Carry: hi im the host and this is my husband chris mclain
Chris: hi and here is the firdt teen
Star: hello chris,carry
Both: hey star umm we're gonna show you your eooms when the others get here
Star: umm ok walks in building
Carry: phew oh there's the other kid
Luna: hey
Both: hi
Luna: am I first
Both: no stars in there
Luna: oh ok walks in and see's star hi im luna
Star: umm hi rolls eyes
Luna: whispers bitch
Star: what
Luna: nothing
Outside:
Carry: ok next peopke oh three people
Girls: hi
Camile: hi
Rikki: hi
Melissa: hey
carry: oh ok go meet the other teens
Carry: oh more girls
Lily: yo
selena:hola
Carry: sisters
Both: yep
carry: oh ok walk in please
Both: ok
Carry: ok boys
Don: hey
Corey: yo
Carry: plz walk in
Carry: hi
Cassidy: hi
Carry: enter
Cassidy:.... Umm ok
Carry: hi
Tony: yo
Carry: walk in plz
Tony: ok
Sara: hi
all the teens show up
carry: everyone here
Teens: yes
In rikki and stars room
Knocks on door me
Rikki: hey carry it's time for the first challenge by 8:00
Then the challenge starts
Rikki: looks at don
Don: looks at her
Roxie: that vinny guy is of your leage anyways plus he has a gf ashley : your right but that jury kid is hot
Roxie: what the fuck
Vinny: kat
Kat: yes babe
Vinny: nvm
Don: dude that rikki girl is hot
Corey: I like melissa
Carry: we'll be putting you in teams popular team
Vinny,kat,roxie,lily,rikki,don,star,corey,audrey,melissa
Carry: geeks
Camile,tony,tommy,cassidy,and many others
First challenge the haunted collge
Don: holy shit that's intense gulps
Lily: why
Carry: chris
Chris: babe a dog bit my ass
Teens: sick
Carry: youll be spending the night in that haunted collge
Teens: gulp
Star: easy said star sarcasticly
Rikki: omg
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Chris: hi and here is the firdt teen
Star: hello chris,carry
Both: hey star umm we're gonna show you your eooms when the others get here
Star: umm ok walks in building
Carry: phew oh there's the other kid
Luna: hey
Both: hi
Luna: am I first
Both: no stars in there
Luna: oh ok walks in and see's star hi im luna
Star: umm hi rolls eyes
Luna: whispers bitch
Star: what
Luna: nothing
Outside:
Carry: ok next peopke oh three people
Girls: hi
Camile: hi
Rikki: hi
Melissa: hey
carry: oh ok go meet the other teens
Carry: oh more girls
Lily: yo
selena:hola
Carry: sisters
Both: yep
carry: oh ok walk in please
Both: ok
Carry: ok boys
Don: hey
Corey: yo
Carry: plz walk in
Carry: hi
Cassidy: hi
Carry: enter
Cassidy:.... Umm ok
Carry: hi
Tony: yo
Carry: walk in plz
Tony: ok
Sara: hi
all the teens show up
carry: everyone here
Teens: yes
In rikki and stars room
Knocks on door me
Rikki: hey carry it's time for the first challenge by 8:00
Then the challenge starts
Rikki: looks at don
Don: looks at her
Roxie: that vinny guy is of your leage anyways plus he has a gf ashley : your right but that jury kid is hot
Roxie: what the fuck
Vinny: kat
Kat: yes babe
Vinny: nvm
Don: dude that rikki girl is hot
Corey: I like melissa
Carry: we'll be putting you in teams popular team
Vinny,kat,roxie,lily,rikki,don,star,corey,audrey,melissa
Carry: geeks
Camile,tony,tommy,cassidy,and many others
First challenge the haunted collge
Don: holy shit that's intense gulps
Lily: why
Carry: chris
Chris: babe a dog bit my ass
Teens: sick
Carry: youll be spending the night in that haunted collge
Teens: gulp
Star: easy said star sarcasticly
Rikki: omg
To be continued:
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Hello everyone. I'm going to rewrite TDR because i don't like how they are adding so many new characters. well anyways since we don't know where TDR will take place i decided to have it take place at a Roller coaster/fair/circus type thing called Mclain Land. The returning cast will be
Heather
Alejandro
Cody
Zeke
Dj
Izzy
Gwen
Tyler
Owen
Trent
Duncan
Bridgette
Geoff
Lindsay
Noah
Sierra
Beth
Courtney
LeShawna
and 2 new "Campers"
also i will need a very good artist to draw pics for this story. so if you can draw (and i mean VERY VERY well then please comment with some of your work) also i might need a few people to come up with some dialgue, so if you like to write comment me about that. And this is not a post your OC thing, and i dont need challenge ideas i already came up with them. Thank you and i would like an artist as soon as possible and i would love it if one of you could get a hold of Escorte on deviantart! THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH!
