Does this sound like an interesrting idea for a novel/movie?

If you had one last shot to redeem yourself in the eyes of your child, to what extent would you go?

After returning from Iraq, where he was forced to come to terms with the fragility of life, Devin decides to seek immortality by creating and an enduring legacy like the Spanish painter Francisco Goya. Suddenly, HIV/AIDS snatches his future. Shortly after that his high school girlfriend, Crystal, and four year old son, Jeremiah, (who do not have HIV/AIDS), show up on his doorstep. Thus begins Devin’s desperate attempt to be better than his own mother and father, and make a lasting impression on his son before death takes him away forever.


During his journey he encounters many challenges and difficulties, including drug addiction, depression, and, most trying of all, the love and sexual advances of his son’s mother. Will he destroy her and his son, or will he leave them a legacy of which they can be proud? This is the thrilling, frightening, and heartbreaking story of a man fighting to be a man against all odds.


I am a graduate of Saint Mary’s College of California and a former professional athlete. Through these experiences, I developed an exceptional work ethic and have learned that persistence and hard work pay off.


I am very interested in your evaluation of Death is a Locomotive, and greatly appreciate any recommendations that you have to offer. Thank you for your time and assistance. I humbly await your response.