Hey everyone i made a tribute for my grandma who died 7 years ago.Can you tell what you think of the song i sang? Thanks

Hey Ma ma Honey i hope you could read this.I just wanna say that i love you so much and i miss you very much.You were the only person who ever made me smile.Life with you here was simple before you left.I wish i had the change to tell you that i love you when you were alive.I guess you don't relieve you love someone until their gone.I just wanna say that i miss you and i hope you can hear me.RIP Honey and keep smiling in heaven.God bless you. See you up there soon. 1931-2005

Hey guys please sure you tell someone who you care about that you love them and try to appreciate them while their here because life is way too short.One day when their gone your gonna realize that you really love and care about that person.Try to spend as much time with that person as you can.
I Love you all