Ok please, please don't judge me to harsh on this. I was up till 3 am writing this and then my little brother deleted it all, and I am in troubles for screaming at him, so this was better until I had to re-write it. And don't bother reading this if bad spelling and punctuation bothers, you because I am not going to check this over and over again, just to get it right. I did that once and it got deleted, so oh well. This is my first fan fic so i hope you like it
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It was almost mid-night and Aiva was ready for a night at home with a good book, when her phone rang. She flipped it open with out looking to see who it was. "Hello?" she answered. "Hi. It's Tony's dad. I am in town and I was wondering if you would meet me outside Tony's apartment in an hour," he said. Ziva agreed to meet him, only out of curiosity, not because she wanted to see Tony outside of work. Or at lest that's what she told herself. When she got in the elevator, there was another young woman there that looked about 29 or 30. They both rode the elevator all the way to the top and back down. The girl introduced herself as Elizabeth, but people called her Lizzy. when the elevator got to Tony's floor, Lizzy had said she was new to the city and Ziva offered to show her around, then they exchanged numbers. The elevator stopped and they both got off and went there seperate ways. Ziva went to Tony's door and the girl turned the corner looking for an apartment.
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When Tony answered the door, Ziva felt kinda awkward and said his dad said to meet him there. Tony said that his dad was not in town and that it was probably a trick. He invited her in and they were on the couch drinking and watching a old movie, when Ziva fell asleep and about an hour later there came a knock at the door. Ziva was still asleep. Tony went to the door and there in the doorway was a young woman aboout the age of 29 or 30. She asked if he was Anthony DiNozzo. He said yes, and she asked if she could come in.
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disclamer: i dont own ncis, tiva i only wish i did
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It was almost mid-night and Aiva was ready for a night at home with a good book, when her phone rang. She flipped it open with out looking to see who it was. "Hello?" she answered. "Hi. It's Tony's dad. I am in town and I was wondering if you would meet me outside Tony's apartment in an hour," he said. Ziva agreed to meet him, only out of curiosity, not because she wanted to see Tony outside of work. Or at lest that's what she told herself. When she got in the elevator, there was another young woman there that looked about 29 or 30. They both rode the elevator all the way to the top and back down. The girl introduced herself as Elizabeth, but people called her Lizzy. when the elevator got to Tony's floor, Lizzy had said she was new to the city and Ziva offered to show her around, then they exchanged numbers. The elevator stopped and they both got off and went there seperate ways. Ziva went to Tony's door and the girl turned the corner looking for an apartment.
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When Tony answered the door, Ziva felt kinda awkward and said his dad said to meet him there. Tony said that his dad was not in town and that it was probably a trick. He invited her in and they were on the couch drinking and watching a old movie, when Ziva fell asleep and about an hour later there came a knock at the door. Ziva was still asleep. Tony went to the door and there in the doorway was a young woman aboout the age of 29 or 30. She asked if he was Anthony DiNozzo. He said yes, and she asked if she could come in.
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disclamer: i dont own ncis, tiva i only wish i did
i need help cus i have writers block and i need help chapter 2 was complet crap so some one give me ideas
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oh and i want a vote do u think i should delet the the intier 2 chapter or try to just write an fix it hope that i can fix it to your liking pleas coment and tell me how to make it beter
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oh and i want a vote do u think i should delet the the intier 2 chapter or try to just write an fix it hope that i can fix it to your liking pleas coment and tell me how to make it beter
