Hope you all like, this is the basic plot summery, give me your opinion in comments and any critics, feel welcome to do your thing. This is pretty sketchy, so not big on the overall. It may not make sense to you peoples... But as said, I'm only putting this up to sort out my thoughts. :D SPOILER WARNING!
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Six stones, six diamonds, and six temple-shrines dating back to Ancient Egyptian times.
Ningizzida, Rath, Vren, Ra, Amun (daughter, not fox) Thoth, some old friends and some new, finally come together with their old rivals, the American Marines.
Possible betrayal later on?
Philosopher's Stone~ Box-like, Firestone (Benben) sits on top, diamond inside to 'cleanse' it.
Six Temple-shrines~ Place the cleanesed diamonds, cleansed by Firestone and Philospher's Stone.
The Philospher's stone, The Seeing Stone of Delphi, The Killing Stone of the Maya. Stonehenge, The Twin Tablets, The Basin of Rameses II.
A MORTAL BATTLE,
BETWEN FATHER AND SON,
ONE FIGHTS FOR ALL,
AND THE OTHER FOR ONE.
Deadlines to be beaten, arivial of Jupiter's 'Dark Sun' draws near.
Dark Sun~ The sun's polor opposite. Like Ying and Yang. Invisible energy, covered usually by Jupiter's rotation.
Tartarus~ 'The charging of the Firestone', the peice atop the Capstone on the Great Pyramid at Giza.
Firestone~ Used to cleanse the diamonds.
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Thoth~ Son of Ningizzida and Rath, youngest. Gifted in literature and language.
Ra~ Ningizzida and Rath's oldest son, light powers?
Rewards for each placement of stone before deadlines. Failure to meet the deadlines: Dark Sun arrives, consumes the planet.
REWARDS: Knowledge, heat, sight, life, death, power.
Character possibilitys-
Regulars: Ningizzida, Rath, Vren, Zoe, (AS UNNAMED)- National soldiers- Australian, Irish, Arab, Israli, Canadian.
Newbies: American soldiers, some Chinese workforce (friends/colleges of Canadian?). Alby- Zoes' friend, mathmatical genius. TWINS- (name unknown, call-sign possibility of twin-like names eg. Tweedledee and Tweedledum) Smartest mathmatical uncomputerised force in the world. Think as one brain? Finish each other's scentences.
(soldiers named by call-sign ONLY)
Villains~ Skhell, (possible team-mate later on) Chinese, (Old) Europeans, Americans as of later (led by Skylark?).
CHARACTER DESIGN POSSIBILITYS-
Ningizzida: Same as, possible furry muzzle as he gets older?
Rath: Add, change, alter features. Look like less a recolor.
Vren: Same as, more mature, little older.
Zoe: Same as, 11 (year past Tartarus) oracle of siwa, gifted in language. Strong for age, can fight prefers not too. Sees Ningizzida as a father? Possible adoptee.
Australian: Dark green, dark orange striped. Quills similar to Sonic, alter slightly.
Irish: Black, white tipped. Blue eyes?
Arab: Red/orange. Black tipped/streaked. Somewhat chubby.
Israli: Tall, lean, sniper? Black and green 'camo' design fur.
Canadian: White and blue. Older, gifted in ancient studies.
Skylark: Same as.
Chinese Leader: ?
Chinese: (Hero) ?
Alby: ?
Twins: Identical. Other else?
STONEHENGE- Possible location of first deadline and 'map' of the world light (blue). Tells of deadlines.
'Titanic rising' and 'Titanic sinking'?
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Six stones, six diamonds, and six temple-shrines dating back to Ancient Egyptian times.
Ningizzida, Rath, Vren, Ra, Amun (daughter, not fox) Thoth, some old friends and some new, finally come together with their old rivals, the American Marines.
Possible betrayal later on?
Philosopher's Stone~ Box-like, Firestone (Benben) sits on top, diamond inside to 'cleanse' it.
Six Temple-shrines~ Place the cleanesed diamonds, cleansed by Firestone and Philospher's Stone.
The Philospher's stone, The Seeing Stone of Delphi, The Killing Stone of the Maya. Stonehenge, The Twin Tablets, The Basin of Rameses II.
A MORTAL BATTLE,
BETWEN FATHER AND SON,
ONE FIGHTS FOR ALL,
AND THE OTHER FOR ONE.
Deadlines to be beaten, arivial of Jupiter's 'Dark Sun' draws near.
Dark Sun~ The sun's polor opposite. Like Ying and Yang. Invisible energy, covered usually by Jupiter's rotation.
Tartarus~ 'The charging of the Firestone', the peice atop the Capstone on the Great Pyramid at Giza.
Firestone~ Used to cleanse the diamonds.
--
Thoth~ Son of Ningizzida and Rath, youngest. Gifted in literature and language.
Ra~ Ningizzida and Rath's oldest son, light powers?
Rewards for each placement of stone before deadlines. Failure to meet the deadlines: Dark Sun arrives, consumes the planet.
