My Little Pony Friendship is Magic Article: Saten Twist Adventures: S2E2... PART 3

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posted by Canada24

LATER THAT SAME EVENING:

The main six were gathered at a table.

Pinkie: (saddened) I can't believe it.. Saten just left like that..

Twilight: Oh, he'll be back.. He's just trying to impress that Starlight, girl..

AJ: Ah don't know Twilight. Ah think this may be more serious than ya realize.. Ah mean.. Deep down. Saten is a very depressed person.. And having the change to lose the cutie mark he never wanted in the first place.. This is a big opportunity for him.

Twilight: Relax, it'll be fi-

Rarity: (gasps) What in the name of Equestria is that?!

Shopkeeper: Welcome! Care to sample some local fashion? We've got cloaks this month!

Rarity: (gagging) Wha- Ooh, er, perhaps another time, good sir, thank you. [whispering] No wonder nobody's wearing anything!

Fluttershy: (hushed) Really, girls! They may do things a bit differently than we're used to, but that's no reason to be rude.

Rainbow Dash: (hushed) No, the reason to be rude is that they all keep staring at us!

Double Diamond: (creepy smile) Need something?

Twilight Sparkle: Uh, no! We're good! (hushed) Fluttershy's right. If we're going to get to the bottom of why the map sent us here, we'll need the help of these ponies.

Applejack: Ah think we ran off to the end of Equestria before we even knew what that map was!

Pinkie: If we were at the end of Equestria, we'd be sitting on a big 'A'! (giggles) Get it?

Rarity: Oh, please, Miss Pie! This is hardly the time for jokes! We've come all this way and for what?

Twilight: (hushed) Maybe you're right. But we're here now, and it sure feels like something's wrong.

Applejack: That and two bits'll get you a cup of cider.

Sugar Belle: Is this a bad time?

Fluttershy: We shouldn't be bickering like this in front of our new friends. Really, Applejack, you're almost as bad as Rainbow Dash!

Rainbow Dash: Don't drag me into this!

Sugar Belle: Is your friendship ending?

Pinkie: Are you crazy?! We'd never let a disagreement get in the way of food!

Sugar Belle: O-kay, well, my name is Sugar Belle. What can I bring you? We have. muffins...

Twilight: Then I guess we'll take six muffins!

Pinkie: Make that twelve! What? I'm hungry! Twilight: (hushed) Come on, girls. We've got to stick together. It doesn't matter what happened before, we're here now.

Applejack: Ah guess you're right. And the sooner we figure out why, the sooner we can go home.

Sugar Belle: Forgive me for overhearing, but just a moment ago you were disagreeing, and now it sounds like you're... agreeing.

Applejack: Uh-huh...

Sugar Belle: Well, you had such differing opinions – and cutie marks.

Rarity: We have differing opinions all the time, darling.

Sugar Belle: But you look like you're friends.

Twilight: We are friends. A simple disagreement wouldn't change that.

Sugar Belle: I'm sorry, I'm just having a hard time understanding. Different talents lead to different opinions, which lead to bitterness and misery. So... why aren't you bitter and...?

Pinkie: (Eats muffin). (chocking) Blech!.. (realizes it was out loud).. I mean.. Mmmm... good...

Sugar Belle: It's all right. I know I'm not a very good baker. At least, I know I'm not any better than anybody else in the village. Well, I... hope you enjoy our little village!

Pinkie: (hacking).

Sugar Belle: (hushed) Come inside before you go! Meet me downstairs!

Rainbow Dash: Okay, that was weird too.

Twilight: (hushed) Let's all sit here and eat these muffins and act normal. I think we're being watched.

Rainbow Dash: (sarcastically) You think?

Twilight: (hushed) No, not like that! I mean somebody here doesn't want us talking to Sugar Belle.

Applejack: Ah got an idea. But you gotta eat all of them muffins, Pinkie.

Pinkie: Me?! Why me?!

Applejack: Shh.. (hushed) You got a stronger stomach than any of us, and that filly in there might be our best chance at findin' out what the hay is goin' on round here.

Pinkie: (gulps).

Pinkie: (groaning in pain).

Applejack: (stitled) I can't believe ya ate all our muffins, Pinkie Pie! We'd best go inside and get some more!

Twilight: (hushed) Nice work, Pinkie.

Pinkie: (groaning) I've accidentally eaten cardboard tastier than that...

