Pokémon The legy apprentice

loorofzadaa posted on Feb 12, 2012 at 11:05PM
Hey it's Loorofzadaa! i am making a interesting story about Loor, who's parents were killed by groudon, and about Kasha who's parents were killed by Darkrai.
Choose your side and read this every so offten.
Have fun!

Look, give this story a chance and actuly read it, you may like it. Comment if you want me to continue, or if you dont want me to continue.Maybe give mesome advice on how to improve.
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over a year ago loorofzadaa said…
Loor strode through the forest with the wind blowing in her face. "v v" she shivered. "I can't beleive i'm really running away." She mummbled to herself. Her mind driffted to her "parents". The girls parents were really her caretakers Loor was an orphan, her parents died when she was 3. They died in a fire caused by the mighty groudon during his unstoppable rage. The caretakers were mean annoying people, and Loor was basically their slave. They would make fun of her and say her parents were stupid for letting themselves burn. "your burning ghost parents woud have wanted you to scrub the toilet." Loor recalled them saying.
Now, Loor was running away. "Owww!" She screeched then swore. The wind chilled even more and a rock flew out of nowhere and hit her nose. "What the..." She looked up and nearly fainted.
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over a year ago loorofzadaa said…
Some ghost was floating above her. "Excuse me you're floating on my backpack." Loor said to the ghost. "oh... Um sorry." the ghost floated to the side. " Who are you exactly?" Loor asked. "Now you ask... I am Darkrai, lord of darkness." He said. "Cool." Loor muttered trying to say it without crying. Darkrai had the most perplexed look on his face, he seemed disapointed that he wasn't scaring Loor. " What brings you here on this beautiful night?" Darkrai asked. "I'm running away from my caretakers, they treat me like a slave." Loor spoke. "Ahh, that makes more sense most kids I meet are running away." Darkrai said. "I suppose most ran away from you too." Loor said. " Well yes, but some come and follow me. Shall you?" The ghostly pokemon asked. "Yes please." Loor responded and followed Darkrai.
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over a year ago loorofzadaa said…
The walk to wherever Darkrai wanted Loor to go was treacherous, scary and wet. Very wet. It started raining and Loor wished she had broughted her umrella, even thought the umbrella wasn't much because the caretakers never let her buy anything fancy. She stil wished she had it. "Rain... the one thing that ruins a very beautiful nigh such as this.huh" Darkrai sighed. Loor observed the full moon and beheld its glory. "Enjoying it to are you?" He asked. "Yes actully, I am." Loor admitted. A sableye glanced up at them once they reached a massive, strong, broud tree. "Girl?" The sableye asked. "A talking sableye?" Loor asked. Sableye looked at Loor. "All who are one with the night can become more inteligent then ever before." The gem eyed pokemon answered. "KECKKECKKECK!!!" Darkrai snickered and the enormous tree opened. "Wow" Loor said speechless. "Yup. Come on in. We got tea. It tastes good. I also like coffee. We have that too." Sableye said. "Yes... pokemon can talk here but they might not speek in big sentences." Darkrai said. Loor, Darkrai, and sableye entered the big hollow tree, what Loor saw amazed her. "This, Loor is Night Academy. Here humans and pokemon learn how to use dark, ghost, dragon, phychic, and steel powers. Loor i would like you to join." Darkrai offerd. "Yes, i think i will." Loor responded.
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over a year ago loorofzadaa said…
Loors first day at NA was pretty good of course there were those little misshapps...
"Well even though this is the Night Acedemy we only have classes at day so here's your dorm key." Darkrai said.
over a year ago loorofzadaa said…
"Thanks." Loor thanked him. "Your welcome, Sableye will go with you to your dorm. Here in NA humans and pokemon work together as partners, trust me it helps." Darkrai informned Loor. "Ok, cool. Come on Sableye!" Loor beckoned "Yes. I will follow. Then i enter." Sableye said. "We may have to work on your vocabulary a tiddly bit." Loor said. "Yes. I would like that. We should leave. Now." Sableye stuttered.
Loor and Sableye ventured into the halls with mistified looks on their face. A blur of vision fell upon Loors eyes. "UHH!" Loor collapsed. "Loor?" Sableye worried.
over a year ago loorofzadaa said…
Loors vision blured and suddenly she couldnt see. Her mind twisted and turned then an image appeared in her mind. A colossal red beast 37 stories tall appeared in Loors brain. "You're just as pathetic as your parents." It said. "Groudon!" Loor bellowed. "Look who can say things people are already aware of. Bravo. Now... to more serious matters. I'm going to destroy you and your friends, if I get lucky I will even kill the remainder of your family. Toodles!" Groudon threatened. "Come back and fight! I'll klicken kill you!!!" Loor screamed. As Groudon faded away he had just the time to say, "You're so insecure. You are a nusence. Goodbye." "I'll never allow you to do that." Loor finished.
over a year ago loorofzadaa said…
Kasha
(Yup all pendragon characters)

