The Heroes of Olympus Betrayed ... :O

Seaweed_Brain12 posted on Feb 06, 2012 at 01:28PM
Hey Guys....
Posting yet again another fanfic

After the war with Gaea, Percy was expecting some peace and quiet for once but what he doesn`t know is that another war is starting to stir up.
Few weeks later, his parents where attacked by a monster; they were sleeping on their own pool of blood.
Distraught, Percy didn`t speak to anyone during the past days.
One friday night during Capture the Flag, His friends betray him by trying to kill him because he is the son of a traitor;later He learned the truth about how they felt toward him.
He runs away and swears never to trust anyone ever again. The fates took pity on him by offering him immortality then later trains himself for 50,000 years before the next great war.



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Hey Guys....
Posting yet again another fanfic

After the war with Gaea, Percy was expecting some peac
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over a year ago rock4ever said…
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are you a fan of me, that might be the problem.
over a year ago rock4ever said…
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wow, NEW PAGE......... AGAIN!!!!
over a year ago rock4ever said…
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and i think i got the 100th reply, yay!
over a year ago rock4ever said…
hmmm
are you still here?
over a year ago Vulcanus said…
ya
i am a fan of u
over a year ago rock4ever said…
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yeah, i think your a fan of me.
over a year ago rock4ever said…
laugh
ha ha ha!
over a year ago rock4ever said…
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be right back!
over a year ago Vulcanus said…
when making a forum there is a thing that says Topic Title: is that what appears every time a new page is made?
over a year ago rock4ever said…
hmmm
wait.......
over a year ago rock4ever said…
hmmm
i dont know what your asking.
over a year ago rock4ever said…
hmmm
do you want to make a forum? yes or no.
over a year ago Vulcanus said…
ok look at the top of the page...Seaweed_Brain12 posted on Feb 06, 2012 at 01:28PM
Hey Guys....
Posting yet again another fanfic

and so on....it appears every time a new page is made.....is that what Topic Title: is when creating a forum?
over a year ago rock4ever said…
hmmm
yes or no
over a year ago rock4ever said…
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oh, that part.
over a year ago rock4ever said…
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no the topic title is the name.
over a year ago Vulcanus said…
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ya is the the Topic Title:? im new at fanpop
over a year ago Vulcanus said…
then how do u do that thing?
over a year ago rock4ever said…
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if you want to make a forum just go to the link at the top that says "Forum" and then click on "Add forum topic" sorry but i have to go, bye!
over a year ago rock4ever said…
illl send you a message!
over a year ago Vulcanus said…
ok bye
over a year ago rock4ever said…
bye!
over a year ago rock4ever said…
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wait!!!! im free at 11:00! if you are free then we can talk at 11:00!
over a year ago Vulcanus said…
ok so how do i do the thing i was talking about?
over a year ago Vulcanus said…
ok i gtg...good bye
over a year ago percabeth-bcz7 said…
Quick question: why are you guys having a conversation on the forum????

Anyways this is really good please post soon!! :)

Ooooooo new page ;)
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over a year ago rock4ever said…
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because we were on at the same time, and i got the 100 comment! (^-^)
over a year ago kjmjack87 said…
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post soon please :D
over a year ago percabeth143 said…
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AMAZING!!!! Go Hestia <3 POSTT!!!
over a year ago rock4ever said…
please post! its at an intresting part!
over a year ago Seaweed_Brain12 said…
Percy POV

