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I wrote this poem who's devoted to my ex boyfriend i used to love. So,what do you think?

Sometimes....
When i look into past,i see you,
i see us...
The way you loved me,
the way i loved you,
so pure and strong...
But...
All you gave was built on lies,
your love was fake...
So fake while my love was so pure...
And you left me nothing but pain
and dreams of us....
Us,but we never existed!
Now,when i look at you from a distance,
i think that's the best way i can really see you...

irena83 posted over a year ago

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reneemonique said:

i love it!!:) full of emotion,you can kinda see a picture in your mind of whats going on. your a very good writer:)

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posted over a year ago

Well,yes,i'm very emotional person,deep and i wrote that straight from my heart...Thanks a lot.

irena83 posted over a year ago

brokenheart2828 said:

oddly enough, that exactly how me and my ex were...and i hated how it ended...

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posted over a year ago

Mmh,that's the worst ending. When you think that you know the person,but actually you don't...

irena83 posted over a year ago

lailalove said:

no wordssssssssss can say how amazing it is it fantasticcccccccccccccccccccccc like i said no wordssssssssss

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posted over a year ago

Aw thank you so much.... <3

irena83 posted over a year ago

Abilei said:

I think its good. I also think you hit everything right on the head for the most part.( =

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posted over a year ago

Thanks....

irena83 posted over a year ago

inexplicable said:

It´s a very good poem. You are a good poem writer! ;)

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posted over a year ago

Aw thanks.... ;-)

irena83 posted over a year ago

_Frida_ said:

that was awesome,I felt the same when it happened to me

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posted over a year ago

Thanks.....

irena83 posted over a year ago

Vixie79 said:

Wow, very wavering but the writing itself has a loveliness all its own.

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posted over a year ago

Thank you... <3

irena83 posted over a year ago

You're welcome. ♥

Vixie79 posted over a year ago

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