The Kids Don’t Know
Chapter 11
Fight to the Finish
“The verdict is… Duncan is not their father, and Trent earns the custody of the Gray’s.” The judge finished. “No!” Me and Dominic screamed. “Your Honor, I have proof that this was rigged!” I was ready to face the consequences. I pulled my phone out of my purse, and showed the judge the banking file picture and the test result. “Evelyn, where did you get these?” The judge asked. “Dominic and I…” I started. But I was interrupted by Chris McLean, my principle. “I gave them clearance!” I stood there shocked, same as Dominic. “It was unfair what I did. I helped Trent in conspiracy and being an idiot.” My mouth was wide open, but it broke into a smile. “Alright,” The judge began, “The Gray family stays as is.” Yes! I ran up and hugged my dad. “Dad, we did it!” I said. “Yeah we did!” Mom yelled. “Court dismissed.”
Trent was arrested. We were a family. Courtney is yelling at Dad. Good times. Anyway, we were having a celebration party. “Duncan! Dude long time no see!” Mr. Geoff said. I was smiling, very happy. “Ok, Donnie. Ready to ruin the happy moment?” He nodded. It was time to get some answers. “Attention, family, friends, and Courtney!” Everyone but Courtney laughed at that. “We have a question for all of you, and we want the answer.” I looked at everyone’s happy faces, and I felt guilty. “Did Bridgette make cake?” I asked. Then she walked up with a HUGE cake. It said, “Congrats Donnie and Elle” Dominic frowned while I laughed. It was pretty much the best. Party. Ever.
“We still need answers, Ell.” Dominic said. “Well… Mr. McLean is obviously connected with Mom and Dad. So we check his office.” Dominic rolled his eyes and said, “Um, Ell? Are you suggesting we BREAK IN?”
“That’s correct!”
“That’s stupid.”
“It could work.”
“Riiight”
“I’m serious!”
Sometimes it’s hard being Duncan’s kid. I am so stubborn! “Ok fine! We’ll break in!” Yes! I always get my way! “Ok. Then let’s enjoy the party.”
At exactly midnight, we were at the front of the school. “Time for some answers, Dominic.” I said to my brother. “Fight to the finish, right sis?” He asked. “That’s correct. Again.” I like sarcasm! Anyway, the school doors are never locked, so we just walked right in. “This is weird, McLean is in his office.” I looked towards the office and my eyes bugged out of my head. “Elle, Dominic, come here.” I heard someone say from inside the office. That voice didn’t sound like McLean. We walked in and saw a very large, scary black man with a hatchet and an apron. I looked at Dominic wide eyed, and he sort of shrank back. “Maybe this will clear your gosh darn minds!” He threw us a magazine. A jumbo size magazine. We ran out of there and back home.
“Ready?” I asked. Dominic nodded. The magazine was an old one called “Starlet Stalker”. I flipped the first page. Ads. The second page. Ads. The third page… had a huge photo of the cast of “Total Drama Island”. “Is that Courtney?” Dominic suddenly asked. “What? Oh, I see. Oh my God! Courtney was on Total Drama! That must be the ‘secret’.” I said. I looked over a bit, and in the back row was… Duncan. “Dad is on the show too!” I whisper-yelled. After looking it over, we saw Mr. Harold, LeShawna, Ms. Bridgette, Mom, Mr. Geoff, Sierra and Cody, Izzy, (E-scope’s mom) Owen, (E-scope’s dad), and… Chris McLean, the host. “I have a headache!” I yelled.
Two days past, and it was back-to-school time. “Bye, Court! Bye Dad!” I yelled as I ran to the bus stop. “Hey, Elle! What did you do over the weekend? Rob a bank with your delinquent dad?” I was so steamed, I was about to say something back, when Genn and LeShequa came up and said, “Shut your mouth Hanalei. Just because your parents are nasty and mean, doesn’t mean you have to be.” I smiled at my best friends, so glad that I have them.
After school I called Mom over to Dad’s house. It was time for the revelation. “Ok, mom and dad, Dominic and I know you were on Total Drama.” I said after 5 minutes of stalling. They both looked shocked but then dad said, “I knew they would figure it out.” But then I remembered something. “Hey dad? It says in this copy of ‘Starlet Stalker’ that you gave Mom a necklace with an alien on it. And she still has it…” I trailed off, knowing I had done the trick. “You still… but I thought… what does that mean?” Mom got that loving look in her eye, and said, “It means… what do you think, Juvie?” I looked at Dominic and we crossed our fingers. I turned around to see mom and dad mid-kiss.
Epilogue:
I am 15 now. Mom and Dad are now married, and I have a baby sister, Jay. Life is wonderful now.