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Windwakerguy430 This was pretty good. And very accurate to the original source. I like it

Canada24 Good way to put what?

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Read It and Weep, The Journey of the New Brony.

posted by triq267

So, I've been thinking of this for a while, but now I'm gonna put it into words. In the episode Read It and Weep, there are many comparisons to be made between Rainbow Dash and a new brony's journeys. Let me explain with a generic model that fits both stories.

1. A trusted friend suggests you try a form of entertainment that you normally wouldn't try.
2. After much thought, you reluctantly give in.
3. You begin to get interested, and realize that you enjoy it.
4. You feel embaressed and hide it from your friends.
5. You find yourself partaking in it any chance you get, and when you aren't doing...

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Equestrian Tales Chapters 7 and 8

posted by Tawnyjay

Chapter 7: Twilight Sparkle
    I wistfully watched as Spring hurried away. “And she seemed like such a sweet girl…” Rarity sighed.
    “We need to get away, fast.” Rainbow nodded at the now-stirring Trixie. So we shot away, our hooves pounding on the ground.
    We found shelter in a hollow boulder in the middle of the forest where the village was. Rarity’s eyes flashed briefly. She hated boulders, ever since that Tom incident…
    “It’ll have to do for now, I suppose,” she muttered as she sat...

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The mystery of happiness: part: nineteen

posted by whiteclaw

The Mayor stood behind the curtain, waiting for it to lift up. She had given many speeches before, but a speech about murders? She had spoken to her citizens about disasters in the past. But nothing to this extent.

CRASH!!! "Derpy! What did I tell you about coming behind stage? You`re supposed to lift the curtain not handle the stage lights." snapped the Mayor. "I`m sorry, I dun`t know wat da problem es?!" replied the Pegasus. Then she lifted the curtaon as she was instructed.

The crowd cheered and applauded, as the Mayor made her way to the podium. She took a deep breath, and grabbed her...

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My Fan Characters~

posted by Tawnyjay

DEWY SHINE

Dewy Shine is a very smart and resourceful pegasus. She cares a lot about what others think of her intelligence, and is very offended if anyone questions her. She's mostly nice, but if you insult her intellect...

MIDNIGHT OWL

Midnight Owl is very quiet and sweet. She is the assistant to Princess Luna, and is very easily stressed out and depressed. She is a unicorn.

TROLLSPARK

Technically, this is my friend's FC, but she let me write it on here.
Trollspark is a naughty unicorn with unusually strong magic. She enjoys causing distress among the citizens of Ponyville, though if they tell...

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Twilight in Oblivion: four

posted by AquoMoon

Once Twilight woke up in Castle Oblivion she found the card to go through the door and a piece of paper and a quil pen, so she wrote the letter to all her friends in ponyville
to come rescue her. Twilight wondered about the card that Axel gave her then the stallion came and asked her,"So are you ready for another trip?" "Yes I am can you wait a few minuets Axel?" asked Twilight nicely the satlliuon answered back,"I am not Axel but you could wait a few minuets before your friends come, here I'll use the corriador of Darkness to summon them here."

Once the stallion summoned the corriador all...

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Ponies Through Time- Chapter 1

posted by Katie_Kat200

First chapter... of a lot XD. This is act 1... the cave times, when things were simpler and ponies had to hunt for the food (no they weren't meat eaters.... really...) This is actually a fan fiction based on events that happened through world history and the ponies being placed in them. So its like History Fan Fiction or something. I don't know... So enjoy this first chapter :3

Twilight Sparkle peeked out of her library cave into the sunshine. It was morning and she had been buried in her blanket all night after a cold night. She looked around. Just another day in Ponyville… 7000 BCE.

“Stalagspike!”...

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I'm planning to create......

posted by ILOVEMLPs

Hello pony fans!With help from my dad, I am planning to create an ULTIMATE PONY CREATOR!!!!!
This pony creator will be nothing like anything that you have ever seen before!It may take a few months to make, but I am working on it a quickly as possible.This pony creator will have EVERYTHING!!
You will be able to turn the pony in a different direction. You will be able to get different outfits and hats and stuff. You will also be able to do the following things: design your own clothes,
choose objects from the real movie, Choose from the provided cutie marks or make one yourself,have more than 2...

