Gizbin: *on his horse, riding through a forest nearby his castle*
Jojo: *walking along beside him and his horse*
Gizbin: Fury, stop here.
Fury(his horse): *stops*
Gizbin: There's the lake, son. Go and collect your new power.
Jojo: *walks up to a sparkling lake and kneels down beside it*
Fury: *Snuffles and shakes his main in the air*
Jojo: *dips his finger in the water slowly, the water feels Luke-warm, it has a comforting feeling*
*The lake shines in certain places all of a sudden and frost starts to freeze upwards Jojo's finger*
Jojo: !
Gizbin: *silence*
Jojo: *his body glows then fades*
Gizbin: There you have it, son. Your new power.
Jojo: What power is it though?
Gizbin: Wait and you will find out.
Fury: *back up a bit, tail sways side to side*
Jojo: How come I cannot know yet? *gets up and frost melts on finger then drips of*
Gizbin: Otherwise your power will leave and shall never be known by you again.
Jojo: Ok, that I understand.*walks over to his father and stands beside Fury*
Gizbin: Jump on, Jojo.*turns his horse around to face north*
Jojo: *gets on the back of Fury, behind Gizbin*
Gizbin: Head back to the castle, Fury.
Fury: *gallops towards the castle*
*A few hours later in Gizbin's castle, by his thrown*
Gizbin: *looks at watch* Jojo's in bed, good.
Mercury: *walks over* Shall we leave now...?
Gizbin: *walks up to her* I do love my Jojo...But...He will think bad of us..
Mercury: We need to leave though, honey. It's either abandon, or kill.
Gizbin: I know..*places arms round her* I will miss you Jojo...*ears fold down and he teleports them both far away, to another country*
Jojo: *yawns* ....*eyes open* What was that? *gets up and and walks down* father? Mother?
Gizbin: *in a forest with Mercury* Mercury, I will turn evil tonight, it is due tonight so, will you move away as far as possible? Otherwise you would end up minced, honey!
Mercury: Alright. *kisses him and runs away*
TO BE CONTINUED..
Jojo: *walking along beside him and his horse*
Gizbin: Fury, stop here.
Fury(his horse): *stops*
Gizbin: There's the lake, son. Go and collect your new power.
Jojo: *walks up to a sparkling lake and kneels down beside it*
Fury: *Snuffles and shakes his main in the air*
Jojo: *dips his finger in the water slowly, the water feels Luke-warm, it has a comforting feeling*
*The lake shines in certain places all of a sudden and frost starts to freeze upwards Jojo's finger*
Jojo: !
Gizbin: *silence*
Jojo: *his body glows then fades*
Gizbin: There you have it, son. Your new power.
Jojo: What power is it though?
Gizbin: Wait and you will find out.
Fury: *back up a bit, tail sways side to side*
Jojo: How come I cannot know yet? *gets up and frost melts on finger then drips of*
Gizbin: Otherwise your power will leave and shall never be known by you again.
Jojo: Ok, that I understand.*walks over to his father and stands beside Fury*
Gizbin: Jump on, Jojo.*turns his horse around to face north*
Jojo: *gets on the back of Fury, behind Gizbin*
Gizbin: Head back to the castle, Fury.
Fury: *gallops towards the castle*
*A few hours later in Gizbin's castle, by his thrown*
Gizbin: *looks at watch* Jojo's in bed, good.
Mercury: *walks over* Shall we leave now...?
Gizbin: *walks up to her* I do love my Jojo...But...He will think bad of us..
Mercury: We need to leave though, honey. It's either abandon, or kill.
Gizbin: I know..*places arms round her* I will miss you Jojo...*ears fold down and he teleports them both far away, to another country*
Jojo: *yawns* ....*eyes open* What was that? *gets up and and walks down* father? Mother?
Gizbin: *in a forest with Mercury* Mercury, I will turn evil tonight, it is due tonight so, will you move away as far as possible? Otherwise you would end up minced, honey!
Mercury: Alright. *kisses him and runs away*
TO BE CONTINUED..
