Amber groaned, her stomach rumbled as she curled up inside an ally way, she was soooo thirsty.

Drinking from animals wouldn't do any longer, she knew this would happen, eventually she had to drink human blood or she would starve.

Very slowly her blood lust got the better of her, her eyes darkened as she felt her fangs come through and her eyes flickered red.

She couldn't take it any longer...

She needed blood!

Suddenly she heard human heart beats near her.

Amber licked her lips hungrily.

They came round the corner and she struck not caring who the hell it was.

It was 5 guys, they were in shock...

Okay guys... Sooooo this is my first fan fiction EVER so just tell me if it's really bad or if I should write more or if I should change something......

Hffff. Hfff. Hfff. My breathing was so loud and heavy I couldn't hear anything else. I'm surprised I didn't scare the group of deer twenty feet in front of me. I was running my fastest ever through the forest behind Long Park and Battlefield High School. My feet were hitting the trail hard and I was just getting lost in the scenery. But that's where I messed up. I wasn't paying enough attention in a bad part of town. (Not that Haymarket is a...