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Name: Night Fire
Gender: Stallion
Race: Pegasus
Personality: Night Fire is a Smart, Outgoing, Adventurous Stallion, who's very protective and careing of his blind little sister as well very in love with the night and it's mistress. (also known as Luna)
Appearance: Pic
Abilities: Flight, Fire Breathing, Fire Bending, and Fire Magic.
Cutie Mark: A Night & star color crescent moon with a endless burning flame.
Family: Tear Drop, his sister. (owned by: hikari_hiwatari)
Job: Night Time Cloud Clearer
Crush: Princess Luna (XP the main reason he clears the clouds at night)
Other Info: His Mane & Tail turns into a magical flame at will, when he's mad, or during the midnight hours.
Bio: Night was born in cloudale like anyother Pegasus along followed by his blind sister, Tear Drop and like many pegasi Night had normal child hood exsep for the fact that he had uqine Power & Abilities for being a pegasus as well did his sister. Now he and sister lives in ponyville while takeing on the job night time cloud clearer.
Night Fire's Profile: Please Comment in Anwser?
 dargox posted over a year ago
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Seanthehedgehog said:
Not to be mean or anything, but why are his legs so long? I like him, but it seems interesting that he has long legs.
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posted over a year ago 
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because he has a tall family.
dargox posted over a year ago
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indeed!
hikari_hiwatari posted over a year ago
hikari_hiwatari said:
i'll post more Information on Tear Drop!! awesome character by the way
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KJBiggestFan said:
Not being mean at all, just giving some advice: Maybe tone down the whole abilities thing. This happens a lot with fan characters and it's dislike-able to lots of people and some will assume your character is a "Mary Sue/Gary Stu" because of it. (Been there, done that.)

It could work under circumstances where he is apart/raised/lives with a special group of ponies who have those abilities or was part of a big story line that goes along with that or requires the powers of special ponies with abilities like that. A unicorn would be more fitting to his race.

Not saying you HAVE to change that, just a tip. Other than that, he's fine to me.
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posted over a year ago 
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that actually sounds like a good idea!
hikari_hiwatari posted over a year ago
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I thank you for thoughts and I will take note of you said. ^_^
dargox posted over a year ago
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You're most welcome <3
KJBiggestFan posted over a year ago
alinah_09 said:
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