okay dont leave bad comments if u dont like this ok i am having a bad day.
May pov
I was almost out the door when Alice said,"Do you want to go hunting?" I turned around to look at my best friend who knows how long it was ago when she saved me from dying in that carwreck it still brought back bad memories and also good ones that was the day I became a vamp. "Sure Alice. Does anyone ealse want to come?" I said. A little girl well a girl younger than me ran up and said "I do please take me, oh and I'm rennesme."she said. then Bella ran up and grabed her arm and she said "No u cannot go with her." Wat's her problem just trying to be nice I thought. "Bellas just not happy today." Edward said. I grabed Alices arm and draged her out of the house I dont want Edward reading my mind it's rude I thought just hoping he would hear. we started running and we found a group of elk. When we jumped over the river I saw my reflection I was really pale with red hair and black eyes I neded to hunt badly.
Hunting
We caught the scent of thew elk then we jumped and ran through the tree branches we spoted them in a couple of minutes. I caught the biggest and Alice cought the second largest. after we drunk the blood we ran back to her house.
At the house
"All I'm saying may is that you need to go shopping.' Alice said. "Could you stop making fun of my clothes Alice." I said she was getting annoying. "Alice is right May those clothes are ugly just like yopu." Bella said. "Oh I am not taking this Bella, oh and also MIND YOUR OWN BUISNESS." I yelled. "WHY DON'T YOU MAKE ME VAGE." she screamed back. I hate my last name it rhymes with may which I dont like. "That's it see ya," then I turned to Alice,"I feel so sorry for you Alice Bella is worst then Rose." then I started walking out the door then she threw something at me but I ducked just in time. "Nice try." I said then walked out to my car "Mabye I should join those Ittalien scum at least they would show me some respect." I said then I got in my car and went to Seattle to the mall I just sat at the food court texting.
May pov
I was almost out the door when Alice said,"Do you want to go hunting?" I turned around to look at my best friend who knows how long it was ago when she saved me from dying in that carwreck it still brought back bad memories and also good ones that was the day I became a vamp. "Sure Alice. Does anyone ealse want to come?" I said. A little girl well a girl younger than me ran up and said "I do please take me, oh and I'm rennesme."she said. then Bella ran up and grabed her arm and she said "No u cannot go with her." Wat's her problem just trying to be nice I thought. "Bellas just not happy today." Edward said. I grabed Alices arm and draged her out of the house I dont want Edward reading my mind it's rude I thought just hoping he would hear. we started running and we found a group of elk. When we jumped over the river I saw my reflection I was really pale with red hair and black eyes I neded to hunt badly.
Hunting
We caught the scent of thew elk then we jumped and ran through the tree branches we spoted them in a couple of minutes. I caught the biggest and Alice cought the second largest. after we drunk the blood we ran back to her house.
At the house
"All I'm saying may is that you need to go shopping.' Alice said. "Could you stop making fun of my clothes Alice." I said she was getting annoying. "Alice is right May those clothes are ugly just like yopu." Bella said. "Oh I am not taking this Bella, oh and also MIND YOUR OWN BUISNESS." I yelled. "WHY DON'T YOU MAKE ME VAGE." she screamed back. I hate my last name it rhymes with may which I dont like. "That's it see ya," then I turned to Alice,"I feel so sorry for you Alice Bella is worst then Rose." then I started walking out the door then she threw something at me but I ducked just in time. "Nice try." I said then walked out to my car "Mabye I should join those Ittalien scum at least they would show me some respect." I said then I got in my car and went to Seattle to the mall I just sat at the food court texting.
WTF?! Sparkly vampires?!
Is it just me, or does it seem like most of the Twilight fans feel that they have to write in capitol letters to get their points across? Personally i find it really annoying.
It's also a fact that if you write in capitol letters IT TAKES LONGER FOR THE BRAIN TO PROCESS THE INFORMATION and therefore takes longer to read. Originally all the road signs (In England anyway) were written in capitol letters, until they were redone and someone found that smaller case letters were quicker to read. So they changed it.
So next time you feel like shouting because your book sucks, don't write in capitols, but put...
*shouting*... at the begining of your speech.
Thank you. That is all.
It's also a fact that if you write in capitol letters IT TAKES LONGER FOR THE BRAIN TO PROCESS THE INFORMATION and therefore takes longer to read. Originally all the road signs (In England anyway) were written in capitol letters, until they were redone and someone found that smaller case letters were quicker to read. So they changed it.
So next time you feel like shouting because your book sucks, don't write in capitols, but put...
*shouting*... at the begining of your speech.
Thank you. That is all.
Sorcerer's Stone
