Look, alright? I have NO idea why I'm admitting this, but the end of the world begins with me, practicing to use the different Color Powers.
I let the little, purplish... thingies... phase through my shirt and into my body. "OK, that just made me nauseous. Nobody mention food, I will puke," I announce.
"Hey, Wyldfyre," my older sister, Dakota, says while holding up a can of Dr. Pepper, "you thirsty?"
Now I'm stuck in the toilet. For about twenty minutes.
As I exit the bathroom, I see Darkfyre, a pair of white hedgehogs, and Tytanium in a large drill vehicle, Rhiannon and Tails tied to the machine.
Darkfyre looks at me. "Surprise."
"Nobody messes with my friends!" I say, running towards the vehicle.
Suddenly, they're... gone.
"Oh, fan-f**king-tastic. We lost a strategist AND a mechanic," Radioactive says.
"Now what?" I ask.
"We go find a couple people for team members."
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We walk for miles and miles. My feet are getting more sore with every step. "Where are we going?" I complain.
"We're going to need a couple... temporary team members. First, we're going to stop by Princess Aimina's castle," Radioactive says.
"Hey, Radio, here's a news flash: princesses are liabilities."
"Really. Give me one example."
"They expect you to fight their battles."
"Not Aimina, you should see how deadly she is with a gun and a sword."
"I'm gonna bet a hundred golden rings I'm better at sword/gun combat than her."
"If you tell her that, she'll literally separate your soul from your body."
"Oh, come on, that's scientifically impossible!"
"Not for people like her."
We arrive at a massive and impressive blue castle, with golden lining wherever there's a corner or an edge.
Radioactive stays in front of me, Sonic, and Dakota and speaks to the guard through the gate. "Hey, John."
"Hey."
"Can we enter? We need to speak with Princess Aimina."
John the Guard-hog opens the gate.
"Thank you."
"Whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa. What makes you think I'm just gonna letcha waltz on in here to see her?" I just noticed his Russian accent.
"We need her to be on our team, temporarily, at least."
"You want her to be on your team, ya gotta fight 'er.
"So, who's it gonna be that fights her?"
I step in front of Radioactive, holding Flamecaller by its hilt and squeezing the trigger of my handgun. "Bring it."
End of chapter 1
I let the little, purplish... thingies... phase through my shirt and into my body. "OK, that just made me nauseous. Nobody mention food, I will puke," I announce.
"Hey, Wyldfyre," my older sister, Dakota, says while holding up a can of Dr. Pepper, "you thirsty?"
Now I'm stuck in the toilet. For about twenty minutes.
As I exit the bathroom, I see Darkfyre, a pair of white hedgehogs, and Tytanium in a large drill vehicle, Rhiannon and Tails tied to the machine.
Darkfyre looks at me. "Surprise."
"Nobody messes with my friends!" I say, running towards the vehicle.
Suddenly, they're... gone.
"Oh, fan-f**king-tastic. We lost a strategist AND a mechanic," Radioactive says.
"Now what?" I ask.
"We go find a couple people for team members."
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We walk for miles and miles. My feet are getting more sore with every step. "Where are we going?" I complain.
"We're going to need a couple... temporary team members. First, we're going to stop by Princess Aimina's castle," Radioactive says.
"Hey, Radio, here's a news flash: princesses are liabilities."
"Really. Give me one example."
"They expect you to fight their battles."
"Not Aimina, you should see how deadly she is with a gun and a sword."
"I'm gonna bet a hundred golden rings I'm better at sword/gun combat than her."
"If you tell her that, she'll literally separate your soul from your body."
"Oh, come on, that's scientifically impossible!"
"Not for people like her."
We arrive at a massive and impressive blue castle, with golden lining wherever there's a corner or an edge.
Radioactive stays in front of me, Sonic, and Dakota and speaks to the guard through the gate. "Hey, John."
"Hey."
"Can we enter? We need to speak with Princess Aimina."
John the Guard-hog opens the gate.
"Thank you."
"Whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa. What makes you think I'm just gonna letcha waltz on in here to see her?" I just noticed his Russian accent.
"We need her to be on our team, temporarily, at least."
"You want her to be on your team, ya gotta fight 'er.
"So, who's it gonna be that fights her?"
I step in front of Radioactive, holding Flamecaller by its hilt and squeezing the trigger of my handgun. "Bring it."
End of chapter 1
I had seen so many sites, about:
Bad Sonic Fan Characters
And there is so many critiques about EVERYTHING and EVERYONE designs of them.
So, I had come to this point of having 'good character'
No character isnt perfect.
If the owner loves it, that's all the matters.
You can have a detailed character, if you want so.
You can have simply character, if YOU want so.
There is only one think you must remember:
Make the character's design fitting in her/him personality and his/her story.
Thank you.
Have a good night, I'm off to sleep now. >8'I
Bad Sonic Fan Characters
And there is so many critiques about EVERYTHING and EVERYONE designs of them.