I had seen so many sites, about:
Bad Sonic Fan Characters
And there is so many critiques about EVERYTHING and EVERYONE designs of them.
So, I had come to this point of having 'good character'
No character isnt perfect.
If the owner loves it, that's all the matters.
You can have a detailed character, if you want so.
You can have simply character, if YOU want so.
There is only one think you must remember:
Make the character's design fitting in her/him personality and his/her story.
Thank you.
Have a good night, I'm off to sleep now. >8'I
Bad Sonic Fan Characters
And there is so many critiques about EVERYTHING and EVERYONE designs of them.
So, I had come to this point of having 'good character'
No character isnt perfect.
If the owner loves it, that's all the matters.
You can have a detailed character, if you want so.
You can have simply character, if YOU want so.
There is only one think you must remember:
Make the character's design fitting in her/him personality and his/her story.
Thank you.
Have a good night, I'm off to sleep now. >8'I
Ok, so I know a hedgehog whose life is dark... simple this story is about that hedgehog and their long, lost, forgotten life. How the good times turn to simply bad times. And that I know their life. How do I know this? I'm not a stalker nor a watch of life. This hedgehog is me... Shadey Grey the last dark user... the last hope of the planet Dark/Light. First off, dark users are like chaos users, they use dark power or darkness control and so do chaos users... they use chaos control. I never cared for anyone... not even you. Only that I lost my family... my friends... everyone I knew and loved. And I seeked revenge for them... only to find new friends. Friends that could handle my anger... I become calm for some time. Yet, I still kill people for my family and friends...for anything I can remember.
-Shadey Grey, writer.
(Thank-you for reading this intro, tell me if I should write this or not. I start next week. 1/12/12)
-Shadey Grey, writer.
(Thank-you for reading this intro, tell me if I should write this or not. I start next week. 1/12/12)
Midnight Stormcloud
Midnight:I cant believe we did this!
Platinum:Im just glad we get to do this together!
(5 hours later)
Platinum:Im really tired.
Midnight:Me too,lets go to sleep.
(They wake up)
Platinum:Midnight,do you see that thing over there
Midnight:Yeah I do,lets see what it is.
Platinum:Hi!Im Platinum And this is Midnight
Midnight:Uhhhhh...H-hi
Silver:Im Silver.Nice to meet you ladies.
Midnight:Platinum come with me.NOW!
Platinum:Okay?
(Midnight whispers she likes Silver)
Platinum:OMG!
Midnight:Dont tell anyone!
Platinum:I promise.
Silver:Is something wrong?
Platinum:No!We were just talking about our quest to find the chaos emerald on Chaos Mountain.
Silver:Oh.I see.I have to go,I'll see you again.Goodbye Platinum and Midnight
Platinum:Bye!
Midnight:Ummmm...Bye Silver.
THE END!I HOPED YOU LIKED IT!
PLEASE READ PART 3 THE FINALE!
Platinum Silverburst
Vince soon was at G.U.N.Two men where guarding the entrance."You may not pass!"One exclaimed.Vince soon knocked them out with a few swings from his guitar.He quietly went into the HQ.He sneaked around trying to find Ash."Dammit,where is she?"He whispered to himself.
Soon he found the room where they where about to experiment on Ash.Ash kept dodging the needle full of toxic.Vince knocked the scientist out be for he could inject the needle.He grabbed Ash carried her when the guards chased them trough.
Ash soon grew her bat wings and killed all the guards.Vince was startled.When they escaped he kept quiet.They ended up on top of a cliff.
Ash coulodnt take it any more.She kissed Vince as the moonlight shined on them.
The End ~AshxVince~
Soon he found the room where they where about to experiment on Ash.Ash kept dodging the needle full of toxic.Vince knocked the scientist out be for he could inject the needle.He grabbed Ash carried her when the guards chased them trough.
Ash soon grew her bat wings and killed all the guards.Vince was startled.When they escaped he kept quiet.They ended up on top of a cliff.
Ash coulodnt take it any more.She kissed Vince as the moonlight shined on them.
The End ~AshxVince~
