleas keep them coming. Things start to pick up in this chapter and the story gets really good from now on…. (Well at least I think so) ENJOY
CH2 Vampires
Re-cap: Trent screamed out in pain, as his blood was being drunk. I felt like fainting when I saw blood dripping down his neck. For once in my life I felt weak and powerless. I wanted to help, but I did not know how. All I could do was watch in horror.
Even in my state of shock and horror I could not take my eyes off of Trent. He was screaming in pure agony, but would not look at me, or even open his eyes. Soon his eyes shot open….this scared me even more….the he got quiet. The vampire pulled his fangs out of his neck, and licked the extra blood on his neck. When he was one he dropped Trent to the floor. He hit the floor like a sack of rocks. I move to see if he was ok but stopped as the vampire took notice of me.
“Your turn, my pretty” He snickered as he took a step over Trent before he was also caught of guard.
“NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO” Someone screamed behind me.
I turned to see who but all I saw was a gust of wind knock down the vampire. Then I heard hissing and growls as a fight broke out between to forces I could not see due to their speed.
Trent broke me out of my daze. He started to scream, and shake in agony. I came to his side, tears wheeling up in my eyes.
“T-T—Trent? Are you-“ I was cut off when he looked at me. His eyes her have gone from a breath taking emerald green to a viscous BLOOD red. I gasped in horror and sadness. I did not understand what was going on, but I knew Trent would never be the same.
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As the tears began to slide down my eyes, and the unknown force conquered the vampire something even more shocking happened to me. I came in closer to see if I could help Trent. (Yea I helped alright.)
He grabbed my arms and pinned me down, him on top of me. The force was so powerful I lost all my air. I gasped for breath and looked up at his face as he revealed to long white fangs plummeting from his upper teeth.
He cam to my neck, he hesitated a little but then he dug his fangs into my feeble skin. I cried out in pain, and horror as he drank. I have always wondered what it was like to be bitten by a vampire. I thought it would be cool, and sexy. I was dread wrong. This was pain, and fear. I could feel my blood leaving my body. His hot lips on my neck keeping his teeth in place like an extremely hard hikki(EDN/ Is that spelled right???). His tongue softening my neck in circular motions that was also keeping my neck clear of spillage. … … … ok now if you think about it it is cool, and sexy. But I was too scared to see it like that.
“Nooooooooooo” The voice yelled again. This time she pushed Trent off of me. I heard him Growl and yell. I turned my head to see what was going on. The unknown source was a lady. And she had Trent pinned like the vampire had before. But she did not bite him.
Instead she put her hand on his forehead and whispered something. Then Trent was out like a light.
She threw him over her shoulder like a ragdoll and she did not seem to mind. She looked at me and sighed. I sat up immediately as she made her way toward me.
I was going to run. Run and find help…somehow. But the pain in my neck stopped me.
My hands covered were I was in pain…it only hurt more. I removed my hand, and looked down. They were covered in blood. As I stared at my hand the lady came in front of me.
“Don’t worry. I’m here to help” She reassured. Then she placed her hand on my forehead to. Then I blacked out.
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I woke up in a mansion. I was lying on a velvet couch in front of a huge fireplace and plasma TV. I heard heels clacking on the floor. Followed by one worried voice.
“What am I going to do??? I failed! They will never forgive this! This is BAD this is really, really bad!!!” I opened my eyes to see who it was. It was the same girl from the alley. She looked like she modeled for Victoria’s Secret Model. She had long goldie locks curls. She had a black pencil skirt, and a black button up blouse. And black stilettos. She also had an angelic face, and was not vey tall, even with the huge heels.
She looked at me. I sat up in embarrassment that I was gawking at her. Her ice blue eyes seemed to pierce into my soul as she kept a serious face. Then she smiled a warm, sweet, comforting smile.
She walked toward me on the couch. “Hi Gwen. How are you feeling? My names Maria. I’m sure you have a billion questions you want answers to right away right?” She sounded so mother like. She even sat down besides me. She was right I did have a billion questions, but I could not speak. Maria sighed.
