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Three's a Crowd chapter 5 Heroin (1/10)(SPN)

posted by HaleyDewit

Meg dropped the paper-knife and hurried back to Cas. He was still conscious, but he looked very pale and he had trouble keeping his eyes open. Meg slapped him softly in the face to make sure he wouldn’t fall asleep.
“Get dressed” Anna said. She threw some clothes at Meg and then stepped to Cas. She bent through her knees and touched his forehead. “He’s burning up again”
“He’s getting sick again?” Meg asked, trying not to sound worried, while she put on the clothes had given her.
Anna nodded. “Apparently human life is very hard for him. Seems like he can’t take a lot” She looked up at Meg. “The sooner you take care of that wound, the better”
“Why can’t I just take him to the hospital? He has legal papers” Meg objected.
“Because the two of you need to keep a low profile” Anna explained and she sounded a little nervous. “Kevin is after you and I don’t trust Balthazar. I remember what he said when you were in prison and it’s bugging me. Unfortunately I can’t keep an eye on him 24/7” She put her hand on Cas’ chest and then she did the same to Meg.
“Aaaahhh!” Meg gasped. “What did you do?”
“I made sure no angel can track you down any longer, including myself. This house now belongs to you. Don’t ask any questions. All you have to know is that I took care of it” Anna explained. “You are on your own from now on”

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Doppel Crossed chapter 18 The Wakeup Call (1/10)(TVD)

posted by HaleyDewit

It was early morning, Saturday and Liz was gone to the office. Caroline rose from her bed and put on her dressing gown and slippers.
She walked to the window and opened to let the fresh air ventilate her room.
Bonnie, who was still asleep, felt the cold wind and shivered. She opened her eyes and frowned.
“Sorry” Caroline said. “Sometimes I forget people get cold”
“Don’t worry about it” Bonnie replied, getting up as well. “I used to be a lot colder, when all those spirits where inside me”
“How are things with you and Elena?” Caroline asked careful. “She didn’t seem to...

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Doppel Crossed chapter 14 This is War (3/10)(The Vampire Diaries)

posted by HaleyDewit

Damon walked Elena away from the dance. Actually he was walking and kissing her at the same time. They reached the stairs on the football field and Damon clenched Elena’s butt and lifted her up.
“Damon, everyone can see us” Elena mumbled uneasy, while Damon’s hot and wet kisses made her body feel like it was set on fire. She gave up resisting and threw her arms around Damon’s neck. She turned around Damon and pushed him down. She sat on his lap and kissed him again.
She wanted to open his button-down, when she gasped and her eyes bulged.
“Elena!” Damon exclaimed. “Did I do something?”...

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Doppel Crossed chapter 14 This is War (2/10)(The Vampire Diaries)

posted by HaleyDewit

Bonnie was sitting in Indian style on the floor of Caroline’s room. A book was lying open and three candles were surrounding it. She vowed her hands and whispered the words on the pages.
The front door slowly opened and someone slowly walked upstairs. The latch of the door in Caroline’s room went down and the door slowly opened.
“I thought you couldn’t do magic anymore”
“Oh my God!” Bonnie shrieked. She quickly got up and turned on the light. She bent and blew out the candles. “What the hell are you doing here?” she whispered loud and reproaching.
“I missed you at the Homecoming...

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Doppel Crossed chapter 14 This is War (1/10)(The Vampire Diaries)

posted by HaleyDewit

Klaus and Caroline were reaching the top of a 1050 feet tall tower. Caroline had no idea why she was going along with Klaus; all she knew was that she had to go with him.
Klaus let go of her and took the compulsion away. Caroline shook her head and turned to Klaus. “Where are we? Where did you take me?” she demanded to know.
“Vous êtes à Paris, mademoiselle” Klaus answered with a charming smile. He bowed, took Caroline’s hand and kissed it. His lips had barely touched her soft skin, when she jerked her hand.
“I don’t know what your angle is” Caroline started as she walked backwards....

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Doppel Crossed chapter 13 Homecoming (3/10)(The Vampire Diaries)

posted by HaleyDewit

Veronica parked her car in front of the old building. She walked out of the car and Rachel, who had come with her, followed her. Veronica walked up to the door and opened. “Get inside” she told Rachel. After Rachel entered Veronica locked the door. She waved at the people in the back and they stopped with what they were doing. One of the guys came their way.
“Hello, Veronica” he said.
“Hello, Derek” Veronica replied. “How’s it going?”
“It’s going very good. They are getting really good. I think we have a real chance in beating those…”
“Abominations” Veronica said...