Kasha rested in the lair with a bored look on her face. "Hurry up Groudon I'm bored..." She mumbled to herself. Groudon was medlling (you know the thing that they say in Scooby Doo) with Loor. Kasha had no clue why Groudon did this but she didn't care. She hated anything to do with Darkrai. Darkrai killed her parents in a nighmare. Or at least Kasha thought they were dead. They bassicaly disapeared out of their bed.
Her mind flashed back to that day. "AAHHH!" Kasha woke up with a satrt when she heard the scream. She put her head on the wall and listen. "Darkrai, you don't have do this." Her mom said. "Marie you must listen, the time has come your are coming." Darkrai said. "We can't." Her dad said. "I'm afraid you have no choice." Darkrai said. "HRACKAPOWNIE!" Darkrai screamed. Lightning flashed, and Kasha projected herself into her parents bedroom. They were gone. Tears filled her eyes, "How? How? HOW!!!" She screamed. A shadow flashed around the corner then faded. "Darkrai." Kasha somehow reconized him. She jotted down the thing Darkrai screamed. It sounded like ha-rack-u-pow-ny. "It may be usefull." she said as she cried. Poor 7 year old.
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over a year ago loorofzadaa said…
Kasha

Kasha returned from her daydream. More like daynightmare. She thought. "Kasha are you thinking about them again?" A black shadow asked. "Yah, Houndoor. I HATE DARKRAI!" Kasha raged.

over a year ago loorofzadaa said…
Kasha

"Look Kasha i know you miss yor parents but you have to understand that right now there's a bigger task at hand." Houndoor said. "Yah, your right. I hope Groudon taught that Loor chick a lesson." Kasha began to chukkle.

PFFF! "What was that?" The she dog ran around in circles. "I HAVE NO CLUE!" Kasha yelled.

One of the other students from the Fire Academy appeared. "Kasha, some one broke in. We have to stop them right now or everything us and Groudon worked for will be gone!" Bella stammered. "You're right. I'm not going to let that happen, Houndoor you ready?" Kasha asked. "More ready then I will ever be." Houndoor responded.

"Let's go!" The trio said. They peeked around the corner and saw something very strange, it was a phoenix. "Ho-oh?" Bella asked. "No, I'm Moltress. Ho-oh is just a downright copy of me. Have either of you three seen Groudon?" Moltresss asked. "Umm, he's sabatouging(How do you spell that?) Darkrai." Houndoor responded. "Oh well, I'll be back. Tell Grouon when he comes back i was here." Moltress asked. "Okay." Kasha said. The phoenix cawed and spred its wings. It lept out of the hole in the wall and disapeared.
"That was strange." Bella said. "Yah, it was." Kasha replied.
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over a year ago loorofzadaa said…
zzz
Loor

Loor snapped out of her trance. "Groudon..." She said as she awoke. "Groudon?" Darkrai asked. "Ahh! Sorry didn't see you, and yes Groudon he invaded my mind. He wants to kill me, my friends, and the others in my family. I didn't even know i had more family." Loor said."No, this can't be!" Darkrai screamed. "What? Are you good? How are you?" Sableye asked. "He wants revenge, because i killed Kasha's parnets..." Darkrai said slowly driffting away. "Who's Kasha?" Loor asked. "An apprentice of Groudon. I killed her parents... why did i do that, why?" Darkrai stuttered as if forgetting he did that. "Darkrai?" Loor and sableye asked. "I can' talk, i need to some reseach. In the meantime please go into your dorm and sleep." Darkrai kindly asked. "Ok." Sableye and Loor said.
over a year ago loorofzadaa said…
Loor

Loor slowly walked down the long twisted hallways with sableye by her side. "We sleep now?" Sableye asked. "Well, i think we can wait for a little whille in the dorm before we sleep." Loor responded.

They walked for at least 20 minutes since the halls were so massive. "How long?" Loor wimpered exhaustedly. "We are number 1294. It should be found soon." Sableye stuttered like usual.

