okay. i Got borede during class and started writing out this story. Dont judge. i did my best!
I weaved in and out of the panicking crowd, Looking for the others. San Francisco was burning up, leaving the town in ruins,looking for more things to eat. Kairi was waving at me from the middle of the crowd. I weaved over to her when malificent threw another fire ball at me. I dodged it and ran towards kairi. " Sora! I found the others!" She pointed, and i could see she was right. Goofy, Donald, Roxas, And Riku were surrounded by Dreameaters. Cute as they are, Their obnoxious. I cut one of them in half just as Riku Grabbed my arm and pointed towards the manhole. " That filthy thing is where were supposed to go?" I nodded. "Thats what He told me!" "Then lets go!" We ran towards the manhole just as the ground shook, Then turned black. "AAH!" I heard roxas scream. The ground felt like wool wrapped in paper. Bouncy,yet sturdy.b The burning skyline of San Francisco dissapeared.
Roxas tripped, Grabbing onto some girls arm, Then realizing she was there, Screamed in surprise. " WHO IS SHE!?!" He yelled over and over again. " Roxas!" I yelled. I Grabbed him by his shoulders, Then shook him. " Shes been there the whole time!" Finally he calmed, Still looking over towards the girl. After i realized she was there, I tried to go up to her, But then some invisible force stopped me. " I cant get through." I pushed up against it. The wall didnt budge. " Because I dont trust you." She finally spoke. " Your sora. The Chosen One of the keyblade. I know your kind." She "kind" like you would say Festering wounds. "Whats wrong with me?" She gave me such a glare of hatred that i took a step back in surprise. " That "Thing" Killed my family, My friends, And EVERYONE I CARED ABOUT!!!! I Always hated that thing, And its master. I never trusted one of your "Kinds" Again." Suddenly i gasped. " Your that girl....Elleis.( A-Lace). The one who used to be The Keyblade master......LIke this one." She nodded. And the Wall pushed me back. " My Keyblade was my only friend. THAT Keyblade in your hands. Your carrying a murdrdurer."
Well thats part one. Hope you enjoyed it!!!
I weaved in and out of the panicking crowd, Looking for the others. San Francisco was burning up, leaving the town in ruins,looking for more things to eat. Kairi was waving at me from the middle of the crowd. I weaved over to her when malificent threw another fire ball at me. I dodged it and ran towards kairi. " Sora! I found the others!" She pointed, and i could see she was right. Goofy, Donald, Roxas, And Riku were surrounded by Dreameaters. Cute as they are, Their obnoxious. I cut one of them in half just as Riku Grabbed my arm and pointed towards the manhole. " That filthy thing is where were supposed to go?" I nodded. "Thats what He told me!" "Then lets go!" We ran towards the manhole just as the ground shook, Then turned black. "AAH!" I heard roxas scream. The ground felt like wool wrapped in paper. Bouncy,yet sturdy.b The burning skyline of San Francisco dissapeared.
Roxas tripped, Grabbing onto some girls arm, Then realizing she was there, Screamed in surprise. " WHO IS SHE!?!" He yelled over and over again. " Roxas!" I yelled. I Grabbed him by his shoulders, Then shook him. " Shes been there the whole time!" Finally he calmed, Still looking over towards the girl. After i realized she was there, I tried to go up to her, But then some invisible force stopped me. " I cant get through." I pushed up against it. The wall didnt budge. " Because I dont trust you." She finally spoke. " Your sora. The Chosen One of the keyblade. I know your kind." She "kind" like you would say Festering wounds. "Whats wrong with me?" She gave me such a glare of hatred that i took a step back in surprise. " That "Thing" Killed my family, My friends, And EVERYONE I CARED ABOUT!!!! I Always hated that thing, And its master. I never trusted one of your "Kinds" Again." Suddenly i gasped. " Your that girl....Elleis.( A-Lace). The one who used to be The Keyblade master......LIke this one." She nodded. And the Wall pushed me back. " My Keyblade was my only friend. THAT Keyblade in your hands. Your carrying a murdrdurer."
Well thats part one. Hope you enjoyed it!!!
I know that this article is different from the others and sorry about this...From the title anyone can understand that I want to make a new game with characters from KINGDOM HEARTS!!!Sora was sleeping after a long time when he defeated Xemnas!He saw a strange dream...he was with Mickey and at the moment Mickey felt down!!!When he got up,he met Donald and then Donald said him that his dream wasn't a dream and his king is dead by a shadow!!!! At this game the bad guys were a new organization XIII with the name "Blacks" and their boss Ansem.Sora made a new group with the name "Blanks"."Blanks" must defeat "Blacks" to make the peace again to the worlds and bring back King Mickey!!! I WANT YOUR OPINION.WILL THIS STORY SUCCEED???
Hint 1: (Namine) "Roxas, do you remember what your true name is?"
Hint 2: Roxas cried at Xion's ending moments
Point Out: "True name" she is referring to Ventus, Roxas' original being before his heart was put to sleep within Sora by his choice.
Point Out: Ventus' heart was separated from Sora and put into his Nobody.
Question for BBS: If Ventus saw what Vanitus looked like before Ventus was possessed the why stay with Sora?
Question for BBS: Vanitus has two Kingdom Keys fused and equipped with a spear? Why?
Point Out: Both Sora and Ventus could use the Kingdom Key but within Ventus' body the dark key has been removed of all traces of darkness around it. (Ventus seems to be Sora's good half...)
Hint 2: Roxas cried at Xion's ending moments
Point Out: "True name" she is referring to Ventus, Roxas' original being before his heart was put to sleep within Sora by his choice.
Point Out: Ventus' heart was separated from Sora and put into his Nobody.
Question for BBS: If Ventus saw what Vanitus looked like before Ventus was possessed the why stay with Sora?
Question for BBS: Vanitus has two Kingdom Keys fused and equipped with a spear? Why?
Point Out: Both Sora and Ventus could use the Kingdom Key but within Ventus' body the dark key has been removed of all traces of darkness around it. (Ventus seems to be Sora's good half...)