“Vampires. Believe in them?” She asked with that serious face. “Yes…sort of” I answered. “Well believe Gwen because you’re in a hug vamp mess right now.” She said this with a serious smile. “Let me tell you m story ok?” She asked before explaining herself.
“I am a vampire. But I am also half human…sort of…long story. We vamps have certain ranks that give us jobs so we can live peacefully among humans. I am a C rank. The 3rd highest rank. Sounds good right? Not really. I have a lot of authority, but I ….well, in human terms I’m the FBI , then there are the Whitehouse people, rank B, and the elders rank A whom nobody deals with. As a C I watch the future and see if the lowest vamps are going to lose control or something. Oh p.s. I can see the future, hence how I know your name. (This has not occurred to me till now that she knew my name and I never told her) So I see a level J trying to create level S vampires and take over the world. So I got to stop him. But I got there…..a……little….to….late?” She closed her eyes as if I was going to shoot her.
She reopened her eyes and looked so sad, more like crushed. “I am so sorry we could not save him Gwen. I tried I really-’’ That caught my attention. “SAVE HIM! WHAT DO YOU MEAN SAVE HIM!” I cut her off with a shout.
“I tried, but I was to late so….” She began to explain. Then her eyes opened wide and turned purple. She stared at me. “OH NO! He’s alive Gwen. He’s not dead. Chill. Let me explain.” I was so confused so I sat down like a good girl and heard her story.
She explained that that man who attacked us was a vampire who thought he could be an elder. “It’s very common. A vamp wants more respect so they resort to level J and try to make an army of S’s to rule the world. But none succeed. Except today. Gwen,” She looked into my eyes and she looked like she was about to cry “Trent’s a Level S. I am so sorry. I will help in everyway I possibly can.”
“What dose level S mean?” I asked. She sighed. “Unlike the other ranks that order by power and age. S stands for Savage.” There was a pause. “The elders kill all level S’s because they are a danger to society. We have yet to tame an S.” I was hyperventilating. Put to death? Danger?
“I will do everything possible so it does not happen. Trust me….” Her eyes went purple again “So far, so good. I can see his future and its pretty lengthy and fuzzy. But I can see clearly to next week. But years from now is very fuzzy. That means undecided. This is good though because the elders always kill an S as soon as it’s formed.” She let a shy smile escape her lips. The she noticed I had heard the worst possible new and wiped her smile away. “I will let you think this over. I need to deal with something real quick. Ok?” She got up and walked across the hall. I looked back to see were she went. She pulled a cord in front of this huge red curtain and it fell, revealing a glass wall with a glass door. Behind said wall was Trent pacing back and forth aggravated. My heart skipped a beat. I jumped up and ran toward the wall. But Maria stopped me with a look that could kill. “I said to give me a minute Gwen. I need to explain this to him now, and he is more difficult than you. Twice as difficult with you around.” I looked up, Trent was pressed against the wall saying something but I couldn’t hear him. He looked sad, and hurt. When he realized I could not make out what he was saying punched and kicked the wall. “Gwen, pleas. 5 minutes, then I can decide if you can see him or not. It all depends on his cooperation. Go back to the couch.” I backed away slowly staring at Trent who continued to speak but made no noise. That really aggravated him, so I left. ….. For now.
End of Chapter 2
What do ya think? Review pleas. I think this is coming out pretty good, but it gets better. Promise! <3 Next chapter coming soon.
CH2 Vampires
Re-cap: Trent screamed out in pain, as his blood was being drunk. I felt like fainting when I saw blood dripping down his neck. For once in my life I felt weak and powerless. I wanted to help, but I did not know how. All I could do was watch in horror.
Even in my state of shock and horror I could not take my eyes off of Trent. He was screaming in pure agony, but would not look at me, or even open his eyes. Soon his eyes shot open….this scared me even more….the he got quiet. The vampire pulled his fangs out of his neck, and licked the extra blood on his neck. When he was one he dropped Trent to the floor. He hit the floor like a sack of rocks. I move to see if he was ok but stopped as the vampire took notice of me.