Heather
Alejandro
Cody
Zeke
Dj
Izzy
Gwen
Tyler
Owen
Trent
Duncan
Bridgette
Geoff
Lindsay
Noah
Sierra
Beth
Courtney
LeShawna
and 2 new "Campers"
also i will need a very good artist to draw pics for this story. so if you can draw (and i mean VERY VERY well then please comment with some of your work) also i might need a few people to come up with some dialgue, so if you like to write comment me about that. And this is not a post your OC thing, and i dont need challenge ideas i already came up with them. Thank you and i would like an artist as soon as possible and i would love it if one of you could get a hold of Escorte on deviantart! THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH!
(at the grave yared)
chirs:frist bone go's toooo jakki andrea mallory
samantha samantha rollings sara ashley suna dustin rose lynn anacpriana sara kristing amy kenya the last one go's to blaze im sorry chelsea
chelsea:thats ok
tak:bye chelsea (and gives her a hug)
chelsea:bye tak
(after the show)
lucas:i have no idea you sing good
tak:thanxs
chirs:will tak and lucas be more than friends
both:HEY
chirs:and will everyone die on this show find out next time on total drama goth vs emo
chirs:frist bone go's toooo jakki andrea mallory
samantha samantha rollings sara ashley suna dustin rose lynn anacpriana sara kristing amy kenya the last one go's to blaze im sorry chelsea
chelsea:thats ok
tak:bye chelsea (and gives her a hug)
chelsea:bye tak
(after the show)
lucas:i have no idea you sing good
tak:thanxs
chirs:will tak and lucas be more than friends
both:HEY
chirs:and will everyone die on this show find out next time on total drama goth vs emo
The End
I loved Total Drama Island when it first came on "Cartoon Network", I loved how everyone had a unique personality, how Chris was cruel to the campers, and I thought the show had good character and relationship development.
But then, Total Drama Action premered, and I was not that Impressed. Any character development that had occured, was erased from the show all together, The contestants became annoying as hell(especially Geoff and Trent), And all the good couples were destroyed(but I don't like the GwenXTrent couple at all). The Geoff and Bridget couple was just awful, she needs to ditch him and go with DJ, and I thought that "Teletoon" and "Fresh Tv" had decided to get rid of any words like crap and screwed so there wouldn't be so many edits.
I wont even mention the abomonation that is Total Drama World Tour. They shouldn't sing at all. But I will say one thing about the two new contestants, they were created to annoy the hell out of everyone.
But then, Total Drama Action premered, and I was not that Impressed. Any character development that had occured, was erased from the show all together, The contestants became annoying as hell(especially Geoff and Trent), And all the good couples were destroyed(but I don't like the GwenXTrent couple at all). The Geoff and Bridget couple was just awful, she needs to ditch him and go with DJ, and I thought that "Teletoon" and "Fresh Tv" had decided to get rid of any words like crap and screwed so there wouldn't be so many edits.
I wont even mention the abomonation that is Total Drama World Tour. They shouldn't sing at all. But I will say one thing about the two new contestants, they were created to annoy the hell out of everyone.