The Siren's Song?

Hi. I write a story about two teenage girls who have to deal with everyday problems while being a mermaid to make things more complicated. It's written in parts like a fanfiction except I made up everything by myself. Will you read it and join the club? It needs more fans and i'll give you props for joining. If you could read it and tell me what you think, i'll give you props for honesty (:
Thanks.
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