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Well,here's my first attempt to a short story :)

“Hey! Stop him! He’s stealing!!!!” the owner shouted. Ron ran as fast as he could, but he didn’t get far. Only a few yards from the shop he collapsed to a large person and fell on the ground. The ring fell next to him and the man understood what was going on. He picked Ron and the ring off the floor and dragged him back to the jewelry shop. “I think this boy has something that’s yours” the man said looking at the shop owner and he gave back the ring. “Thanks” the owner accepted in relief.
“What’s going on?” a familiar...

ok pple tell me REALLY what u think
i'm a MAJOR harry potter fan and i read all the booksmore than 5 times in english and in french and watched all the movies... i swear like more than a HUNDRED times... exept one book ....
i was in love with HP 4 really long and the idea of it to end and the fact that fred and more characters that i love will die KILLED ME!!! i love sirius SOOOOOOO much.. and fred 2 and when dumbledore and sirius died i was DEVISTADED!!! i couldn't stop crying for a MONTH for both of them!!!!
and when the last book was published i bought it in both languages the first day (btw...