“Your turn, my pretty” He snickered as he took a step over Trent before he was also caught of guard.
“NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO” Someone screamed behind me.
I turned to see who but all I saw was a gust of wind knock down the vampire. Then I heard hissing and growls as a fight broke out between to forces I could not see due to their speed.
Trent broke me out of my daze. He started to scream, and shake in agony. I came to his side, tears wheeling up in my eyes.
“T-T—Trent? Are you-“ I was cut off when he looked at me. His eyes her have gone from a breath taking emerald green to a viscous BLOOD red. I gasped in horror and sadness. I did not understand what was going on, but I knew Trent would never be the same.
O0o0o0oo0o0o0o0o0o
As the tears began to slide down my eyes, and the unknown force conquered the vampire something even more shocking happened to me. I came in closer to see if I could help Trent. (Yea I helped alright.)
He grabbed my arms and pinned me down, him on top of me. The force was so powerful I lost all my air. I gasped for breath and looked up at his face as he revealed to long white fangs plummeting from his upper teeth.
He cam to my neck, he hesitated a little but then he dug his fangs into my feeble skin. I cried out in pain, and horror as he drank. I have always wondered what it was like to be bitten by a vampire. I thought it would be cool, and sexy. I was dread wrong. This was pain, and fear. I could feel my blood leaving my body. His hot lips on my neck keeping his teeth in place like an extremely hard hikki(EDN/ Is that spelled right???). His tongue softening my neck in circular motions that was also keeping my neck clear of spillage. … … … ok now if you think about it it is cool, and sexy. But I was too scared to see it like that.
“Nooooooooooo” The voice yelled again. This time she pushed Trent off of me. I heard him Growl and yell. I turned my head to see what was going on. The unknown source was a lady. And she had Trent pinned like the vampire had before. But she did not bite him.
Instead she put her hand on his forehead and whispered something. Then Trent was out like a light.
She threw him over her shoulder like a ragdoll and she did not seem to mind. She looked at me and sighed. I sat up immediately as she made her way toward me.
I was going to run. Run and find help…somehow. But the pain in my neck stopped me.
My hands covered were I was in pain…it only hurt more. I removed my hand, and looked down. They were covered in blood. As I stared at my hand the lady came in front of me.
“Don’t worry. I’m here to help” She reassured. Then she placed her hand on my forehead to. Then I blacked out.
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I woke up in a mansion. I was lying on a velvet couch in front of a huge fireplace and plasma TV. I heard heels clacking on the floor. Followed by one worried voice.
“What am I going to do??? I failed! They will never forgive this! This is BAD this is really, really bad!!!” I opened my eyes to see who it was. It was the same girl from the alley. She looked like she modeled for Victoria’s Secret Model. She had long goldie locks curls. She had a black pencil skirt, and a black button up blouse. And black stilettos. She also had an angelic face, and was not vey tall, even with the huge heels.
She looked at me. I sat up in embarrassment that I was gawking at her. Her ice blue eyes seemed to pierce into my soul as she kept a serious face. Then she smiled a warm, sweet, comforting smile.
She walked toward me on the couch. “Hi Gwen. How are you feeling? My names Maria. I’m sure you have a billion questions you want answers to right away right?” She sounded so mother like. She even sat down besides me. She was right I did have a billion questions, but I could not speak. Maria sighed.
“Vampires. Believe in them?” She asked with that serious face. “Yes…sort of” I answered. “Well believe Gwen because you’re in a hug vamp mess right now.” She said this with a serious smile. “Let me tell you m story ok?” She asked before explaining herself.
