it this ok (my mj poem)

in the literacy class you had to make a poem about our favorite artist. i suck at poems so i wanted to ask if this was ok it's ok if you don't like it i'm just glade i was able to write a poem
it's called never forget
we miss you everyday. Oh how people wish you never went away. you were one of the most precious gifts we'll ever know, but i guess it was your time to go. you gave us years of beautiful music. that we'll always love, and we'll never forget that sparkly white glove. it's true you were one of a kind. i'll never forget being six and watching you moonwalk across a stage. i knew you were extraordinary at the age. now years later you are gone, but it's ok because everyone moves on to that better place. a place were you don't have to deal with lies and hate. it's true you will be strongly missed, becasue when michael jackson died the world cried, but we'll never forget