Gizbin: *on his horse, riding through a forest nearby his castle*
Jojo: *walking along beside him and his horse*
Gizbin: Fury, stop here.
Fury(his horse): *stops*
Gizbin: There's the lake, son. Go and collect your new power.
Jojo: *walks up to a sparkling lake and kneels down beside it*
Fury: *Snuffles and shakes his main in the air*
Jojo: *dips his finger in the water slowly, the water feels Luke-warm, it has a comforting feeling*
*The lake shines in certain places all of a sudden and frost starts to freeze upwards Jojo's finger*
Jojo: !
Gizbin: *silence*
Jojo: *his body glows then fades*
Gizbin: There you have it, son. Your new power.
Jojo: What power is it though?
Gizbin: Wait and you will find out.
Fury: *back up a bit, tail sways side to side*
Jojo: How come I cannot know yet? *gets up and frost melts on finger then drips of*
Gizbin: Otherwise your power will leave and shall never be known by you again.
Jojo: Ok, that I understand.*walks over to his father and stands beside Fury*
Gizbin: Jump on, Jojo.*turns his horse around to face north*
Jojo: *gets on the back of Fury, behind Gizbin*
Gizbin: Head back to the castle, Fury.
Fury: *gallops towards the castle*
*A few hours later in Gizbin's castle, by his thrown*
Gizbin: *looks at watch* Jojo's in bed, good.
Mercury: *walks over* Shall we leave now...?
Gizbin: *walks up to her* I do love my Jojo...But...He will think bad of us..
Mercury: We need to leave though, honey. It's either abandon, or kill.
Gizbin: I know..*places arms round her* I will miss you Jojo...*ears fold down and he teleports them both far away, to another country*
Jojo: *yawns* ....*eyes open* What was that? *gets up and and walks down* father? Mother?
Gizbin: *in a forest with Mercury* Mercury, I will turn evil tonight, it is due tonight so, will you move away as far as possible? Otherwise you would end up minced, honey!
Mercury: Alright. *kisses him and runs away*
TO BE CONTINUED..
Jojo: *walking along beside him and his horse*
Gizbin: Fury, stop here.
Fury(his horse): *stops*
Gizbin: There's the lake, son. Go and collect your new power.
Jojo: *walks up to a sparkling lake and kneels down beside it*
Fury: *Snuffles and shakes his main in the air*
Jojo: *dips his finger in the water slowly, the water feels Luke-warm, it has a comforting feeling*
*The lake shines in certain places all of a sudden and frost starts to freeze upwards Jojo's finger*
Jojo: !
Gizbin: *silence*
Jojo: *his body glows then fades*
Gizbin: There you have it, son. Your new power.
Jojo: What power is it though?
Gizbin: Wait and you will find out.
Fury: *back up a bit, tail sways side to side*
Jojo: How come I cannot know yet? *gets up and frost melts on finger then drips of*
Gizbin: Otherwise your power will leave and shall never be known by you again.
Jojo: Ok, that I understand.*walks over to his father and stands beside Fury*
Gizbin: Jump on, Jojo.*turns his horse around to face north*
Jojo: *gets on the back of Fury, behind Gizbin*
Gizbin: Head back to the castle, Fury.
Fury: *gallops towards the castle*
*A few hours later in Gizbin's castle, by his thrown*
Gizbin: *looks at watch* Jojo's in bed, good.
Mercury: *walks over* Shall we leave now...?
Gizbin: *walks up to her* I do love my Jojo...But...He will think bad of us..
Mercury: We need to leave though, honey. It's either abandon, or kill.
Gizbin: I know..*places arms round her* I will miss you Jojo...*ears fold down and he teleports them both far away, to another country*
Jojo: *yawns* ....*eyes open* What was that? *gets up and and walks down* father? Mother?
Gizbin: *in a forest with Mercury* Mercury, I will turn evil tonight, it is due tonight so, will you move away as far as possible? Otherwise you would end up minced, honey!
Mercury: Alright. *kisses him and runs away*
TO BE CONTINUED..
I had seen so many sites, about:
Bad Sonic Fan Characters
And there is so many critiques about EVERYTHING and EVERYONE designs of them.
So, I had come to this point of having 'good character'
No character isnt perfect.
If the owner loves it, that's all the matters.
You can have a detailed character, if you want so.
You can have simply character, if YOU want so.
There is only one think you must remember:
Make the character's design fitting in her/him personality and his/her story.
Thank you.
Have a good night, I'm off to sleep now. >8'I
Bad Sonic Fan Characters
And there is so many critiques about EVERYTHING and EVERYONE designs of them.
So, I had come to this point of having 'good character'
No character isnt perfect.
If the owner loves it, that's all the matters.
You can have a detailed character, if you want so.
You can have simply character, if YOU want so.
There is only one think you must remember:
Make the character's design fitting in her/him personality and his/her story.
Thank you.
Have a good night, I'm off to sleep now. >8'I
Ok, so I know a hedgehog whose life is dark... simple this story is about that hedgehog and their long, lost, forgotten life. How the good times turn to simply bad times. And that I know their life. How do I know this? I'm not a stalker nor a watch of life. This hedgehog is me... Shadey Grey the last dark user... the last hope of the planet Dark/Light. First off, dark users are like chaos users, they use dark power or darkness control and so do chaos users... they use chaos control. I never cared for anyone... not even you. Only that I lost my family... my friends... everyone I knew and loved. And I seeked revenge for them... only to find new friends. Friends that could handle my anger... I become calm for some time. Yet, I still kill people for my family and friends...for anything I can remember.
-Shadey Grey, writer.
(Thank-you for reading this intro, tell me if I should write this or not. I start next week. 1/12/12)
-Shadey Grey, writer.
(Thank-you for reading this intro, tell me if I should write this or not. I start next week. 1/12/12)
Name: Natsumi
Age: 16 1/2
Gender: female
Family: Mom, Dad, younger brother
Powers: none
Backstory: Natsumi lives a normal life. Her mom is an actress, and her dad works at a hospital. Her parents aren't home often. So she usually has to take care of her little bro.
They tend to argue alot....but that's what siblings do, right? She lives in a rural area, and her house is pretty big. In order to protect her brother, she's been specially trained in karate and Kung-Fu. But it's only used in emergencies. she's really shy, except around close friends. And isn't afraid to be aggressive.
Interesting information: she originally was made a "Regular Show" fan chara. And she still is. But she is also a fan chara in the Sonic world too. (but in regular show, she's 23) She was also named after a character in the
manga/anime series "Sgt. Frog"
Well, hope ya liked the article! ^^
Age: 16 1/2
Gender: female
Family: Mom, Dad, younger brother
Powers: none
Backstory: Natsumi lives a normal life. Her mom is an actress, and her dad works at a hospital. Her parents aren't home often. So she usually has to take care of her little bro.
They tend to argue alot....but that's what siblings do, right? She lives in a rural area, and her house is pretty big. In order to protect her brother, she's been specially trained in karate and Kung-Fu. But it's only used in emergencies. she's really shy, except around close friends. And isn't afraid to be aggressive.
Interesting information: she originally was made a "Regular Show" fan chara. And she still is. But she is also a fan chara in the Sonic world too. (but in regular show, she's 23) She was also named after a character in the
manga/anime series "Sgt. Frog"
Well, hope ya liked the article! ^^