“I am a vampire. But I am also half human…sort of…long story. We vamps have certain ranks that give us jobs so we can live peacefully among humans. I am a C rank. The 3rd highest rank. Sounds good right? Not really. I have a lot of authority, but I ….well, in human terms I’m the FBI , then there are the Whitehouse people, rank B, and the elders rank A whom nobody deals with. As a C I watch the future and see if the lowest vamps are going to lose control or something. Oh p.s. I can see the future, hence how I know your name. (This has not occurred to me till now that she knew my name and I never told her) So I see a level J trying to create level S vampires and take over the world. So I got to stop him. But I got there…..a……little….to….late?” She closed her eyes as if I was going to shoot her.
She reopened her eyes and looked so sad, more like crushed. “I am so sorry we could not save him Gwen. I tried I really-’’ That caught my attention. “SAVE HIM! WHAT DO YOU MEAN SAVE HIM!” I cut her off with a shout.
“I tried, but I was to late so….” She began to explain. Then her eyes opened wide and turned purple. She stared at me. “OH NO! He’s alive Gwen. He’s not dead. Chill. Let me explain.” I was so confused so I sat down like a good girl and heard her story.
She explained that that man who attacked us was a vampire who thought he could be an elder. “It’s very common. A vamp wants more respect so they resort to level J and try to make an army of S’s to rule the world. But none succeed. Except today. Gwen,” She looked into my eyes and she looked like she was about to cry “Trent’s a Level S. I am so sorry. I will help in everyway I possibly can.”
“What dose level S mean?” I asked. She sighed. “Unlike the other ranks that order by power and age. S stands for Savage.” There was a pause. “The elders kill all level S’s because they are a danger to society. We have yet to tame an S.” I was hyperventilating. Put to death? Danger?
“I will do everything possible so it does not happen. Trust me….” Her eyes went purple again “So far, so good. I can see his future and its pretty lengthy and fuzzy. But I can see clearly to next week. But years from now is very fuzzy. That means undecided. This is good though because the elders always kill an S as soon as it’s formed.” She let a shy smile escape her lips. The she noticed I had heard the worst possible new and wiped her smile away. “I will let you think this over. I need to deal with something real quick. Ok?” She got up and walked across the hall. I looked back to see were she went. She pulled a cord in front of this huge red curtain and it fell, revealing a glass wall with a glass door. Behind said wall was Trent pacing back and forth aggravated. My heart skipped a beat. I jumped up and ran toward the wall. But Maria stopped me with a look that could kill. “I said to give me a minute Gwen. I need to explain this to him now, and he is more difficult than you. Twice as difficult with you around.” I looked up, Trent was pressed against the wall saying something but I couldn’t hear him. He looked sad, and hurt. When he realized I could not make out what he was saying punched and kicked the wall. “Gwen, pleas. 5 minutes, then I can decide if you can see him or not. It all depends on his cooperation. Go back to the couch.” I backed away slowly staring at Trent who continued to speak but made no noise. That really aggravated him, so I left. ….. For now.
End of Chapter 2
What do ya think? Review pleas. I think this is coming out pretty good, but it gets better. Promise! <3 Next chapter coming soon.
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She is a true definition to perfection, beauty, love, and sweetness.
Pure ownage.
A miracle to be treasured she should never be taken advantage of or for granted.
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I think Mike wrote this.
2. An awesome, fun-loving girl who can always make you laugh. Is a great friend and can get you through hard times. NOT a boyfriend stealer. Really pretty and likes to talk. Does not like annoying people, they give her headaches. Really good at math and a very fast worker. Likes to text and go on facebook. You could never find anything bad to say about her.
She is a true definition to perfection, beauty, love, and sweetness.
Pure ownage.
A miracle to be treasured she should never be taken advantage of or for granted.
The builder of my heart and the keystone to my soul.
I think Mike wrote this.
2. An awesome, fun-loving girl who can always make you laugh. Is a great friend and can get you through hard times. NOT a boyfriend stealer. Really pretty and likes to talk. Does not like annoying people, they give her headaches. Really good at math and a very fast worker. Likes to text and go on facebook. You could never find anything bad to say about her.
