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posted by Booyahboy
Ok, I just came up with this, so its quite unworked if you know what I mean. I figure, I should get it out there and off my chest before I change my mind about a thousand times and this way, your criticisms should (hopefully) help me to edit it. Also, I havent thought of a title, so if you can think of a suitible one I'd love to hear it. ok, be honest:

Hidden words drip
From tooth to tooth
Edging closer, closer.

Lips sealed shut. Trapped.
Minute gaps are found
Oozing through as water.

Rolling down chin,
Picking up pace,
Growing, Changing, evolve

It drops from brink.
Falling, speeding
Splash! and the ripples grow.
posted by Cinders
I need help with this short story. I'm thinking of turning it in for one of my projects for my short story class, but it needs heavy refining, and a better title. Can you guys help me out?



Drowning

It was 2:45 and the bartender slid Ryan’s sixth tequila shot in an hour across the bar.

“You sure you don’t want to slow down there, partner?” asked the bartender warily.

Ryan downed the shot and slammed the glass back down on the bar, staring at the ceiling as he swayed on the bar stool. But he nodded. “Yeah,” he said. “Yeah, I’m just gonna… sit here for a while.”

The tender shrugged...
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posted by Cinders
The Wall

Wilson gazed up at The Wall in front of him in awe. It seemed to stretch up for miles into the blue sky. Every day he sat there against that Wall with his inhaler hanging around his neck and his faithful golden retriever, Macaroni, panting loudly next to him. Sometimes he would stare at the sky and watch them float lazily and arrogantly over The Wall while Macaroni frolicked in the field and barked at butterflies. He would listen to the children, laughing and playing, and he would close his eyes really tight and wish for a way to join them.

Today was different, though. Today, he was...
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posted by greekthegeek
My Life

Eat
Sleep
Repeat
Don't feel
Don’t love
Those bring pain
Don’t feel, don’t love they say
Pain comes, and pain is feared
But I already feel pain



Love is Like a Butterfly

I heard a saying once.
That love is like a butterfly.
Hold it too close and you'll crush it.
Hold it too lose and it'll fly away.


I have lost my love this way.
If only I knew about it before.
But things happen for a reason.
That philosophy will never change.


My love is still out there.
So I will take my net and catch him.
Even if it takes,
One hundred years.



Empty

Can't Feel
Can't Love
Can't Cry
Can't Sing
Can't Speak
Can't Touch
When You've Been Hurt So Bad,
You don't feel at all.


Blackness

What eats away space?
What makes you think of pain?
What takes place of light?
What always takes place of fights?
What makes people cry?
What is a mark of death?
Dark I say.
Blackness