REWARDS: Knowledge, heat, sight, life, death, power.
Character possibilitys-
Regulars: Ningizzida, Rath, Vren, Zoe, (AS UNNAMED)- National soldiers- Australian, Irish, Arab, Israli, Canadian.
Newbies: American soldiers, some Chinese workforce (friends/colleges of Canadian?). Alby- Zoes' friend, mathmatical genius. TWINS- (name unknown, call-sign possibility of twin-like names eg. Tweedledee and Tweedledum) Smartest mathmatical uncomputerised force in the world. Think as one brain? Finish each other's scentences.
(soldiers named by call-sign ONLY)
Villains~ Skhell, (possible team-mate later on) Chinese, (Old) Europeans, Americans as of later (led by Skylark?).
CHARACTER DESIGN POSSIBILITYS-
Ningizzida: Same as, possible furry muzzle as he gets older?
Rath: Add, change, alter features. Look like less a recolor.
Vren: Same as, more mature, little older.
Zoe: Same as, 11 (year past Tartarus) oracle of siwa, gifted in language. Strong for age, can fight prefers not too. Sees Ningizzida as a father? Possible adoptee.
Australian: Dark green, dark orange striped. Quills similar to Sonic, alter slightly.
Irish: Black, white tipped. Blue eyes?
Arab: Red/orange. Black tipped/streaked. Somewhat chubby.
Israli: Tall, lean, sniper? Black and green 'camo' design fur.
Canadian: White and blue. Older, gifted in ancient studies.
Skylark: Same as.
Chinese Leader: ?
Chinese: (Hero) ?
Alby: ?
Twins: Identical. Other else?
STONEHENGE- Possible location of first deadline and 'map' of the world light (blue). Tells of deadlines.
'Titanic rising' and 'Titanic sinking'?
Reasons for Both:
1) All the drama in this club drives us nuts.
2) We have a lot of schoolwork and YouTube stuff we do.
3) We have various extra activities we also participate in that take up our time.
4) Various internet problems.
Cyber:
1) Too busy playing Xbox.
2) Too busy playing games on his computer.
3) Too busy making YouTube videos.
Me:
1) I hang out with friends a lot, so I don't usually be rude and use their computers.
2) When I'm not at a friend's house, I'm caught up in playing Pokemon Black 2...
3) I'm a teenage girl, what more could you want to know? XD
1) All the drama in this club drives us nuts.
2) We have a lot of schoolwork and YouTube stuff we do.
3) We have various extra activities we also participate in that take up our time.
4) Various internet problems.
Cyber:
1) Too busy playing Xbox.
2) Too busy playing games on his computer.
3) Too busy making YouTube videos.
Me:
1) I hang out with friends a lot, so I don't usually be rude and use their computers.
2) When I'm not at a friend's house, I'm caught up in playing Pokemon Black 2...
3) I'm a teenage girl, what more could you want to know? XD
i made blood a little weaker by removing some of his powers
the powers i left:
1.) Electricity
2.)Telekinisis
3.)mind control
4.) Berzerk form
Blood will remain a vampire that can be in the sunlight. and no he doesn't sparkle he just can't use his "vampire skills" in sunlight.
but i added more weaknesses to Blood.
1.) Blood has a weakspot in his chest which a well placed strike can smash his ribs
2.) since Blood is a Vampire, if his jaw is broken he can't feed and he will die
3.)when Blood uses Mind control he is left vulnerable.
4.)all though Blood can use electricity Blood is weak to electric attacks against him.
5.)When Blood's Berzerk form wears off he can't use ANY powers for a while so he is left open to any attack.
the powers i left:
1.) Electricity
2.)Telekinisis
3.)mind control
4.) Berzerk form
Blood will remain a vampire that can be in the sunlight. and no he doesn't sparkle he just can't use his "vampire skills" in sunlight.
but i added more weaknesses to Blood.
1.) Blood has a weakspot in his chest which a well placed strike can smash his ribs
2.) since Blood is a Vampire, if his jaw is broken he can't feed and he will die
3.)when Blood uses Mind control he is left vulnerable.
4.)all though Blood can use electricity Blood is weak to electric attacks against him.
5.)When Blood's Berzerk form wears off he can't use ANY powers for a while so he is left open to any attack.
Ice heard so many stuff about what's going on in someone elses life blah blah blah(I was one of those awhile ago).Now I'm deciding that leave any personal things to putting on the best oc you can to make it like yourself.Problems with putting in your life,a pervert might think you'd give him more information and no one needs that.Also we have other stuff to do so if you spam us with"I walked my doggy dog out la de dag!~<3"we will only get annoyed with you.Last we don't like to scroll down according to statics so why would we want to scroll through crap.The only reason Im ok with it is if your explaining a absence .So in all we are NOT TWITTER,we aren't even FITTER,so stop treating this club like one.
Srry it's short hope you like it
Srry it's short hope you like it