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Dopple Crossed chapter 12 Home Sweet Home (3/10)(The Vampire Diaries)

posted by HaleyDewit

The door of the Boarding House opened and Damon rushed downstairs. He had expected Katherine or Stefan, hoped for Elena, but neither of those three were standing in the doorway.
Bonnie raised her hand. “Before you get all hostile on me, let me explain”
Damon took a step back.
“As I’ve told you I know when I’m part of a conversation” Bonnie started. “Last night you and Elena had a fight, because you’re having trouble dealing with your issues. You and I both know most of that is on me”
Damon sighed annoyed. “Will you cut to the chase, please?”
“I want to help you” Bonnie...

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Doppel Crossed chapter 10 Secrets and Revelations (2/10)(The Vampire Diaries)

posted by HaleyDewit

Damon raced inside the hospital, Elena tightly in his arms. A female doctor walked their way while she signed at a nurse. The nurse pushed a stretcher in their direction. While Damon lay her down, the doctor started asking some question.
“What happened?” was her most urgent question.
“She…she’s sick” Damon said trembling. “She has cancer. I took her home, but I shouldn’t have. She should’ve stayed here”
The doctor shone with a small flash light in Elena’s eyes. “Don’t worry, sir. She’s just sleeping” She looked up. “Who’s treating her?”
“I don’t know”...

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Dopple Crossed chapter 5 The Intruder (5/10)(The Vampire Diaries)

posted by HaleyDewit

“You sure no one’s going to bust us here?” Derek asked a little concerned. They were standing in the gym.
“Positive” Damon said, with his eyes on a paper. “According to this paper there are no gym classes for the next couple of hours, so I think we’re good”
Derek nodded. “Okay” he said, still not sounding very reassured.
“Look, I don’t want to do this, so shut up and stop whining” Damon said short. Derek looked at him a little upset. “Sorry. I’m a little peevish. I wasn’t expecting to see you ever again and it definitely wasn’t on my Christmas list”
“Yeah,...

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Dopple Crossed chapter 3 Cry For Help (3/10)(The Vampire Diaries)

posted by HaleyDewit

Bonnie woke up after another rough night. Katherine wouldn’t be here until sundown. She was up to something. Bonnie didn’t need her magic skills to feel that.
Why didn’t Katherine just let her die? It was obvious no one was missing her. But maybe Katherine believed killing her wouldn’t be punishment enough. Maybe she wanted to make her suffer. After all Bonnie had made Damon suffer. But she wanted to make it right. Not because she suddenly started caring for Damon; she just wanted her best friend Elena back and for that she had to make it up to both of them. Though playing with their...

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Dopple Crossed chapter 3 Cry For Help (1/10)(The Vampire Diaries)

posted by HaleyDewit

Damon opened his eyes, but couldn’t see a thing. He tried to get up, but couldn’t move. “Elena?” Then he realized Elena was in the room next to his, probably fast asleep, so she wouldn’t hear him. He felt a sudden weight on the bed, but couldn’t rotate his head to check who it was that was crawling towards him. But it was Elena. Of course it was Elena. Who else would it be? She hooked her fingers in his and cuddles her face in his neck. He felt her warm breath on his cold flesh.
“I can’t move” Damon said hoarse.
“Sssh…Everything’s going to be fine”
Damon’s eyes widened...

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Dopple Crossed chapter 2 Getting to know you (1/10)(The Vampire Diaries)

posted by HaleyDewit

Gabe parked his car in front of the police station and looked aside at his wife. “You sure you want to do this?” he asked soft. “I could just go in there alone and you can wait for me” Rachel shook her head. “No, I, eh, I need to see it for myself” she said with a trembling yet determined voice. She unfastened her seatbelt and stepped out of the car, Gabe doing the same. He walked around the car and hooked his arm in his wife’s. They walked up the porch and entered the station. They headed for the desk when sheriff Forbes noticed them. She handed some papers to one of her deputies...