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The mystery of happiness part: seven

posted by whiteclaw

The blue pegasus flew through the air, she was used to this routine. She kept a watchful eye out for anything that moved. She saw a rat about half her size, scurry across a pile of dead roaches. She thought of Rarity, how would she survive in this dump? She laughed and tryed to land softly, she crashed and cursed at herself. She wished she hadn`t dropped out of flight school. She brushed herself off and trotted forward.

She smelled something awful, it was the worst stench she had ever smelled. She walked over to it`s source and found a horid sight. The decaying body of a teenage pony. With...

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Bartholomew Episode 3 Part 3

posted by Seanthehedgehog

I was bringing in a freight from Albany, when I saw Bartholomew leaving the yards in a switcher.

Skywalker: *Stops train in Croton West Yard* Hey Ten Cents. Where's he going?
Ten Cents: Back to the station. It'll be time for him to go home soon.
Skywalker: Okay.
Bartholomew: *Stops engine at servicing facility* Good thing the facility is near the train station.
Lady: *Driving electric train northbound*
Zorran: Alright, get that bridge down!
Zebedee: *Driving tug, and trying to pull down bridge*
Zug: *Doing the same*
Captain Zero: Pull harder for crying out loud!
Lady: *Sees tugboats* Whatever they're...

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Ponies On The Rails episode 37 part 3

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Michael, and Debbie stayed outside to play with their dad, and Hawkeye went inside to make the phone call.

Hawkeye: *Calling Cheyenne Trainstation*
Pete: *Hears phone ring, and answers* Cheyenne Trainstation of the Union Pacific. Pete Reimer speaking.
Hawkeye: Pete, it's me Pierce.
Pete: What have you been up to?
Hawkeye: My train has been derailed. Could you send some cranes over to get them back on the tracks?
Pete: I already did. Percy, and Jeff will be there too. They're gonna inspect the track.
Hawkeye: Okay good. Thank you. *Hangs up*
Grandfather: *Comes downstairs* How did you get in my...

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CheesePie chapter 3

posted by Mylittlecute12

"Huh?!" He snapped back into reality. "What..just..happened..?". Cheese questioned slowly. "Oh I'm just handing you a cupcake!". Pinkie Pie grinned. "Oh yeah.." He responded shakily. Just then a crash sound was heard from above. Then the most beautiful, colorful, glimmering rainbow appeared. "Wow! That's a beautiful rainbow! Right Cheese?". "Yes, you are beautiful..I..I mean the rainbow! Yes that's what I meant! The rainbow is so, pretty.". Cheese Sandwich was super duper nervous. "Yup, it's a beauty alright..". Pinkie didn't sound as cheerful as she was when she noticed the rainbow (actually...

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Magic of Friendship: Part 11---The Fight is on [1]

posted by alinah_09

well,after a lot of practice Lemon finally got the hang of it,but the only problem is that i got too used to it...its okay though,because Lemon and I were the fist ones who can do the martial art at a great pace without even making mistakes,we were like pros!

"hey Aura!"

"good morning to you too,Lemon" i said as she put down her bag and got her arnis

"how about we do one more round?"

"game"

"yo,are you guys gonna practice?" Blue said as he approached us,along with the other present members of our group "we'll join you! okay guys! go to your practice partners! were gonna practice!" he said as they,indeed,got...

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Ponies On The Rails episode 36 part 1

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Theme song >>>> link

Seanthehedgehog presents

Ponies On The Rails

Starring

Peirce Hawkins "Hawkeye" From Seanthehedgehog

Red Rose From CrazyWriterLady

Coffee Creme From KarinaBrony

Snowflake & Orion From Alinah09

Metal Gloss From DragonAura15

Stylo From Jimmythedragon

Gordon, Percy, Jeff, Wilson, and Pete from Seanthehedgehog

Episode 36

Mail Pony

February 4, 1954

Pete: *Checks clock* It's almost seven.
Gordon: That means we can go home soon.
Pete: Yeah, I think everypony knows that.
Gordon: *Waiting for clock to strike seven with excitement*
Metal Gloss: *Drives passenger train...

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My favorite characters out of MLP

posted by Dudespie

10. Spike the dragon
Spike is like Twilight Sparkle's little minion. Spike has bad luck, as seen in season 4. I think spike should get better treatment from the writers

9. Celestia
Celestia is number nine because she's kinda perfect... Celestia has all the power (well, almost all of the power) and can do anything. She's mysterious and uncharted. She's only on my list cause she's sisters with Luna....

