Ok, I just came up with this, so its quite unworked if you know what I mean. I figure, I should get it out there and off my chest before I change my mind about a thousand times and this way, your criticisms should (hopefully) help me to edit it. Also, I havent thought of a title, so if you can think of a suitible one I'd love to hear it. ok, be honest:
Hidden words drip
From tooth to tooth
Edging closer, closer.
Lips sealed shut. Trapped.
Minute gaps are found
Oozing through as water.
Rolling down chin,
Picking up pace,
Growing, Changing, evolve
It drops from brink.
Falling, speeding
Splash! and the ripples grow.
Hidden words drip
From tooth to tooth
Edging closer, closer.
Lips sealed shut. Trapped.
Minute gaps are found
Oozing through as water.
Rolling down chin,
Picking up pace,
Growing, Changing, evolve
It drops from brink.
Falling, speeding
Splash! and the ripples grow.
My Life
Eat
Sleep
Repeat
Don't feel
Don’t love
Those bring pain
Don’t feel, don’t love they say
Pain comes, and pain is feared
But I already feel pain
Love is Like a Butterfly
I heard a saying once.
That love is like a butterfly.
Hold it too close and you'll crush it.
Hold it too lose and it'll fly away.
I have lost my love this way.
If only I knew about it before.
But things happen for a reason.
That philosophy will never change.
My love is still out there.
So I will take my net and catch him.
Even if it takes,
One hundred years.
Empty
Can't Feel
Can't Love
Can't Cry
Can't Sing
Can't Speak
Can't Touch
When You've Been Hurt So Bad,
You don't feel at all.
Blackness
What eats away space?
What makes you think of pain?
What takes place of light?
What always takes place of fights?
What makes people cry?
What is a mark of death?
Dark I say.
Blackness
Eat
Sleep
Repeat
Don't feel
Don’t love
Those bring pain
Don’t feel, don’t love they say
Pain comes, and pain is feared
But I already feel pain
Love is Like a Butterfly
I heard a saying once.
That love is like a butterfly.
Hold it too close and you'll crush it.
Hold it too lose and it'll fly away.
I have lost my love this way.
If only I knew about it before.
But things happen for a reason.
That philosophy will never change.
My love is still out there.
So I will take my net and catch him.
Even if it takes,
One hundred years.
Empty
Can't Feel
Can't Love
Can't Cry
Can't Sing
Can't Speak
Can't Touch
When You've Been Hurt So Bad,
You don't feel at all.
Blackness
What eats away space?
What makes you think of pain?
What takes place of light?
What always takes place of fights?
What makes people cry?
What is a mark of death?
Dark I say.
Blackness