Ok! This is one of my second ever written Fanfic :) This is my first about the new cast which involves Mike and Zoey. Tell me if I need any improvements to the story! BTW, Mike's telling the story.
'Loser!'
'You're such a freak!'
'You don't deserve to live!'
'Who'd want to be friends with a guy who changes personalities?'
Those words stung my heart, but not as much as what these people were doing to me. They kicked me in the chest, pushing me to the ground and yelled in my face. Just because I have a multiple personality disorder.
Why was I born with this curse? I ask myself that question every day.
Why do I have to suffer through this? I ask myself that question every hour.
Why was I born with a multiple personality disorder? I ask myself that question every minute.
After being pushed to the ground again, I opened my eyes seeing 3 tall guys standing over the top of me. They evilly stared at me, and soon enough everyone else started crowding around.
'You're so weak! Why do you even bother to live?' asked one of the guys, stepping on my stomach. I yelped in pain, as he foot pushed further down.
'Please... leave me alone,' I weakly asked closing my eyes. I was about to get ready for more pain when I heard a high pitched voice.
'Hey! Live him alone!' yelled the voice. I opened my eyes to see another person standing next to the gang of guys. She had dark red hair, with a flower on the side. She had the prettiest face I had ever seen.
'Oooh! It's the loner Zoey, standing up for crazy dude here!' laughed one of the guys.
'Oh-no! Please don't hurt us!' one of the other's yelled sarcastically. Lying on the ground, I watched the girl grab one of the guy's arms and pulling it up behind his back. He started whimpering from the pain.
'Uncle! Uncle!' he yelled. The girl dropped him, falling to his back. He and his other friends ran off. The girl pulled out her arm and I grabbed onto it, as she slowly pulled me up.
'Wow. Thank-you so much!' I told her.
'You're truly welcome. I've seen them being mean to you. Why didn't anyone else stand up and tell those bullies to leave you alone?' she asked.
'I have no friends,' I told her. 'No-one likes me because I have a multiple personality disorder,'
'You're in luck. I don't seem to have any friends either,' she replied. 'That's why they called me a loner. My names Zoey by the way,'
'I'm Mike! How'd you beat those bullies anyway?' I asked.
'I watch a lot of action movies,' she replied.
'Really? So do I! So, you're not worried about my multiple personality disorder?' I asked.
'No way! I bet it'll be funny and kind of cute!' she told me.
For a moment we gazed into each other's eyes, without saying a word. Until... I started gasping.
'Augh! You whippersnapper! What are you doing 'ere?' I asked in my elderly voice. Zoey giggled while her cheeks tinted to a pale red.
'Yes, definitely cute!' she said while giggling.
'Loser!'
'You're such a freak!'
'You don't deserve to live!'
'Who'd want to be friends with a guy who changes personalities?'
Those words stung my heart, but not as much as what these people were doing to me. They kicked me in the chest, pushing me to the ground and yelled in my face. Just because I have a multiple personality disorder.
Why was I born with this curse? I ask myself that question every day.
Why do I have to suffer through this? I ask myself that question every hour.
Why was I born with a multiple personality disorder? I ask myself that question every minute.
After being pushed to the ground again, I opened my eyes seeing 3 tall guys standing over the top of me. They evilly stared at me, and soon enough everyone else started crowding around.
'You're so weak! Why do you even bother to live?' asked one of the guys, stepping on my stomach. I yelped in pain, as he foot pushed further down.
'Please... leave me alone,' I weakly asked closing my eyes. I was about to get ready for more pain when I heard a high pitched voice.
'Hey! Live him alone!' yelled the voice. I opened my eyes to see another person standing next to the gang of guys. She had dark red hair, with a flower on the side. She had the prettiest face I had ever seen.
'Oooh! It's the loner Zoey, standing up for crazy dude here!' laughed one of the guys.
'Oh-no! Please don't hurt us!' one of the other's yelled sarcastically. Lying on the ground, I watched the girl grab one of the guy's arms and pulling it up behind his back. He started whimpering from the pain.