I concentrated on myself until I started to evaporate (a trick I learned from my Dad) and focused myself to cling to the air and let it lead me where ever it goes. I concentrated again and let my body condense until it was whole again, I looked toward my surroundings and saw a sign:VANCOUVER, CANADA 500 KM AHEAD, I`ve been in the air this long? I thought, It doesn`t matter. I balled my fists,deep hatred, anger, sorrow and the desire for revenge towards the Gods;mostly the campers at Camp Half-blood is now overwhelming me like some kind of disease, it felt good. I remember the times we laughed, had fun and battled together but all of it was just a big pathetic joke. Both my mortal parents and godly father; now gone and left me here abandoned in this cold, heartless world. "I WILL GET MY REVENGE" I said angrily, my head steaming
"AND IF I DO, I`LL. KILL. EVERY. ONE. OF. THEM." I snarled against my teeth. Don`t trust anybody... it will only lead you to misfortune, I thought.
Suddenly a monster attacked from nowhere; a Hyperborean giants surrounding me with there cold breaths. 'Piece of cake' I thought
They tried to freeze me with there breaths but luckily avoided it by slashing their ankles. They groaned in pain. One almost got me but I cut its throat out; blood splattered and it dropped dead.
After 30 minutes or so, I was standing in the middle of a field with Hyperboreans lying dead on the ground; I was drenched in blood.
"Well done Perseus." said a voice, I turned around and found the fates; 20 meters away from me. I glared viciously
"Don`t worry dear." she said sweetly "We know what the Gods have done to you; you were framed and its punishment led to the death of your parents and betrayal of your friends."
I stayed silent
"We have taken pity on you, for this we give you a gift."
"WHY WOULD I NEED YOUR PITY?" I spat
"Because you are all alone; betrayed, forgotten.You have saved Olympus two times already and this is how they treat you afterwards? Oh come now, You want revenge remember..." she said patiently.
"We offer you immortality yet again; for you to get revenge and your reward for saving the world again.You will have unlimited power you could ever imagine.Do you accept?" they said altogether
wow, there offer was so tempting but my desire for revenge was so strong
"I accept but you must swear on the Styx that you would not turn your back against me." I said conditionally. They smiled
"No hero or God has ever made a swear on an oath but fine we accept your condition." they said "We swear."
Afterwards I felt invulnerable, strong, powerful. I had a golden glow around my body.
"Strange..." one of them said "Usually in the process of immortality it is usually painful but you have not at uttered anything at all, how interesting."
I nodded
"Remember Percy, you are not a God but an immortal yet a powerful one; powers that could match a titan`s after years of training."
she continued "Train Perseus, train and grow wiser. Travel to Alaska: "The land beyond the Gods" for you to start your training. You are not a God so its effects wont work on you" and they disappeared out off sight.
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over a year ago percabeth-bcz7 said…
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That was REALLY good! Please post soon! I love this story! :) <3
over a year ago rock4ever said…
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OOOOOOOOOOO!!! not a god......... NO ONE EVER DID THAT!!! WHAT A SURPRISE!!!!! POST AGAIN PLEASE!!!!
over a year ago rock4ever said…
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oh, and just to tell you, im your #1 fan!
over a year ago Lt_Pupster said…
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I jus read this and the story is pretty good the writing is not that bad but the story is really good.
over a year ago kjmjack87 said…
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good chappie post soon
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
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good loved it post soon
over a year ago percyroxz said…
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post soon love ur story
over a year ago Vulcanus said…
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AWESOME CHAPTER.....post soon....and rock4ever im the 1# fan here!!!!!
over a year ago kjmjack87 said…
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nuh uh i am his #1 fan
over a year ago Seaweed_Brain12 said…
How do you make your words BOLD and ITALIC ?
over a year ago Seaweed_Brain12 said…
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SUPER KYNA!!!! GO!!!!
*Im speaking to a friend .... :>
over a year ago rock4ever said…
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ok, heres how you do that, and no, im the number 1 fan, because i said it first and its the truth. anyway the first step to bold is you do this [b] and then right the word, like this [b]bold. then right after the word you do this [\b] but only it cant be \ it has to be /. so then just do this [b]bold[\b] and there you go, thats how you do bold! samething for italic but instead of a b its an i, like this [i]italic[\i] so then you get [i]italic[\i]! oh, and i know you didnt ask this question but the same thing for underlineing, just do a u instead of a b or a i, like this [u]underline[\u] so then you'll get [u]underline[\u].
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over a year ago rock4ever said…
underline
over a year ago rock4ever said…
bold
over a year ago rock4ever said…
italic
over a year ago rock4ever said…
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and there you go!
over a year ago rock4ever said…
oh, and POST SOON!!!
over a year ago Seaweed_Brain12 said…
THIS IS TOTALLY AWESOME!!
over a year ago Seaweed_Brain12 said…
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THANKS A LOT ROCK4EVER

YOU TOTALLY ROCK!!!!

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