*midnight and Gizbin is curled up in a ball underneath a tree*
Gizbin: .......
*the moon becomes visible from behind the clouds*
Gizbin: .....*twitches*....*turns completely black all over his body* ...... *eyes open all of a sudden, they are bright, blood red and hollow* *gets up and growls*
Jojo: *opens the front door* They've abandoned me! WHY?!
Gizbin: *teeth turn to fangs and claws grow long and sharp* grrrr...
Jojo: *walks outside the door* FATHER!!! HELLO?! MOM!!!
Gizbin: *ears twitches and moves back and fourth* *growls and faces where Mercury headed*
Jojo: *shuts door and runs out of village*
Mercury: *asleep on a mountain far away from both Gizbin and Jojo*
Gizbin: *licks teeth slowly* Food..*looks at the tallest mountain in a distance where Mercury is sleeping* Mmm..*on all four legs he heads towards the mountain*
*The moon turns a deep red*
Jojo: *stands still* They've left me...Forever....*sniff*....*tear runs down cheek*
Gizbin: *teleports and appears beside Mercury, snarls*
Mercury: *opens eyes* ....Gizbin....
Gizbin: *pounces*
Mercury: *screams at the top of her voice*
To be continued..
Gizbin: .......
*the moon becomes visible from behind the clouds*
Gizbin: .....*twitches*....*turns completely black all over his body* ...... *eyes open all of a sudden, they are bright, blood red and hollow* *gets up and growls*
Jojo: *opens the front door* They've abandoned me! WHY?!
Gizbin: *teeth turn to fangs and claws grow long and sharp* grrrr...
Jojo: *walks outside the door* FATHER!!! HELLO?! MOM!!!
Gizbin: *ears twitches and moves back and fourth* *growls and faces where Mercury headed*
Jojo: *shuts door and runs out of village*
Mercury: *asleep on a mountain far away from both Gizbin and Jojo*
Gizbin: *licks teeth slowly* Food..*looks at the tallest mountain in a distance where Mercury is sleeping* Mmm..*on all four legs he heads towards the mountain*
*The moon turns a deep red*
Jojo: *stands still* They've left me...Forever....*sniff*....*tear runs down cheek*
Gizbin: *teleports and appears beside Mercury, snarls*
Mercury: *opens eyes* ....Gizbin....
Gizbin: *pounces*
Mercury: *screams at the top of her voice*
To be continued..
I had seen so many sites, about:
Bad Sonic Fan Characters
And there is so many critiques about EVERYTHING and EVERYONE designs of them.
So, I had come to this point of having 'good character'
No character isnt perfect.
If the owner loves it, that's all the matters.
You can have a detailed character, if you want so.
You can have simply character, if YOU want so.
There is only one think you must remember:
Make the character's design fitting in her/him personality and his/her story.
Thank you.
Have a good night, I'm off to sleep now. >8'I
Bad Sonic Fan Characters
And there is so many critiques about EVERYTHING and EVERYONE designs of them.
So, I had come to this point of having 'good character'
No character isnt perfect.
If the owner loves it, that's all the matters.
You can have a detailed character, if you want so.
You can have simply character, if YOU want so.
There is only one think you must remember:
Make the character's design fitting in her/him personality and his/her story.
Thank you.
Have a good night, I'm off to sleep now. >8'I
Ok, so I know a hedgehog whose life is dark... simple this story is about that hedgehog and their long, lost, forgotten life. How the good times turn to simply bad times. And that I know their life. How do I know this? I'm not a stalker nor a watch of life. This hedgehog is me... Shadey Grey the last dark user... the last hope of the planet Dark/Light. First off, dark users are like chaos users, they use dark power or darkness control and so do chaos users... they use chaos control. I never cared for anyone... not even you. Only that I lost my family... my friends... everyone I knew and loved. And I seeked revenge for them... only to find new friends. Friends that could handle my anger... I become calm for some time. Yet, I still kill people for my family and friends...for anything I can remember.
-Shadey Grey, writer.
(Thank-you for reading this intro, tell me if I should write this or not. I start next week. 1/12/12)
-Shadey Grey, writer.
(Thank-you for reading this intro, tell me if I should write this or not. I start next week. 1/12/12)