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What Happened in Colorado chapter 9 Seduction (2/10)(Supernatural)

posted by HaleyDewit

Cas walked out of the room, while the nurses tied Daphne onto the bed. He leaned against the wall and felt his heart beating in his chest.
“It’s my fault” he heard Zoey said. She was leaning against the opposite wall. “I told her you only stayed with her because you feel sorry for her. And now look what she’s done to herself. What kind of sister am I? I know she’s not well and yet I leave her alone?”
Cas walked towards and lay his hand on her arm. “It’s not your fault, Zoey. You did the best you could”
Zoey shook her head. “I can’t do this anymore. It’s too much”...

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Three's a Crowd chapter 9 I want to play a game (1/10)(SPN)

posted by HaleyDewit

Cas and Meg reached the surface of the pool and Meg held her breath. She had forgotten how good Cas looked when he was all…wet. Cas took advantage of her inability to speak.
“I’m really sorry for everything I’ve said to you today” he began. “I never meant to say those things. I was thinking something, but what came out was the exact opposite. And then Balthazar said he and Kevin had put up a plan to kill you and I knew it was a setup, but I just had to come”
“Doesn’t matter” Meg said fast. “Let’s get out of here” she suggested. She freed herself and swum to the edge,...

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Three's a Crowd chapter 8 The Ferris Wheel (5/10)(SPN)

posted by HaleyDewit

Balthazar looked around. He was standing on an open field, after he had been summoned.
“Did you come alone? Or should I expect that bossy ginger to pop up, too?” Kevin shouted.
“What do you need me for?” Balthazar wanted to know.
“The question is, what do you need me for” Kevin commented. “See, I have been watching you trying to waste Castiel and I have seen you fail over and over again. Well, your methods suck, even you have to admit that”
“I’m not really in the mood for an analysis of how much I suck at killing my brother” Balthazar replied, slightly sarcastic.
“That’s...

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Three's a Crowd chapter 8 The Ferris Wheel (2/10)(SPN)

posted by HaleyDewit

As she walked outside she bumped into Dean. “Oh, you’re back” she noticed indifferent. “He’s awake” she filled the brothers in. “He’s your problem now. I’m out” She pushed Sam aside and walked away.
“Are we allowed to go in?” Sam wondered, pointing at the door. “I mean, all of us?”
“Why don’t you two go first, then I’ll go find Meg” Jo suggested.
“Why?” Dean asked.
“Because she seems upset” Jo answered obvious.
“So?” Dean shrugged uncaring. Jo rolled her eyes. “Some guys…” she muttered between her teeth, before taking off.
Dean opened the...

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Three's a Crowd chapter 8 The Ferris Wheel (1/10)(SPN)

posted by HaleyDewit

Cas opened his eyes and rolled them to left. Meg was sitting next to his bed. He looked down and noticed he was holding something in his hand. He rolled his eyes to the right and saw the machines and the perfusion leading some kind of fluid medication into his veins. He frowned and tried to pull all threads out of his body.
“No, Cas, don’t do that” Meg tried to stop him. “You have to get better”
Meg didn’t understand. Medication or drugs was what triggered it. He wasn’t himself when he took them.
Cas opened his mouth to explain, but something entirely different was said.
“Get...

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Toxic Fanfic Reviews! Episode 4, Sonic, Tails, And Knuckles Go Fishing.

posted by deathding

Is it THAT HARD TO WRITE A STORY ABOUT A FAST HEDGEHOG!??!?!?!?!?!

The actual title is called, "Sonic and Tails and Knuckles go fishing." which is just horrible grammar to ignore commas.

You know a fan fiction is going to be AMAZING when there is even an error IN THE GODDAMN TITLE! >.<

Please, just shoot me now! I quit! I give up on my life, now please let me go!

......Fine, I'll review this....

Besides, it's not like me to do that anyways. BUT, I am warning you. People like this exist, people that write such horrid stories and call it a fan fiction.... It blows my mind! And today, I crush one of the worst ones out there.

It's time to look at, "Sonic, Tails,...

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The Host Chapter 21 Light in the Dark (4/10)(The Vampire Diaries)

posted by HaleyDewit

“We’re home, Damon” Elena said. She and Stefan were helping Damon reach the porch, something he’d rather do alone, thinking he’d recovered enough.
“I’m going to open the door” Stefan said. He let go of Damon and ran to the door and opened it. Then he walked back at Damon and Elena. When he wanted to help Damon enter Damon pushed his arm away.
“I don’t need your help” he said pissed, avoiding to look at him.
Stefan looked helplessly at his ex, but she gave him a ‘what did you expect’ kind of look back. She helped Damon enter the house and Stefan walked behind them like...