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My first Niall poem, "Love Divided" - Tell me what you think maybe? :3

Going somewhere,
Ending nowhere,
Where am I to go?
Wanting solitude,
Finding opposite,
Am I to walk alone?
You, there,
Across the field,
Of fantasy and fame.
Where did you come from?
How do I get to you,
Without crossing the flame?
You appeared out of nowhere,
A star suddenly born,
And I am drawn to your light.
But you can't see mine,
Its too dim to shine,
Never seen in the night.
You go on in life,
With it displayed to the world,
And mine displayed elsewhere.
You go on without knowing,
That I am here, waiting for you,
That I am always there.
And wait I do,
For you to see,
The imaginary girl who is always by your side.
The one with the smile,
The one with the voice,
That you'll never seem to recognize.
So you go on,
Day after day,
With your lively life.
While I am stuck here,
Never near,
The one who seems to be my light.
Yes, that's right, you are my light,
And shine bright, you do.
Edges illuminated,
Flames engulfed,
For the one you never knew.
When I am down,
And I listen to your soft melodic words,
Of carefully chosen wisdom.
I know that someday,
Deep in my heart,
My day will surely come.
You bring me to my senses,
But you drive me insane,
You, the boy who's on the edge.
But I am on the verge,
And you bring me back from it,
Saving me from darkness.
You make me feel free,
Like I am surely alive,
Like you love me with a burning passion.
But I am still a nobody,
Blending with the sea,
And I should just push past it.
But something about you,
Something I've never seen before,
Draws me to you.
And I smile in delight,
But frown in fright,
From how much I've fallen for you.
Though, why am I still nowhere?
Why am I alone?
Without you, I am lost.
Without you, I am unknown.

Sorry its so long and sorry if there's a typo. Please let me know what you think of it :)
 PonygirlCurtis7 posted over a year ago
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supermans_wife said:
I really like it! It's so creative and thoughtful! You're a great poet :)
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posted over a year ago 
Thank you so much! ^.^
PonygirlCurtis7 posted over a year ago
eesheee said:
I loved it so much! ♥ Your a genius!
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