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What do you think of this song I wrote?

I'm lying sown on my bed, thinking about what you said
You're crying over me
I'm feeling sad that you feel bad
But I don't really feel it with you

I'm crazy you know, I know
You're crazy I know, you just don't believe it!

You're a crazy boy, I'm a crazy girl but together we're just not right
You and me, me and you are a totally terrible sight


What do you think so far????

 AmyPond12 posted over a year ago
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chickencheese said:
great so far- make it longer and it will be even better :)
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thanks soooo much!!!!!!!!!!!
AmyPond12 posted over a year ago
Team_Carlisle said:
its great it's nice to read a fellow song writters matieral instread of mine. I really do enjoy it, my only critism would be make it longer
-Stevie
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