'Uncle! Uncle!' he yelled. The girl dropped him, falling to his back. He and his other friends ran off. The girl pulled out her arm and I grabbed onto it, as she slowly pulled me up.
'Wow. Thank-you so much!' I told her.
'You're truly welcome. I've seen them being mean to you. Why didn't anyone else stand up and tell those bullies to leave you alone?' she asked.
'I have no friends,' I told her. 'No-one likes me because I have a multiple personality disorder,'
'You're in luck. I don't seem to have any friends either,' she replied. 'That's why they called me a loner. My names Zoey by the way,'
'I'm Mike! How'd you beat those bullies anyway?' I asked.
'I watch a lot of action movies,' she replied.
'Really? So do I! So, you're not worried about my multiple personality disorder?' I asked.
'No way! I bet it'll be funny and kind of cute!' she told me.
For a moment we gazed into each other's eyes, without saying a word. Until... I started gasping.
'Augh! You whippersnapper! What are you doing 'ere?' I asked in my elderly voice. Zoey giggled while her cheeks tinted to a pale red.
'Yes, definitely cute!' she said while giggling.
Brianna: Hello everyone! My name is Brianna and I will be the host of this show. Some of the other judges are Gwen, Alejandro and Jared.
Judges: Hi!
Brianna: Today, we'll meet the contestants. They are: Sumer, Taylor, Addrey, Raynette, Samantha, Anacapri, Nikole, Savannah, Marissa, Ashley, Chrissy, Nelly, Tasmine, Rikki, Abby, Olivia, Miranda, Natalie, Diana, and Brittani. Today, the girls will have their first challenge.
*An hour later*
Brianna: Welcome girls. You've met me and the judges already, we'll get on to the rules:
Rules:
1. No fighting
2. Have fun
Brianna: Your first challenge is to makeover yourselves. The makeovers are due on Sunday. Here's how to post your girl's picture for the week:
Post it as a photo and call it: ___'s entry for week____'s challenge.
Brianna: Good luck.
Judges: Hi!
Brianna: Today, we'll meet the contestants. They are: Sumer, Taylor, Addrey, Raynette, Samantha, Anacapri, Nikole, Savannah, Marissa, Ashley, Chrissy, Nelly, Tasmine, Rikki, Abby, Olivia, Miranda, Natalie, Diana, and Brittani. Today, the girls will have their first challenge.
*An hour later*
Brianna: Welcome girls. You've met me and the judges already, we'll get on to the rules:
Rules:
1. No fighting
2. Have fun
Brianna: Your first challenge is to makeover yourselves. The makeovers are due on Sunday. Here's how to post your girl's picture for the week:
Post it as a photo and call it: ___'s entry for week____'s challenge.
Brianna: Good luck.
the cast of my book
Tdi lover4ever as: Fayetta Reed "Fay"
Taytrain97 as: Raynetta Raella di Selvaggio, known as 'Ray'
Taylor as: Tay
Baylon as: B.J.
Christian as: James
lexie as: lex
Everyone else is from the original show
srry 4 the people who are not in it
i needed 4 more people and my frends wannted to be in it...
um...ya..sorry
oh i all most 4got
aprilacne as: nikki abegayl funer
srry 4 the people who are not in this
i'm rilly sorry
i wouldn't remember any of them
then i would have to wright more fights and arguments and kissing sceens and you get the point do you
so um sorry!
Tdi lover4ever as: Fayetta Reed "Fay"
Taytrain97 as: Raynetta Raella di Selvaggio, known as 'Ray'
Taylor as: Tay
Baylon as: B.J.
Christian as: James
lexie as: lex
Everyone else is from the original show
srry 4 the people who are not in it
i needed 4 more people and my frends wannted to be in it...
um...ya..sorry
oh i all most 4got
aprilacne as: nikki abegayl funer
srry 4 the people who are not in this
i'm rilly sorry
i wouldn't remember any of them
then i would have to wright more fights and arguments and kissing sceens and you get the point do you
so um sorry!