So, I had come to this point of having 'good character'
No character isnt perfect.
If the owner loves it, that's all the matters.
You can have a detailed character, if you want so.
You can have simply character, if YOU want so.
There is only one think you must remember:
Make the character's design fitting in her/him personality and his/her story.
Thank you.
Have a good night, I'm off to sleep now. >8'I
Ok, so I know a hedgehog whose life is dark... simple this story is about that hedgehog and their long, lost, forgotten life. How the good times turn to simply bad times. And that I know their life. How do I know this? I'm not a stalker nor a watch of life. This hedgehog is me... Shadey Grey the last dark user... the last hope of the planet Dark/Light. First off, dark users are like chaos users, they use dark power or darkness control and so do chaos users... they use chaos control. I never cared for anyone... not even you. Only that I lost my family... my friends... everyone I knew and loved. And I seeked revenge for them... only to find new friends. Friends that could handle my anger... I become calm for some time. Yet, I still kill people for my family and friends...for anything I can remember.
-Shadey Grey, writer.
(Thank-you for reading this intro, tell me if I should write this or not. I start next week. 1/12/12)
-Shadey Grey, writer.
(Thank-you for reading this intro, tell me if I should write this or not. I start next week. 1/12/12)
Name: Natsumi
Age: 16 1/2
Gender: female
Family: Mom, Dad, younger brother
Powers: none
Backstory: Natsumi lives a normal life. Her mom is an actress, and her dad works at a hospital. Her parents aren't home often. So she usually has to take care of her little bro.
They tend to argue alot....but that's what siblings do, right? She lives in a rural area, and her house is pretty big. In order to protect her brother, she's been specially trained in karate and Kung-Fu. But it's only used in emergencies. she's really shy, except around close friends. And isn't afraid to be aggressive.
Interesting information: she originally was made a "Regular Show" fan chara. And she still is. But she is also a fan chara in the Sonic world too. (but in regular show, she's 23) She was also named after a character in the
manga/anime series "Sgt. Frog"
Well, hope ya liked the article! ^^
Age: 16 1/2
Gender: female
Family: Mom, Dad, younger brother
Powers: none
Backstory: Natsumi lives a normal life. Her mom is an actress, and her dad works at a hospital. Her parents aren't home often. So she usually has to take care of her little bro.
They tend to argue alot....but that's what siblings do, right? She lives in a rural area, and her house is pretty big. In order to protect her brother, she's been specially trained in karate and Kung-Fu. But it's only used in emergencies. she's really shy, except around close friends. And isn't afraid to be aggressive.
Interesting information: she originally was made a "Regular Show" fan chara. And she still is. But she is also a fan chara in the Sonic world too. (but in regular show, she's 23) She was also named after a character in the
manga/anime series "Sgt. Frog"
Well, hope ya liked the article! ^^
Midnight:I cant believe we did this!
Platinum:Im just glad we get to do this together!
(5 hours later)
Platinum:Im really tired.
Midnight:Me too,lets go to sleep.
(They wake up)
Platinum:Midnight,do you see that thing over there
Midnight:Yeah I do,lets see what it is.
Platinum:Hi!Im Platinum And this is Midnight
Midnight:Uhhhhh...H-hi
Silver:Im Silver.Nice to meet you ladies.
Midnight:Platinum come with me.NOW!
Platinum:Okay?
(Midnight whispers she likes Silver)
Platinum:OMG!
Midnight:Dont tell anyone!
Platinum:I promise.
Silver:Is something wrong?
Platinum:No!We were just talking about our quest to find the chaos emerald on Chaos Mountain.
Silver:Oh.I see.I have to go,I'll see you again.Goodbye Platinum and Midnight
Platinum:Bye!
Midnight:Ummmm...Bye Silver.
THE END!I HOPED YOU LIKED IT!
PLEASE READ PART 3 THE FINALE!
Vince soon was at G.U.N.Two men where guarding the entrance."You may not pass!"One exclaimed.Vince soon knocked them out with a few swings from his guitar.He quietly went into the HQ.He sneaked around trying to find Ash."Dammit,where is she?"He whispered to himself.
Soon he found the room where they where about to experiment on Ash.Ash kept dodging the needle full of toxic.Vince knocked the scientist out be for he could inject the needle.He grabbed Ash carried her when the guards chased them trough.
Ash soon grew her bat wings and killed all the guards.Vince was startled.When they escaped he kept quiet.They ended up on top of a cliff.
Ash coulodnt take it any more.She kissed Vince as the moonlight shined on them.
The End ~AshxVince~
Soon he found the room where they where about to experiment on Ash.Ash kept dodging the needle full of toxic.Vince knocked the scientist out be for he could inject the needle.He grabbed Ash carried her when the guards chased them trough.
Ash soon grew her bat wings and killed all the guards.Vince was startled.When they escaped he kept quiet.They ended up on top of a cliff.
Ash coulodnt take it any more.She kissed Vince as the moonlight shined on them.
The End ~AshxVince~