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my made up lyrics:Which is better?

sorry, i would have done this as a poll but it was too long.

It's already been a year, but I'm still lost without you here.
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I know this doesn't make any sense, but a piece of my heart is gone without your presence.
 cutiepie0310 posted over a year ago
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Daniharmerfan said:
i like this line : It's already been a year, but I'm still lost without you here.
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posted over a year ago 
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thank you so much
cutiepie0310 posted over a year ago
Directioner3300 said:
Both are good!!
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ToriKelly5 said:
I loved the first one but they are both good, well done
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