Author’s note
That is the end. I hope you liked it. Please tell me what I need to change about my writing for future articles
Chapter 11
Fight to the Finish
“The verdict is… Duncan is not their father, and Trent earns the custody of the Gray’s.” The judge finished. “No!” Me and Dominic screamed. “Your Honor, I have proof that this was rigged!” I was ready to face the consequences. I pulled my phone out of my purse, and showed the judge the banking file picture and the test result. “Evelyn, where did you get these?” The judge asked. “Dominic and I…” I started. But I was interrupted by Chris McLean, my principle. “I gave them clearance!” I stood there shocked, same as Dominic. “It was unfair what I did. I helped Trent in conspiracy and being an idiot.” My mouth was wide open, but it broke into a smile. “Alright,” The judge began, “The Gray family stays as is.” Yes! I ran up and hugged my dad. “Dad, we did it!” I said. “Yeah we did!” Mom yelled. “Court dismissed.”
Trent was arrested. We were a family. Courtney is yelling at Dad. Good times. Anyway, we were having a celebration party. “Duncan! Dude long time no see!” Mr. Geoff said. I was smiling, very happy. “Ok, Donnie. Ready to ruin the happy moment?” He nodded. It was time to get some answers. “Attention, family, friends, and Courtney!” Everyone but Courtney laughed at that. “We have a question for all of you, and we want the answer.” I looked at everyone’s happy faces, and I felt guilty. “Did Bridgette make cake?” I asked. Then she walked up with a HUGE cake. It said, “Congrats Donnie and Elle” Dominic frowned while I laughed. It was pretty much the best. Party. Ever.
“We still need answers, Ell.” Dominic said. “Well… Mr. McLean is obviously connected with Mom and Dad. So we check his office.” Dominic rolled his eyes and said, “Um, Ell? Are you suggesting we BREAK IN?”
“That’s correct!”
“That’s stupid.”
“It could work.”
“Riiight”
“I’m serious!”
Sometimes it’s hard being Duncan’s kid. I am so stubborn! “Ok fine! We’ll break in!” Yes! I always get my way! “Ok. Then let’s enjoy the party.”
At exactly midnight, we were at the front of the school. “Time for some answers, Dominic.” I said to my brother. “Fight to the finish, right sis?” He asked. “That’s correct. Again.” I like sarcasm! Anyway, the school doors are never locked, so we just walked right in. “This is weird, McLean is in his office.” I looked towards the office and my eyes bugged out of my head. “Elle, Dominic, come here.” I heard someone say from inside the office. That voice didn’t sound like McLean. We walked in and saw a very large, scary black man with a hatchet and an apron. I looked at Dominic wide eyed, and he sort of shrank back. “Maybe this will clear your gosh darn minds!” He threw us a magazine. A jumbo size magazine. We ran out of there and back home.
“Ready?” I asked. Dominic nodded. The magazine was an old one called “Starlet Stalker”. I flipped the first page. Ads. The second page. Ads. The third page… had a huge photo of the cast of “Total Drama Island”. “Is that Courtney?” Dominic suddenly asked. “What? Oh, I see. Oh my God! Courtney was on Total Drama! That must be the ‘secret’.” I said. I looked over a bit, and in the back row was… Duncan. “Dad is on the show too!” I whisper-yelled. After looking it over, we saw Mr. Harold, LeShawna, Ms. Bridgette, Mom, Mr. Geoff, Sierra and Cody, Izzy, (E-scope’s mom) Owen, (E-scope’s dad), and… Chris McLean, the host. “I have a headache!” I yelled.
Two days past, and it was back-to-school time. “Bye, Court! Bye Dad!” I yelled as I ran to the bus stop. “Hey, Elle! What did you do over the weekend? Rob a bank with your delinquent dad?” I was so steamed, I was about to say something back, when Genn and LeShequa came up and said, “Shut your mouth Hanalei. Just because your parents are nasty and mean, doesn’t mean you have to be.” I smiled at my best friends, so glad that I have them.
After school I called Mom over to Dad’s house. It was time for the revelation. “Ok, mom and dad, Dominic and I know you were on Total Drama.” I said after 5 minutes of stalling. They both looked shocked but then dad said, “I knew they would figure it out.” But then I remembered something. “Hey dad? It says in this copy of ‘Starlet Stalker’ that you gave Mom a necklace with an alien on it. And she still has it…” I trailed off, knowing I had done the trick. “You still… but I thought… what does that mean?” Mom got that loving look in her eye, and said, “It means… what do you think, Juvie?” I looked at Dominic and we crossed our fingers. I turned around to see mom and dad mid-kiss.
Epilogue:
I am 15 now. Mom and Dad are now married, and I have a baby sister, Jay. Life is wonderful now.
Author’s note
That is the end. I hope you liked it. Please tell me what I need to change about my writing for future articles
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