TDAS

So, here's a story about Duncan in Juvy. It's going to be in first person. (Duncan's point of view). Enjoy.
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It was raining and cold when the cops took me away. Shoving me up against the hood of a car and hand cuffing my wrists. "Get in there, punk!" Brian, my parole officer, exclaimed at me as he threw me into the back of the car. I tried to have a conversation with him, but I could only hear him muffle and scoff under his breath. The only thing I heard him say was "Shut up, Duncan. I'm not in the mood,". This was when he was yelling...

So, I decided to write a story about Svetlana. She's the only girl personality and one day I asked myself "What would happen if Svetlana was alone?". Well? What would happen if Svetlana was alone?
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Prologue
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Mike and his personalities were climbing up Mal's tower. Higher and higher they got. Just then, Manitoba stopped. Svetlana looked back at him. "Vhat's vrong, Mani? Ve're about to beat Mal!" she squealed.

"I know, but...." he stopped.

"But vhat?" Svetlana asked.

"I have a feeling this is the last time we'll ever see each other,"...