Then they saw 1294 on a door. "Yes finally!" Loor danced in victory. "That took long. I wounder what will happen. Let us enter." Sableye stuttered slightly less. "So let's see, apperently there's a spell we use to get in." Loor said confused. "Did not Darkrai give us a key?" Sableye asked. "He did... here it is!" Loor whispered so that she wouldn't wake up any of the 3,000 people that were at NA.

The twosome examined the key. "It has a spell on it." Sableye said frowning. "Well how about I try it?" Loor asked. "Sure." Sableye answered.

"Night's chills, day's light, open this dorm with all of might!" Loor chanted. The door lit up and they gleamed with excitement. "Yay!" Sableye celebrated. They stepped in and breathed in the smell of dust and the previous students. "Ahh... relaxing." Loor said. "Yes. Good. Sleep now." Sableye stuttered. "Sure, but before we do anything read this." Loor asked and handed Sableye a book. "A dic-tion-ary? Okay. I read now." Sableye said and started reading as Loor drifted off to sleep.
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over a year ago pinkyparty9 said…
wink
Awesome!
over a year ago loorofzadaa said…
Loor

Loor woke up to the sound of an alarm clock. "I don't remember setting this!" She yelled frustrated at the clock. "Whatever..." Loor said.

She got up out of bed and yawned. "Sableye where are you?" Loor asked. "I'm exactly over in this derection." Sableye responded. "Wow did you really read all of that dictionary?" Loor asked. "Affirmative." The gem creature responded. "Okay... I'm going to make some pancakes." Loor said sounding stupid compared to Sableye's newfound vocabulary. "Are you positive whether or not we partake in class tody?" Sableye asked. "Well today's Saturday but I can't remember what Darkrai said about class today so how about we ask?" Loor said. "Okay."



Sorry for this being so short guys, I've been doing alot over break. So i hope to continue soon.
over a year ago loorofzadaa said…
Kasha


"Bella, Houndoor, we should get to class." Kasha offered. "Umm... Groudon' not back yet." Houndoor said. "Yup." Bella agreed. "So what should we do? I mean classes are abou to start and if he's not watching..." Kasha started. "I don't think THE INCIDENT will happen again." Bella comented.
"You guys never told me what THE INCIDENT was! Tell Me!" Houndour demanded. "Uhh..." They started. "WHAR? WHAT? WHAT?" He asked. "Houndoor, your real mother, went crazy and attacked the students. Then she ran away." Bella said.
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over a year ago loorofzadaa said…
Kasha

"Why didn't you tell me?" Houndor cringed. "We thought you would FLIP out." Kasha explained. "Yah, sorry Houndoor." Bella apologized.
over a year ago loorofzadaa said…
Kasha

"You thought I would flip out? You didn't trust me? What? Did you think I would go crazy? Are you afraid of me? Well I'll tell you! I can't beleive my best friends wouldn't tell me! HAROAR!" Houndoor screamed and fire burst everwhere. "Houndoor?" Kasha trembled. "Quick Heatmor help us!!!" Bella yelled.
"Bella?" A voice yelled. An anteater apeared through the clouds of smoke that Houndoor was producing. "Help!" Bella yelled. Heatmor ran through the smoke and pushed over Houndoor. "Calm down Houndoor!" Heatmor Comanded. "Ha heh ha heh." Houndoor panted. Heatmor stood atop Houndor and slowly calmed down the dog. "Are you okay now?" Heatmor asked. "I...feel...like...gyrados...dung&quo­t; Houndoor said wearily. A light enveloped Houndoor. "Houndoor! I think somethings happening to you!" Kasha worried.
The light slowly covered Houndoor and a silence fell upon the two female humans and the male Heatmor. The light faded away and the flame dog was unreconizable(sp?).
"Houndoor! I think you're a Houndoom now!" Kasha exclaimed.
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over a year ago loorofzadaa said…
"Wow, I look fregin awesome!" Houndoom yelled.
"Wow, I look fregin awesome!" Houndoom yelled.
over a year ago pinkyparty9 said…
big smile
YES YES YOU DO SCREAMED MEW WHO CAME OUT OF NO WHERE
over a year ago loorofzadaa said…
is anyone reading?
over a year ago loorofzadaa said…
no... okay, i think i might just stop writing altogether.
over a year ago loorofzadaa said…
-_- (keepin this updated to see if people want me to continue)
over a year ago loorofzadaa said…
Goodbye everyone, im seriously done now.