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For Vader fans: The Personal Transmissions of Lieutenant Aria Brisard

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Sappp said:
The story is kind of interesting and it is fairly well written but there are two mayor flaws why I stopped reading after just a little while:

- Vader is OOC.
- Aria is a Mary Sue.

Those are two things in a fic I find very hard to tolerate.
But keep on writing this story and try to make the characters a bit more real and three-dimensional. I wish you good luck with writing!
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