8. Fluttershy
Fluttershy is number eight because I can relate to a lot of her problems. Fluttershy is sweet, and I admire her kindness, plus, she's a troll.

7. Derpy!
I know Derpy isn't an official character,...

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Bartholomew Episode 2 Part 2

posted by Seanthehedgehog

The train Whirl Wind was getting on was heading into Grand Central. I had to be on a train going to Albany.

Lady: Master Sword, hurry up!
Master Sword: I'm getting on. *Gets on*
Lady: *Drives train*
Bartholomew: If Master Sword likes the new worker, I could help him ask her out on a date.
Henrietta: *Walks up to Bartholomew* I believe we haven't met before.
Bartholomew: The CEO of this line told me about you. They showed me your picture, but they didn't tell me your name.
Henrietta: It's Henrietta.
Bartholomew: And you're my boss?
Henrietta: Yes.
Bartholomew: I didn't think mares could be the boss...

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MLP Roleplaying Shenanigans

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Starring me, and Totaldramafan60 along with others that will be mentioned in certain scenes.

Our first scene is from Equestria: 60's Are Fun. I wanted this scene to be about a fun party, where everypony was having a good time, but TDF60 had other plans.

Cupcake: (Comes out of nowhere) I live with my two bestest friends named Dark Moon and Minty Fresh!
Jordan: That's great Cupcake.
Dark: Minty, Cupcake shouldn't be here, if she wants to try beer, she'll die of craziness.(Smiles) I'd acutally like that.
Jordan: Now I see why your name is Dark. What's the next song going to be? Ah, I got it. *Plays...

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Hedgehog In Ponyville: Return To Ponyville Part 10

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Twilight arrived at the facility.

Griffons: *Standing by front door outside of facility*
Twilight: *Lands* Are you da griffons that have to be on the death egg?
Griffon 5: Yes. Where is it?
Twilight: We fly south for a few miles, and we'll get there.
Griffon 6: How long do we have to fly for?
Twilight: No more than five miles.
Griffon 2: Then let's get going.
Applejack: *Flying airplane*
Griffon 7: *Sees airplane* That plane has Nazi markings.
Twilight: *Looking in cockpit* Applejack is flying that plane!
Griffon 4: Who?
Twilight: Somepony that betrayed me. *grabs rocket launcher*
Applejack: *Lands...

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Hedgehog In Ponyville: Return To Ponyville Part 3

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Japa The Nese

We saved Rarity, and were now planning to escape from the Japanese Mafia.

Sean: *Gives Rarity a pistol* Grab a rifle. We're gonna tear this place apart.
Rarity: *Grabs rifle*
Sean: Dash, signal the strike team.
Rainbow Dash: *Gives signal*
Pony Alliance Pilots: *Dropping bombs*
Sean: Let's go. *Running towards explosion*
Japanese Ponies: *Running towards Sean* Shoot them!
Sean: *shoots japanese ponies*
Japa The Nese: What is happening?
Japanese Pony60: Those ponies, and hedgehog we were supposed to kirr are escaping.
Japa The Nese: Then stop them!
Sean: We got to find a boat, any boat!
Rarity: I think...

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Hedgehog In Ponyville: Return To Ponyville part 1

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Title screen! Yay! :D

A not so long time ago in a world ruled by ponies

Theme song: link

HEDGEHOG IN PONYVILLE

Episode XI

Return To Ponyville

Discord has taken over the Prisoner Of War camp where I was sent, with Rainbow Dash, Princess Celestia, and many other ponies.

However, the Nazi Forces were planning on making a space station, called the Death Egg, and they needed more money to finish building this death defying space station.

To make more money, they ordered Discord to sell me, and the other prisoners to a gangster called Japa the Nese, and let Discord keep half the money.

In the atlantic ocean, an aircraft carrier...

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Ponies On The Rails episode 34 part 3

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Pete was interviewed next.

TV Pony: Hello, my name is Jack Jackson. What's yours?
Pete: Pete Reimer.
TV Pony: How old are you?
Pete: Forty three.
TV Pony: And how long have you worked on the U.P?
Pete: Twenty one years.
TV Pony: What do you think of this railroad?
Pete: I really do like it here. Many of the ponies I get to work with are kind, and very hard workers.
TV Pony: Is there anything you dislike about this railroad?
Pete: The rest of my workers, that try to get fired on purpose, or just don't care about anything.
TV Pony: Is there anything you've adjusted to over the past twenty one...